Lyric's Curse part 2 was not as good as the first book. The storyline was there, it could have been a much better read. There was not a lot of effort put into developing the new characters and the pacing seemed a little off. Robyn REALLY NEEDS to either hire an editor/proofreader or if he has one, fire him/her and hire a new one. He gets his own characters confused, there are double words and words transposed as well as words that are just missing. All of these things make the book less desirable to read.
I'm coming to realize Robyn's writing style isn't just 'easy to read'... not only is it starting to come off as amateurish but it's starting to feel more appropriate for young people between about fourth through seventh or eighth grade. His attempts at humor, sarcasm, and banter very much remind me of my own children at that age. He has provoked several eyerolls and not in a good way. He should omit the following and market his books toward the aforementioned age group(s).
There is some language in the book but not a lot and it's not extremely vulgar. B**** and a** have been used a few times. The romance is light, not explicit at all, which I appreciate. He could drop the cuss words and innuendos and the first two books would be perfect for young people.