i was really hoping for some redemption in the writing style but it's so bad and I can't even begin to count the countless errors. idk how this is a published book without any editing. idek why i kept reading. the scenes were so non descriptive and just bland. there was supposed to be some character development but all i saw was decrement. in book two, out of blue, she's described as black and "firm". there was no prior description of her color in the whole of book 1 and she was clearly stated as a fat girl before. there's too much going on all at once and I can't be bothered to read any further to see the consequences.
I love this book. The romance, the drama and the super hot sex. this book had it all and a good story line to boot. Davit and Amy are such an adorable couple, communication is a bit lacking but, cute none the less.I love a good romance with a side car of suspense and this is it along with interesting the side characters, amazing! I love Elias and Kayla. I feel like there is a story there and I can't wait to read it.
I loved how Davit and Amy came together as a family. Everything about them was so unconventional and I love that they are now a family but the unthinkable has happened and I hope it’s not who I think it is that’s responsible. I can’t stand Amy’s father and if he’s responsible I know he’ll get what he deserves, cause Davit and Elias don’t play about family.
This book started off slow, but continued to build with suspense and excitement. As soon as the couple was on an even keel, all hell broke loose. Loved the story and the characters. Sorry I have to wait a year for the conclusion. An enjoyable read.
Did I like the first book in this series? NO. Did I finish the first book in this series? Also No. Will I learn? Obviously, No. I picked this up, hoping to find some sort of character growth, and some unpredictable scenery, but nope.