"Shall we continue where we were earlier?" Leo asks. He kisses down my neck and I moan in pure bliss. "I have a little preposition for you" Leo whispers into my ear.I look up at him expecting him to continue. "If you kiss me first, then you have to stay here and be my Luna." I chuckle at his statement and counter, "Alright, but if you kiss me first, then I can make my own decision.""Oh so that's how you wanna play it kitten?" I hear Leo say, "well then game on."Game on Mr. Alpha.
Jade Hart is a self-confessed book worm who is happiest glued to a lap-top with an eternal battery life and typing up stories running rampant in her head.
She currently resides in Middle-Earth, but has lived in Australia, England, and Hong Kong.
This book needs alot of work, it seems it was not proof read there are many grammatical as well as word usage errors. If felt almost like it was just ramblings of a very young teenager. The story was hard to follow and had a choppy disconnected feel while reading. I think with proper editing and additional story body it could be a nice short story.
I guess this would have a good story line, but the Grammer is so hard to read that it actually makes the book pretty bad. Trying to read this just gave me a headache. Sorry but not worth it.