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A pact that will change their lives forever…

Fitzwilliam Darcy is a successful young barrister with a bright future. His late uncle has guided his career, made him his heir, and even selected a bride for him—sight unseen—whom he’ll meet and marry upon her majority. Who could have predicted that making the acquaintance of Miss Elizabeth Bennet in Meryton would throw those careful plans into disarray?

Elizabeth Bennet doesn’t know what to make of “Fitz” Darcy, who intrigues and draws her notice like no other. Despite Fitzwilliam’s warnings, she allows Mr. George Darcy, Fitzwilliam’s older brother and master of Pemberley, to charm her. Little does she know that she, too, has been promised in marriage by her late father—to an unknown barrister, no less. What is she to do when her hopes to marry for love disappear in the blink of an eye?

Is George Darcy’s suit in earnest? Can this mysterious bridegroom of her father’s choosing become the husband of her dreams? With the danger of duels and deceit, what will come of the initial attraction between her and Fitzwilliam? Will she become the barrister’s bride?

Note: contains scenes with adult content.

388 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 9, 2022

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Suzan Lauder

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Somehow the bio is boring. I don't want to talk about me, I want to talk about books. So if you need to see the bio, scroll down. But to really know a bit about me, check out my "Loved It" list. It says a lot. Of course, I have about three times that many books rated at five stars, and they are all very special to me, each in their own way. Some are books others would just rank as "meh" but worked for me, and others are classics that everyone would agree are fantastic. That's what I love about Goodreads: we all get our opinion on something very personal as reading choice. If I write that a book "Should have been 5*," it means it needed editing!

These days, I read very little other than Jane Austen-inspired fiction. Once in a hundred, I'll read a Regency Romance or nonfiction reference for writing. Part of the reason for that is that my health doesn't allow me to read for more than a couple of hours a day, and I have many books in that genre to catch up on.

You won't get newsletters from me, since I hate getting that sort of stuff clogging up my email. You will get chances at freebies and swag every so often through other channels because I love giving stuff away. In fact, I have a free gift for anyone who reads this bio. Email me at suzanlauder at gmail dot com to claim it, and say where you saw the offer.

I'd love feedback of all sorts on my writing, but especially stuff that tells me what I can do to please you, as a reader. Thanks!

Biography:

Saucy opinions like "The person, be it gentleman or lady, who has no pleasure in a good novel must be intolerably stupid." won Suzan Lauder, who thought, "I have to read more by this woman who writes with such snarky humour!" And another Jane Austen fanatic was captured in the clever dead author's net. Austen figures prominently in Lauder's writing, as Pride and Prejudice has inspired all her published fiction.

Lauder's is fascinated with Regency fashion and editing and blogs about it. She lives with Mr. Suze half time on Vancouver Island and in Mexico and their cat joins them in both places.

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1,343 reviews80 followers
October 12, 2022
Good “Second Son” Trope
I like the “second son” trope, so was very anxious to read this book. For the most part, I wasn’t disappointed, as without a doubt Suzan Lauder is a great writer and I have enjoyed her books. This one is no exception. I thought it was a good story, and started out great, but as it proceeded, I found it became a bit wordy and lagged some at times.

The portrayals of scoundrels was very well done. I loved to hate them.

Alas, this Elizabeth really annoyed me at times. For example, I didn’t like her air of pretense with her great entrance down the stairs at the Gardiner home. Elizabeth’s character has never struck me as being “fake”, but this little episode struck me as just that. Moreover, while I admit she lacked all the details of his past wrongs, I couldn’t quite get past her gullibility toward Wickham, especially once she was betrothed and was aware of Darcy’s dislike for him. I don’t like a “stupid” Elizabeth and some of her actions with both Georges made me think she was, and, primarily in view of the fact that she’d been given plenty of warning with respect to their characters.

I did love this Darcy. I wished he would just tell Elizabeth all about Wickham instead of putting it off, but then we wouldn’t have been treated to certain facer he had the privilege of awarding the reprobate! I loved the early passion Darcy had for Elizabeth. Oh, the struggle he had knowing he was already betrothed and falling for a woman he could never have. Poor man! What a lovely surprise the future held. The mature content was well expressed.

