Unnecessarily long review incoming:
This book is a useful, if not essential, work, analysing particular aspects of how Karl Marx wrote. Without reading this book, Marx is still very much accessible, but anyone hoping to conduct a serious study of Marx’s writing would benefit from some analysis of how he wrote.
In writing Marx’s Literary Style, Silva argues that Marx consciously adopted a particular style in order to communicate his ideas. Marx “is not content with the clean conscience that comes from having used the scientifically correct terms” but rather his writing uses “every linguistic resource at its disposal.” Marx wrote not just to understand the world, but to change it.
Some critics of Marx point to his use of imagery and metaphor in order to slander him as unscientific. The same accusation was made of Trotsky by James Burnham in 1940: “you have a too literary conception of proof, of evidence; that you deceive yourself into treating persuasive rhetoric as logical demonstration, a brilliant metaphor as argument.” Both Marx and Trotsky use such tactics to the same effect: to make clear and concrete difficult and abstract concepts. As Silva writes “His metaphors constitute an additional expenditure of verbal energy that ensures effective communication with the reader. Many scientific writers consider additional expenditures of this kind inappropriate and silly; they do not seem to aspire to communication - in fact, some take an unhealthy pleasure in not being understood”
Marx was certainly interested in style. In a letter to Ferdinand Lasalle, explaining his lateness in producing for publication his work A Contribution to the Critique of Political Economy, Marx writes: “the material was to hand and all that I was concerned with was the form,” and further “I shall have finished about 4 weeks from now, having only just begun the actual writing.” This after fifteen years of work (the Critique being intended as a preview for his later magnum opus, Capital).
Silva in particular identifies several key aspects of Marx’s literary style: the “Architectonic of Science,” the “expression of the dialectic,” Marx’s use of metaphor, his ability to render the abstract concrete, his polemicism and mockery, and his use of irony. At just over 120 pages, and three main chapters, Marx’s Literary Style is quite short - and the key substance of the book is found in chapter two. This single 53 page chapter contains the actual explanation and analysis of Marx’s style and could perhaps stand on its own if one were interested only in the key points.
The first chapter describes Marx’s origins as a writer. Perhaps the most enlightening point here is that Marx started off as a journalist, writing on politics and philosophy, before becoming a theorist in his own right. He originated as someone whose task was not just to record ideas, but to communicate them effectively to his audience. Other points raised here - his failed efforts at poetry, his study of the classics, are more in the realm of interesting biographical details.
The second chapter, divided into sections each analysing different features, begins with the “Architectonic of Science.” This was perhaps the weakest point, and the most poorly explained, but essentially seems to outline that Marx’s analysis of capitalism across his entire oeuvre is one internally consistent system. As Marx writes to Engels, “the advantage of my writings is that they are an artistic whole.”
“The expression of the dialectic, or the dialectic of expression” is a far more interesting section, pointing to a sentence structure used time and again by Marx “in which opposite terms are neatly drawn in an antagonistic correlation before being fused in a synthetic phrase.” What this amounts to is an explanation of things in a dialectical way - drawing out how seemingly opposite concepts depend on and presuppose one another. This type of wordplay isn’t just ornamental, but both explains the immediate subject being discussed and engages the reader in thinking dialectically. Numerous examples are given, such as “All our invention and progress seem to result in endowing material forces with intellectual life, and in stultifying human life into a material force.” Or, for example “The mortgage the peasant has on heavenly possessions guarantees the mortgage the bourgeois has on peasant possessions” Marx biographer Francis Wheen, in criticising this technique, nevertheless points to one particularly famous example: right before Marx described religion as the opium of the people, he says “Religious suffering is at one and the same time the expression of real suffering and a protest against real suffering.”
In the third part of the chapter, Silva speaks not just about Marx’s use of metaphors (about which he earlier states that “nothing contributes to the comprehensibility of a theory like a fitting metaphor”), but also presents a very solid argument that too often Marxists have treated his metaphors as theories. For example, he argues that “base and superstructure” and “ideological reflection” are not theories in their own right but only metaphors to explain a broader theory of ideology - metaphors which, though useful, break down when studied on their own and out of context. Base and superstructure, for example, is used to point out how a society’s ideology is built on a material “base” - its economy and so on. But this fails to bring out the full nuance of how a society’s ideology develops in response to the development of its economic system, and how this ideology is in turn used to ensure that development. The ideological superstructure and the material base it is built upon are not static forces but are ever changing and developing, and this metaphor only seeks to help readers to understand this, while the full theory is elsewhere.
Finally, the chapter discusses other features - Marx’s spirit of mockery, his indignance, his spirited attacks on his opponents, how he renders the abstract concrete. All are clear throughout his work. One only needs to view just how many of his works’ titles begin with the words “A critique of…” to see his polemical spirit in action, for example.
The third chapter seeks to appraise Marx’s works on the basis of the features laid out in chapter two. One particularly noteworthy example is on the Communist Manifesto. Here, Silva argues, it is clear that Marx (alongside Engels) was adopting a particular literary style to achieve a desired effect: “the apocalyptic presentation of events, the description of history as the theatre of dramatically presented class struggle, the terrible predictions, its overall lyrical aspect, all mark this work as a ‘breakwater of eternities,’ which is what Marx and Engels, with good political sense, sought.”
Overall, Marx’s Literary Style is a worthwhile book. For anyone making a serious study of Marx’s writing, as all socialists should strive to do, thinking about what is being written and why is helpful, and this book certainly lends itself to that - although, even at not much more than 100 pages, the book could be far more concise. Perhaps not every argument made within necessarily holds up, but the majority of points are good and well made.