1. I had fun reading it because of the science and the overall theme. 2. Unfortunately, the book really made me appreciate a good copy editor: e.g. "free reign", "submit" for "transmit", several places where an older and a newer version of a sentence both partly survived. 3. The writer's cultural background showed through a little too much. This was somewhat welcome in regards to his religious worldview, but somewhat jarring in terms of some dated / non-PC comments about women, probably unnoticed by the author. E.g., women were included as key scientists etc., but sometimes introduced as "the lovely Dr. so-and-so," or once the main character introduces an accomplished scientist as his assistant. Although technically her current role was to be his lieutenant (-ish), that introduction wasn't really appropriate. 4. Most interesting of all to me as a wannabe writer, the large-scale organization of the narrative was OK, but the prose was just ... I don't know, vapid is too strong. Maybe dull, or predictable? The sentences plodded much more often than they danced.