I liked it. It read as an introduction into a story, or like the first few chapters of a book, and it left me hooked. It's a fun read, something you don't need to take seriously, the characters are a bit over the top, but that makes it fun. Like in the movies. It's basically reading a TV rom-com.
It's obvious that it is written by a beginner author, and probably not edited professionally, but the story itself makes up for this. The characters show promise, and the relationships they develop do not feel fake.