Alias Mr. Bennet remains my favourite by this author, but I still very much enjoyed this one and recommend it.

October 11-12, 2022 - Audiobook
Scott Fleming is a new-to-me narrator. I give him five stars for this book. I love his voice and I thought his performance was very well done. I wouldn’t hesitate to listen to another by him. My initial book review thoughts and impressions remain for the audiobook.
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2,701 reviews206 followers
May 18, 2022
I received a free copy of this story and this review will be all my own opinions and words.

4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars. (The free copy I received was sent to my Kindle and I am not able to highlight on my Kindle. However, I then borrowed this book from KU which shows up on the Kindle app on my PC and made the two highlights you see.)

As some other reviews have stated this story was faster paced in the beginning and at the end but the middle dragged for me. The author gives us a "if I were going to write an epilogue" sort of epilogue at the ending. Plus as the story description and some of the other reviews tell us there are graphic sex scenes.

Fitzwilliam is a second son and goes by Fitz if you are within his family or circle of friends. His older brother is George Darcy and does by "Darcy". And thus we have the two "Georges" as Darcy is best friends with Wickham. Wickham and this Darcy share many traits although Pemberley has not been gambled away...just not producing up to its potential. Wickham is a hanger-on and George Darcy often supports him financially. (The price of his company.) There is Georgiana and, happily, George Darcy does use good sense when it comes to protecting her.

As you can read in the blurb Fitzwilliam is a barrister and has been guided in his studies and career by his Uncle Darcy. This uncle has left Darcy, not only some monies, but also a house and an arranged marriage. The settlement is very generous towards the lady's family. He will not meet her until she reaches her majority and they are to marry a.s.a.p after that. The young lady knows nothing about this. Darcy cannot even guess her identity as his Uncle has used pseudonyms in his will and the arrangement document.

But he meets Elizabeth Bennet and falls for her. However, as a man of honor he knows he must resist her and so at first we read of a warm, then cold, relationship with her...puzzling her. He finally solves his struggle by leaving Hertfordshire.

This is not a short story and I won't attempt to even hint at some of what goes on. Another review did say how frustrating it was to read about an Elizabeth who allows herself to be attracted to both "Georges". And it was also a mystery as to why Fitzwilliam didn't early-on relate to her all the details about why she should not trust or become friends with either other man.

Lady Catherine and Anne make a small appearance. Caroline is barely mentioned. But then Fitzwilliam does not have the estate, connections or wealth to which C. is attracted.

I have read and enjoyed all of this author's published stories. I recommend this story but with the warning it is rated MA.

Just a note: There is a woman, a family, who are of African descent. They plays a significant part of the story and it was interesting to read of how the author handled this. She does note the advice she got in writing of this when she makes comments at the end of the book.
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1,437 reviews
May 21, 2022
Wickham, Wickham everywhere

Well written as always but the sub plot of Wickham was all pervasive. He was forever taking advantage of everyone and Lizzy supported and listened to his lies until the 94th percentile. For me it was just to long of being a fool for so little payback.

For me 5 stars for the style of writing and telling the story. 3 stars for the plot. She never seems to recognize her vanity which leads her to support an awful person.

The epilogue asks us to fill in the future story and then dribbles out some possible futures since the story is done and nothing more is needed.
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1,228 reviews61 followers
May 20, 2022
I started out loving it, but got confused by several choppy segues. At one point I thought part of the story was missing.

There was too much left unexplained or dealt with between the main male characters. It left me too uninvolved to care what happened to them.

Then I really lost interested between the pages of character's ruminations blah-blah and obsessive OOC lustful behavior.

I really wanted to like it, the premise had potential, but in the end I just had to finish it. 3.5*
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1,339 reviews125 followers
December 13, 2023
The marriage of convenience has this to recommend it: we are better judges of convenience than we are of love. ~ Mignon McLaughlin

“The Barrister’s Bride” is a story of convenience in marriage — to wit, an arranged marriage.

