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May 1, 2022
Expected so much but was bitterly disappointed. Story did circles around itself but not in a good way , it skirted past topics but never fully fleshed them out ( apart from Hermiones small bladder issues which seem to take up a large portion of the narrative 🤦🏼♀️). And don’t get me started on the over use of filler language . It’s such a pet peeve of mine when fics are filled with needless ,pointless script to fill pages that neither drives the plot or has relevance to the story . Take out the over description of ever room , person and thought and you have a one shot with some mediocre smut . Would not recommend!
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