The Proposition

by taylorikari

Hermione Granger returns to Hogwarts for her eighth year and gets resorted into the one house she never thought she'd be in. And she just so happens to get close to two wizards who make turn everything she knew about herself, upside down.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Fiction, M M F, Enemies To Lovers, Adult

387 pages, ebook

Published December 8, 2021

Reviews

[Taylor Thomas]

I wrote it so...

Updating this review in 2025, yall give me a break, this was during covid and I was having a mental breakdown which can be shown by me saying daddy Draco and not proofreading lmaoooo I'm so sorry

[Lexie]

I am all about the Draco/Hermione/Theo action. Also Pansy being more than the House slag, Hermione telling Harry and Ginny she is through being stepped on, Hermione REALIZING that she spent a lot of time compromising to be friends with Harry and Ron, Draco getting support, Theo being a flirty dork, Study Time is Smexy, Hermione as a Slytherin, and no appearance by Ron...except by Howler. (Sorry Rupert Grint, still love you but Ron is still the absolute worst).

[Stefani Tomova]

ten points to Slytherin

[Ceilidhchaos]

This is my favorite Dreomione - Draco x Hermione x Theo story with the exception of the author's other story - The Proposition. It's brilliant and I have reread it 5 times. I love love love it. Hot smut. Angst. Real PTSD from the War stuff. Mothering Narcissa. It's beautiful 😍

“I always knew hell would be a proper good time.” -- Theo Nott

[Sarah Elaine]

I enjoyed the raw dirty smut in this, but I really wish this had more plot. There was almost no conflict at all it, actually the literal only conflict was howler and Ginny/Harry drama. It also had some grammar issues , which I can usually ignore, but it led to some confusion in moments and took me out of the scene. But I really did enjoy Draco/Theo/Hermione's relationship.

🌶🌶🌶🌶

[Butthisbook]

I loved it!! It was so cute and hot. I loved the relationship Theo, Draco and Hermione formed. I could have done without the daddy Draco bit but other than that it was perfect! I need more of Dreomione!!! 🤗

[Alexis]

I’m not usually into MM action but this was kinda cute 🥰

[Brooke]

4.5
This was really good! I really liked how this felt with all their trauma. I loved how their relationship grew as well. Theo is honestly one of my favorite characters, Thanks to fan fiction. I don’t love how she stops talking to Harry and Ron and everyone but oh well. I do love some Ron bashing. Even though I love his character. This is also smutty so be warned and it deals with heavier topics as well.

[Lost]

No plot, character development, or anything.
Daddy draco......
Went from 0-100 way way way too fast.
Narcissa gifting a weird throuple sex book????
Was all over the place
Had potential, but it's a no for me.

[Rose. ❁ taylor's version]

i read the whole thing in 30 minutes

[Kate]

first dreomione fic….. it would’ve been 5 stars but i can’t condone her calling him “daddy draco” i just can’t

[Elisha LeBrun]

Do I have a problem? Yes. Do I want help? No.

[Athena]

I’m a feminist I swear

[loveofafairy]

Dramione and Theo make a nice triad
Score: 9/10
Spice: 2/5
Would reread: yes

This was actually some good fanfiction material. It had the entire vibe of "the war fucked us up" and the characters didn't seem to pretend that everything is fine and dandy. I also appreciated the new reason for Draco taking the mark. It is usually Narcissa that he is trying to save, so having Theo as a reason was interesting. All the Ron bashing was obviously a gem. But I found it slightly weird to see such an active and big Ginny and Harry hate.

[Ceilidhchaos]

This is brilliant. Do you want hot 8th year triad fun? CPTSD from the War? Ron slander? This is incredible and I love love love it. Someone should illustrate it. It's sooooooo good.

[Ceilidhchaos]

Dreomione Draco x Theo x Hermione
8th year at Hogwarts
Hermione is resorted into Slytherin.
Fast burn.
Ron bashing.
One of my favorites.

[Courtney Schira]

“But she would absolutely pray at the altar of Draco Malfoy and Theodore Nott.”

Same girl, same

[Rebekah W.]

Cute smutty read.

[Marissa]

2.5

short, quick, easy, nothing ground breaking

[Kimberly Minne]

A nice and smutty read for getting over the end of Onyx Storm

[Priscilla]

My first Drameone and I loved it. The smut was incredible. The plot wasn't too heavy it was all very nice. Also personally really easy to identify to Hermione. Didn't give it 5 stars because I wasnt consumed by it but it was amazing!