As the story opens, Mr. Bennet is in the great bookroom beyond our sphere. Jane and Elizabeth spend most of their time in London with the Gardiners. Their mother and other sisters still reside in Meryton. A chance encounter at a London ball is repeated when the sisters visit Hertfordshire and Fitzwilliam Darcy visits his friend Bingley at Netherfield Park.

Quote from the book: Fitz’s thoughts were consumed with whether he would have the opportunity to meet her again — and tonight was his chance. Now, how was he to go about approaching her? A reserved sort, he had never been as socially oriented as his older brother, George. Some might have even called him shy. His diffident nature never mattered to him in the past.

Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth meet and a friendship begins. Elizabeth enjoys the beginning but she notices that the gentleman is sometimes charming; sometimes contrary; and sometimes avoids her. Confusion reigns.

Fitzwilliam Darcy knows something that Elizabeth Bennet does not: that his Uncle Darcy, who had taken Fitzwilliam under his wing as a young boy and supported his career, had arranged a marriage for him with the daughter of an old friend from his school days. Fitzwilliam is not free to form an attachment and fights against his attraction. He does not know his intended’s name. He knows only that the girl is not aware of the betrothal but will be told when she reaches her majority. Meanwhile, Fitzwilliam must bide his time as best he can.

By chance, the older Darcy brother, George, and George Wickham arrive in Meryton also. When the Bennet sisters meet them, the two Georges are drunk and rude to the ladies. Fortunately, their stay in Hertfordshire is very brief.

The prudence of the best heads is often defeated by the tenderness of the best hearts. ~ Henry Fielding

The story continues in London where Jane and Elizabeth meet again with Bingley and George Darcy, who appears to be courting Elizabeth. He is charming and Elizabeth enjoys his company.

Fitzwilliam is also in London at the time, but his work as a barrister keeps him very busy. His contact with the Bennets is limited.

Do not trust all men, but trust men of worth; the former course is silly, the latter a mark of prudence. ~ Democritus

Canon Elizabeth Bennet is a clever girl who makes certain character misjudgments. In this story, her misjudgments border on stupidity. She forgets her initial opinion of George Darcy and George Wickham and puts trust in both men.

The story was fast-paced at the beginning and end. The middle section seemed a bit bogged down with unnecessary details, but I will overlook that in light of the originality of the story. Unique plot; lovable Darcy; independent Elizabeth, and a happy ending. What more could I want?

True love stories never have endings. ~Richard Bach

EPILOGUES — some folks love them; some folks hate them! Whichever side of the debate you favor, do not miss this one!
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Author 5 books403 followers
July 30, 2022
What if Jane Austen’s beloved hero, Mr. Darcy, were the second son and not master of the fine Pemberley Estate? And, what if he has been betrothed to a secret lady as part of his uncle’s legacy to him? I do love venturing into ‘what if’ land and Suzan Lauder is the familiar writer of such fascinating twists on Jane Austen’s classic tale.

The Barrister’s Bride presents Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy as second son to the elder, George Darcy who is something of a profligate and best friend with George Wickham and even more entrenched ne’er do well. Not to fear, Fitz is not dependent on his brother for resources beyond what his vocation gives him for his uncle, Judge Darcy, has made him his heir. Only, the elder judge has a surprise up his sleeve and has contrived with a friend to wed the man’s second daughter to his nephew unbeknownst to them.
In the meantime, Fitz has met the lovely Elizabeth Bennet and must find a way to do the honorable thing and step aside while this beautiful, lively miss, over the course of the story, must figure out which man is the genuine, honorable character to hold onto her chance at real love.

The Barrister’s Bride has a compelling premise and I was very excited to see how it would go. I loved the idea of Fitzwilliam Darcy as the second son and a barrister who is betrothed to a secret bride. Just like, I enjoyed seeing him up against his brother’s wealth and status and the brother’s friend’s glib lying tongue to see how he could win fair lady. Elizabeth has already seen her life altered when her father died and the Bennet estate passed on to Mr. Collins and his wife, Charlotte. Elizabeth and her eldest sister live in London with their uncle and their family future is very much on the mind.

