This is absolutely non PC work , and the H is obviously an emotional cripple in addition to being Alpha, domineering, and arrogant -- but isn't this why we read HP? Clearly, the h is whipped. This is how the H was able to get her to do what he wants, even if it goes against her principles. What is especially noteworthy is the authors depiction of the gradual erosion of the h's personal dignity, sacrificed for love and desire. This may be what other readers object to: it was torture to read the book and see h chuck bits and pieces of her self-respect a little bit at a time. There were so many times while reading the book when I said to myself, "No!! Don't do it, don't agree to this dastardly arrangement!"
Admittedly, the groveling is too brief, but nonetheless satisfying in the way it was described. Personally, I would've enjoyed reading the H get more of his just deserts, however it is a somewhat longer book, and I have no doubt that the HP editors had something to do with chopping the end. There is no doubt the h demonstrates her strength of character in the end, and there is a very nice epilogue. I can't stand a book without an epilogue.
Highly recommend it if you can stand the angst. If you want a sweeter, more lighthearted read, probably not the best book for you.