Oh. My. God.
I have been thinking about this review for DAYS. I read this book for a book club, which is the ONLY reason that I clawed my way to the finish line on this one. I have so many thoughts in my head that it might be impossible to get them all down, but let’s start here: This book is shit. Not THE shit. Just shit. I’m not sure what all of these 5 star reviews are about, but I also notice that most of them don’t have any details 🙃 Just saying.
First of all, these characters are incredibly hollow. Things just…. Happen to them, without any emotional or reasonable meaning or explanation. BOTH MAIN CHARACTERS GET SHOT and are WALKING AROUND living their normal lives days later. ONE OF THEM IS IN A COMA, and miraculously wakes up with no explanation when the other character says, “I love you.” (Gag). The doctor comes in and basically says, “Cool. You’re good to go.”
There are so many grammar and spelling errors throughout this book that filled me with rage and disgust. I counted at least three. The wrong version of “they’re” was one of them but the WORST was the mispelling of the word Balenciaga. She spelled it with a Z. You don’t have to be a Kardashian to know that one.
Not to mention the fact that there are TWO CHARACTERS named Lee in this book. You couldn’t come up with a different name for ONE of them? Yes, one is a first name and one is a last name, but come on.
The worst part of this book is that it flips back and forth between the main characters, and when that happens, the author forces you to go back in time and re-live what you just read through the other character’s point of view, instead of pushing the story along. The most horrendous example of this was when they introduced a third character and we had to relive the same boring scene three times. This 308 page book could have easily been cut to 150 pages.
Finally, I know this is fiction, but some of this was so unrealistic. At one point the main female has a gun pointed at her head, the main male jumps to save her, throwing knives at his turncoat besties PERFECTLY, but doing nothing to the person holding the gun and then we just never see the guys that he “only hurt a little” again.
Okay.
By the time this book was over it got so lovey-dovey and teen romance-y that I wanted to light my kindle on fire. I swear some of these scenes were ripped directly from episodes of Grey’s Anatomy…. The candlelight proposal in the woods at the site of the home they were going to build together? It was cute when Derek Shepherd did it 15 years ago.
Save yourself from this absolute dumpster fire of a book. *drops mic*