The first half of the book delivered a tight and well-paced plot and all that I was hoping for. The reader is introduced to the key players and their situations even as the plot grabs the reader from the get-go. There were unexplained plot points niggling like I was confused at the secrecy of the arrangement and why Fitz didn’t tell Elizabeth why he was blowing hot and cold with her and is reticent about making certain people’s character clear. The author chose to give her main characters strong social consciences and they are Abolitionists. Fitz was an amazing hero and I loved their earlier meetings that led to something more even before they are in on the whole truth.
The middle of the book slowed and an unsurprising twist occurs. I was fine with the change of pace and even the hot sexy scenes. However, I lost respect for the heroine when she dithers over a choice that seemed pretty obvious to the reader and later falls for the lies of a known villain. Though, yes, seeing the hero get a good shot at the guy might have been worth some of that drama.
The very end was an epilogue of epilogues and just what was needed after the drama near the end. I prefer this so much to abrupt endings.

Overall, this was another enjoyable standalone from the author and delivered an entertaining story. The strong variations on the original story took it far from the plot lines of Pride and Prejudice so anyone who enjoys spicy historical romance and unfamiliar with P&P would do fine with picking it up. This was an overall satisfying read and I would recommend it.

I rec'd an eARC from Meryton Press to read in exchange of an honest review.
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265 reviews5 followers
May 11, 2022
The Second Son is So Much More

Off the beaten path, totally. If you are looking for a rehash, look elsewhere but if an original plot intrigues you for ODC, you will enjoy this one very much. Quite a bit of scandal and some good forays into topics of the time, handled well. It's always interesting to explore the concept of our Darcy being the younger, less favored son, though it lessens the role of the cousins. The heir here is not noble and the relationship with Wickham is more as the elder's wingman; an interesting, reasonable notion, well explored. Elizabeth here was a disappointment though she does fit most of the fanon characteristics, gullibility being rather annoying. And our Darcy exhibits 180° swings, also an aspect in canon to some extent. Overall, 4.5 raised to 5 for style, concept and a touch of mature passion so often missing. It is a romance, after all.
139 reviews21 followers
May 13, 2022
Good, but really slow and frustrating at the start. What's supposed to be the tension for the first third of the book is from a mystery that's easy to guess, and so uninteresting. It picks up from there, and the rest of the book is fine.
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2,162 reviews1 follower
July 2, 2022
This Pride and Prejudice variation features Fitzwilliam Darcy as a second son and barrister. He knows that he has a mystery engagement but in the meantime he is fascinated by Elizabeth Bennett.

The author combines a bit of cannon with new characters for a fun story. There is a bit of foreplay before the wedding but no vows broken.
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997 reviews343 followers
April 17, 2024
What If Mr. Darcy Was a Younger Son?

Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

Source: Gift from Publisher


TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

THE PREMISE: A very unique, outside of canon tale where Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy is a barrister, has a profligate older brother, and has an arranged betrothal to an unknown woman. Elizabeth is living with the Gardiners since Mr. Bennet has sadly passed and has the opportunity to meet both Darcy brothers. Will she be able to sketch each of their characters correctly…?

WHAT I LOVED:

- Mr. Darcy is a YOUNGER Son: I’ve enjoyed several Austenesque tales where there are two Darcy sons, but it is typically a younger brother who is newly added to the cast of characters. This may be the first time I’ve read one where our Mr. Darcy is the younger brother. It is interesting to see a different version of Mr. Darcy – one where he is not a master of an estate, one where he has a profession instead of immense wealth, and one where he isn’t one of the top matrimonial prizes of the ton.

- Fitzwilliam Darcy: I really enjoyed this version of our Mr. Darcy. I love that in essentials “he is very much what he ever was” – he is responsible, dutiful, and honorable. But it is unique to explore a version of Mr. Darcy where he was not brought up to be the caretaker and owner of Pemberley. We typically see how devoted Darcy is to Pemberley and how much his home instills deep pride and satisfaction for him. This Mr. Darcy, while he does cherish Pemberley as his family’s home, is devoted to his work, the causes he believes in, and his family.