[sianreads97]

I am so sorry, I wanted to love this so much as my first Dreomione fan fic. And I hate giving bad reviews to fan fics as I would not have the dedication or motivation to write one. So well done to the author for actually taking the time to think of this story, write and publish this fanfic.

Things I liked:
1. Hermione being resorted into slytherin
2. Hermione, Ginny and Harry realising that both sides of the war were at fault
3. The roles they fitted into after graduation with Theo owning a muggle bookshop, Draco having a potion apothecary and Hermione being a lecture of a ‘muggle head start’ class at Hogwarts

However, there were so many things I disliked. WHERE WAS THE ANGST? The build up? Like Hermione was resorted into Slytherin and then BAM Theo and Draco were like HEEEY girl 🥵…. Umm no? Like Hermione wouldn’t have been so willing and I feel like this could have added to the lacklustre plot. GIVE ME TENSION! The spice was cringey and I nearly DNF’ed the first mention of “Daddy Draco” at 45% in. Like ABSOLUTELY NOT, there’s a way to do the sub/dom kink without being cringe.

The element of PTSD from the war was in my opinion skimmed over, it’s like as soon as the polyamorous relationship started everyone’s trauma disappeared? Which is not realistic at all. I think the plot could have been fleshed out to give the sub-tropes of PTSD the depth it deserved.

Lastly, the syntax in this made me want to throw my fucking kindle. Like proofread - using the wrong pronouns at points really pissed me off.

All in all, it’s a no from me. I’m sorry.

[kenna rae Benson]

Eooooow theomione?? Yes please

[Beatriz Neves]

Maybe I went with the wrong expectation… I was expecting a love story between Hermionie and Draco and with Theo in the mix. A spicy story for sure, with SMUT, but also with deep dialogues, plot twists, revelations! But it’s basically a porno !! The premises was so good, Hermionie being sorted in slytherin, but we barely touch on that, we have very superficial plot that seems to run 200km/h to be able to spend infinite time in the s*x scenes ! And they basically all the same ! The story is weak.
I have to say, if it’s meant to be only a porno book and nothing else, it’s perfect ! If that was the intention I’m wrong I admit it.

[Hayden Hamby]

I loved this. It was adorable; warming my cold, dead heart with a flirty and loving Theo and a kind and devoted Draco. It’s kind of the perfect rendition of if after the war, everyone important completely changed their minds about Voldemort’s rantings. Which we know, logically, is almost impossible but it’s really cute to imagine.

This is spicy with some harsher than just vanilla elements.

But the writing is great and the story was really good.

[zoeci]

(2.5) nice short read! very hot. the "unghh yes daddy draco" was horrible. i didn't like how it starts with D and T being super mean and practically bullying H, that never gets addressed or resolved we just see H being "sassy" and then in a very 0 to 100 they start fucking. some cringe scenes, lack of interesting plot and immediate sex-love don't let me rate this any higher sorry. it's not bad, just very basic

[magaly]

3.5 ⭐️

dreomione fanfics have me in a chokehold at the moment 💀

[Harley Orion]

The "daddy Draco" killed it for me honestly...

[Clémence Fay]

DNF ! The daddy Draco was a yikes for me

[Cierra McCauley (Cierra's Corner)]

This was Great! I loved this fic! It was a throuple, Draco, Harmione, and Theo. I lovvvved it! It was a good pace. It’s very sex & Spicy, but there is plot. This one has a bit of play, bdsm vibes. I enjoyed it. The only thing that tripped me up was the Daddy Draco bit. Every time I read this words i cringed, involuntarily. But I moved past it because the scenes were so hot. I’m so sad it’s over..

Some of my favorite quotes:

“Fuck Granger, how does your hair not strangle you.” Malfoy snapped

He reached out to touch one of her curls. But where Theo had been gentle, almost reverent with the strand, Malfoy yanked on it hard and she smacked his hand away.

“If you’re so worried about poor Theo here then you can kiss him.” Malfoy snapped.

Hermione took in his bee-stung lips, his hair mussed up from her hands raking through it. His eyes were lidded and flitting back between her mouth and her neck as if trying to decide where to assault next.

If Draco Malfoy kissed like he wanted to drown her, Theo Nott kissed her like she was a goddess meant to be worshipped. Every lick and nip was special and she took them all, hungrily.

With Theo it was easy. He was warm sunlight that dappled over her, over anyone really who fell into his golden orbit. But Draco, he was an ice storm, threatening to smother anyone with shards of glass if they got too close.

Me. I did. I kept you all together, helped you through your hard days, your low moments. And then when it’s finally, finally my turn to fall apart, you all disappear.

“Granger, I would listen to Theo, he’s really not pleased with you,” Draco said,