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328 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 6, 2022
'an odd feeling crept over her [...]. A stirring in the pit of her stomach. [...] The house. It seemed to want her, need her'.I'm not a fan of authors spelling out characters' thoughts and feelings as though taking down dictation. I want to feel what the characters feel, not just be told they're, for example, unsettled. Show me the thing that makes the character feel unsettled and then I'll feel unsettled too.