- Double the Darcy Men, Double the Georges: George Darcy, Fitzwilliam’s older brother, was an interesting original character to explore in this variation. He is the antithesis of Fitzwilliam Darcy – he is extravagant, irresponsible, immoral, and considers George Wickham to be one of his friends. So between the disparity in their personalities and Wickham being up to his usual mischief and more there is plenty of tension and animosity in these relationships. Especially between the siblings and between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Wickham.

- The Journey to Love: I loved that this story took us on such a new path for these characters. While there were some plot points we could recognize such as the Meryton Assembly, Jane becoming ill, and the Netherfield Ball, there was so much more that was new and different. I enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth brought together in such a unique way. I appreciated the thoughtful and satisfying portrayal of their relationship and the gradual progression of their feelings. I especially enjoyed how powerful and passionate their love is. (NOTE: some romantic interludes in this book are best suited for Mature Audiences.)

- Inclusivity: I greatly appreciated how Ms. Lauder found various ways to feature some inclusive characters in this tale. I felt the story is richer and more captivating for it. In addition, I appreciated her care and sensitivity with creating and portraying these characters, and that these characters weren’t caricatured or tokenized.

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

- Small Quibbles: Sometimes the narrative bits felt a little long and some of the internal thoughts and musings felt redundant, but my main quibble might be a lot to do with Wickham! (no surprise there, right? 😏) I was surprised with how long Elizabeth took to understand Wickham’s character – which felt a little inconsistent given how quick she was to judge Fitzwilliam Darcy and how many ways she heard or saw Wickham’s true colors. SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT: Also, I wish Wickham would have been given a firm kick in the rear sooner than he did…overall the Darcys seemed a little too lenient with their treatment of him.

CONCLUSION:

With The Barrister’s Bride, Suzan Lauder dreamt up a tale with a diverse premise, diverse characterization, and diverse characters. And the result was a dynamic and engaging Austenesque work that is sure to delight readers who love outside of canon Pride and Prejudice variations or who are looking for something different and thoughtful! I highly recommend!

Austenesque Reviews
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60 reviews61 followers
July 14, 2022
I'll be honest there were quite a few things that I felt were left unfinished in various ways when it came to this book, but overall I enjoyed the concept.

To be specific and I do me very spoilery specific: what were those last conversations between the brothers like; to what extent was George's actions and feelings genuine for either lady be it good or scandalous; what role did Wickham truly play in how those "courtships" went down cause I was made to believe he was the shoulder devil but it seemed like George was breaking free at one point; did Elizabeth and Darcy ever have an honest conversation about the huge George elephant in every room of Pemberley (starting with the master's bedroom which was previously his) especially considering how much she continued to hate him and Fitz seemed to have made some kind of peace and grieve his brother; why in God's Green Earth did it even come to that point with Wickham and Lady V, why would she had even listened to him considering her experiences with George, although Elizabeth was just as ridiculous in that regard. I would have loved answers/resolutions to these things instead of the more graphic scenes and especially one very unfortunate conversation with Mama Bennet I can't remove from my brain with bleach. These have been bothering me slowly throughout and I can only justify giving 5 stars by listing them here as warning to others who might also be bothered by them.

... But I swear otherwise I did enjoy the book.
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462 reviews
May 25, 2022
Suzan Lauder hits another home run!

I love stories when I do not have re-read P&P with just changes to a few characters or timelines.
This one starts off with Elizabeth and Jane living with the Gardiner’s in London as their father has passed away. Elizabeth and Jane meet Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy, the barrister at a book shop and sparks fly. Little did they know how intertwined their lives would become. Fitz being the younger son does not inherit Pemberley, his older brother Mr. George Darcy is the heir and along with his dear “friend” Mr. George Wickham they cause lot of havoc.
I am sure others will give you more in-depth review, I will not because it will ruin it for you. I could not put the book down and lost a few hours of sleep trying to finish the book.
The story comes to life as you read, I loved that!
I am hoping this becomes an audiobook!

