⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ | CW/TW: Repeated references to human trafficking but no detailed descriptions. Know your triggers before you proceed.
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I hadn’t been in my mafia bag in a minute, so I figured why not dive into Asia Monique’s series…a series that I had heard only good things about.
First of all, black mafia - yes.
Black ITALIAN mafia - yes, yes.
Fine men who speak Italian and very much give “I’m about that life” energy - new kink unlocked!
ENZO. BIANCHI. >>>> Ms. Monique put her foot, limbs, and neck into Mr. Enzo Bianchi. But let me get to the real kicker.
Ms. LUCIA…y’all. The FMC of my dreams. Fine, brilliant, impeccable style, AND SHE KNOWS HER WAY AROUND WEAPONS AND SAVES THE WORLD REGULARLY…yes, please!
Overall, as a couple, Enzo and Lucia and their chemistry carried the book (for me). Actually, the chemistry (and intensity, where applicable) between all the characters was both palpable and effective and certainly a major stronghold in the book.
Overall, the rest didn’t feel very cohesive to me. There was so much description, y’all; I felt lost a lot while reading. The world-building, in general, fell flat because of this.
Even the character-building of Enzo and Lucia as individuals was unclear to me. Once I finished the book, I still felt like I didn’t know who they were as individuals. Yes, we got their families' histories and individual goals and motivations, but I didn’t get much more than that.
Please note: I don’t even believe this can be or should be attributed to the writing ability of Ms. Asia Monique. Because she clearly can wield a pen. I think it’s more so that…at least in my opinion, from the beginning, there was this allure of mystery over both Lucia and Enzo. Considering the subject matter of this book, you’re probably like, “Duh, girl, allure is important,” which you’re right; it is. We obviously don’t want NO allure, we want there to be build-up and all of the things, but the problem was that the allure carried on through the entire book.
I would have liked a little bit more character transparency further along in the book. Also, other than the arranged marriage aspect, I don’t know what the plot was or the main plot rather. There felt like several different storylines, and none were coming off as the primary one. And then there felt like no climax to the story, and therefore no resolution to the lacking climax, so as I was getting closer to the end, I was like, “IS something else gonna happen, or is that it? Did I miss something?”
But with all that said, I still enjoyed this book, AND I loved how even though the mafia genre is all about violence, there was less of that here, and the book still gave what needed to be given from the mafia perspective. And I think that is wholly due to the fact that the characters and their personalities and actions spoke for themselves.
I definitely plan on reading the rest of the Mafia Misfits series. On to Sinful Redemption…