The plot of the book was cute: a girl becomes a nanny for a single father who is a college professor taking a sabbatical in his home town. Romance ensues with a HEA. It was a good, easy read. However, the writing left a lot to be desired. This felt like an initial draft of a book, not something that was ready to be published. The events were all jumbled. Something was mentioned at the 60% mark in the book that didn’t happen until the 90% mark. This book just needs a really thorough edit and rewrite.
Also, despite this being a “romance” novel, the romance seemed almost forced. The would kiss, then forget that they kissed and have their first kiss again a few chapters later, then nothing is happening, then all of the sudden they are dating, then they decide to take it slow, then they’re dating again, then they break up…it was exhausting trying to figure out what was happening. Again, this just seemed to be the author forgetting what had happened in previous chapters.