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71 reviews4 followers
May 12, 2022
It all starts with a pact between two men, and the lives of two young people are forever changed. I was surprised when I opened the cover of this book, but I knew it could only be good since it was a much-respected author whose books I have read several times.
The pact between the two men leads to the change of circumstance for Fitzwilliam Darcy, second son, - and Elizabeth Bennet, second daughter.
In the beginning, I did not know what to make of the plot. I then remembered that Suzan does tend to draw the reader in with clever conversations and an engaging story. The further I got into the book, my understanding of Fitzwilliam Darcy, Elizabeth, and even George Darcy, the elder Darcy sibling, became better. Two of the characters I could see had a possible future ahead of them together. George Darcy was pure and simple a rake. But I know that the very idea of actually liking or not liking a character is what makes an author so very great.
I admit to facepalming myself several times while reading since George Darcy does not seem to get his mistakes throughout the book. It made me think, "And you are supposed to be the elder and the heir!" Yikes!

But omg, there was lots of drama for our beloved couple made by their elders creates the most, but then the villain we all love to hate makes quite a problem between the couple who finally have realised their deeper feelings for each other. But I also loved the way Suzan wrote Fitzwilliam. I loved him and how serious he is and how he evolves throughout the story, alongside Elizabeth. I was worried about some loose ends, but Suzan did it perfectly, leading up to the ending.
And the HEA is so very satisfying!

I will recommend this read highly!
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356 reviews23 followers
August 11, 2022
The POC characters are there as props to make the “good” white characters look better and the “bad” ones look worse.
1,212 reviews31 followers
September 10, 2023
Entertaining, but...

Fitzwilliam Darcy is a second son, a barrister, and the heir of his uncle David Darcy, a judge. His uncle and Mr Bennett, who were at university together, have arranged the secret betrothal of Darcy and Elizabeth, a second son and a second daughter. The secret isn't revealed until Elizabeth's 21st birthday. They only know they are each betrothed, not to whom. Darcy and Elizabeth have an acquaintance before the secret is revealed, but the elder Darcy brother, George, greatly complicates things by being a charming rake. He also pursues Elizabeth, and it doesn't end well.

This is an imaginative and interesting premise, and the story is engaging. I like that the Darcy character is allowed to be a bit more friendly and sociable than usual. Also, since he's a second son, there's no ridiculous behavior from Caroline Bingley. The Bennett family dynamic is greatly altered, since Mr Bennett is dead and the family is divided, Jane and Elizabeth with the Gardiners, and the rest with the Phillipses. Mrs Bennett is still cartoonishly bad, but thankfully we don't hear much about Kitty and Lydia.

I deducted a couple of stars because there was a certain point at which some of the characters started doing stupid things. For example, why would Elizabeth consent to being courted by the elder Darcy brother after the younger brother warned her most strenuously not to trust him? Why would she start giving money to Wickham even though she suspects that it's a stupid thing to do? Why do Darcy and Elizabeth allow Wickham to stay at Pemberly after their marriage? Why does Darcy not tell Elizabeth about his "ward" in Ramsgate until it's too late? These and other questions had the story going off the rails for me, to the point that I started skimming through paragraphs, and that's never a good sign.

However, the book is well written and well edited. If you can get through the parts that make you scratch your head and roll your eyes, it's a wonderful story. I recommend it.
545 reviews21 followers
July 28, 2022
The idea behind the story was good but I was not happy with the narration. None of the characters were likeable or relatable. The only character which felt somewhat real was George Darcy and I liked him for a very brief time in the story. Elizabeth felt better with him than our Darcy. And for a successful barrister, was Darcy stupid or what? He was so confusing a character. He couldn't communicate properly at all with anyone for one whose profession depends on his skills in that area. For a guy who has so much of respect and love for Elizabeth, why didn't he find to see or write to her or her guardian when he knows that his brother has insulted her and has caused a scandal which could potentially damage her reputation is something I can't fathom. I felt as if all characters lacked depth and their emotions didn't resonate with me. And I really want to know one thing, especially during the regency period, why would any brother associate with a scoundrel who tried to elope with his underage sister? And why would another who knows of this person's propensity for bad behaviour and that his encouragement was the reason behind his brother's ruination and death would even let that person inside his house, let alone host him for two whole days during his honeymoon period? And why would this idiot even after Wickham hinted at Ramsgate, not confess everything to his wife before she overheard more disturbing discussions? Beats me! Actually the epilogue was better written than the story. I wish the author had shown the same amount of sense of humour in writing the story.
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56 reviews5 followers
May 17, 2022
KU read—thankfully

I was enjoying the story of Darcy as a second son barrister until the author decided to fixate on the topic of the slave trade and belabor the fact that all the benevolent characters despised Antiguan sugar and paid extra for Indian (of course Lady Catherine and Wickham prefer the tainted kind). For good measure ODC are also suffragists and very concerned about child labor. Eye roll.

Really, JAFF authors, this kind of insipid, woke tokenism is not necessary in the Austen Regency genre in particular. Throwing in a “Black lady” of nobility, or a gay uncle (Darcy’s), whose role in the story is insignificant, just to be able to say your story is “diverse,” is actually pretty insulting. If I want moralizing on social issues I can turn on the news.

The actual story fizzles after Darcy’s scoundrel elder brother dies (predictably) at the halfway-ish point. There isn’t much plot after that, just ponderous dialogue, a stubbornly foolish and naive Elizabeth and some lackluster sex.
8 reviews
June 1, 2025
English is not my first language, so I'm sorry for any possible mistakes.

I'm not sure about this book. It's not a bad book, but it could be a little more objective, the character's moods change all the time. This Elizabeth is more than a little obtuse, I don't like this aspcet of the story.

The "almost epilogue" could (very much) had been written as a real epilogue, it was rushed and was in a style different than the rest of the book.
622 reviews
July 17, 2022
Interesting

Interesting but predictable. Pretty clear who the betrothed would be and who would die. I liked the quality of the book but sometimes had trouble following, or wanted to avoid the angst, or was tired of all the happy, happy, joy, joy. I could do without intimate details.
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1,232 reviews
July 18, 2022
An enjoyable read

At the start of this book Darcy and Elizabeth find themselves in rather different situations than canon. The author unpacks this in an interesting fashion without resorting to excessively dramatic plots.

An excellent book if just a tad too long - I recommend it to fans of the genre.
248 reviews
May 26, 2023
Darcy is a second son (barrister/lawyer). His older brother courts Lizzy as his mistress and she refuses. He tries the same with another lady but dies in a duel making Darcy the master. He and Lizzy were set for an arranged marriage between their uncle/father without knowing (although had previously met)
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209 reviews14 followers
May 10, 2022
Very interesting

I enjoyed it though I wished they're meeting wouldn't have been so harsh and Darcy finally gave it to wiclham...it took long enough .....I wish it was a legitimate epilogue but otherwise enjoyale
29 reviews
May 13, 2022
It was good, different occupation for Darcy. He was a little more rigid, but loosened up. Lizzie was her usual.
124 reviews3 followers
May 17, 2022
Pleasant

Well written book from a grammatical standpoint. Story flowed well. However, major plot points were based on Elizabeth's uncharacteristic gullibility.
310 reviews2 followers
May 25, 2022
Different

This version offered new characters and plot twists making it just different enough to be somewhat engaging. The marital relations are graphically detailed, be warned.
95 reviews2 followers
August 1, 2022
wonderful.

Super good book. I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Though the new character were a plus to the story line and will read this author again.
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January 17, 2024
The story was well enough, except for last Wickham scheme, which I found to be totally unnecessary.
I know, there needs to be angst, but this last part silly.
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December 3, 2024
In which Darcy is a second son and his older brother is a wastrel who is best friends with Wickham. There's a secret (to them) betrothal between Darcy and Elizabeth. Confusion and plot ensues.
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1,041 reviews7 followers
June 13, 2022
Such an interesting premise for this book really good well written too.
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