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So Little Endeavour at Civility: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
He’s told her he loves her. She’s told him that nothing could ever make her accept him. And now they must marry.
Fitzwilliam Darcy finally succumbs to his feelings and begs Elizabeth Bennet to be his wife. To his shock and dismay, she flings his proposal back in his face, claiming he is the last man in the world she could ever marry. Needing to be alone, he leaves in haste and forgets his gloves. When Elizabeth follows him to return them, their reaction to one another surprises them both.
Elizabeth Bennet cannot believe the cold gentleman she has always disliked has been in love with her all along. Especially when she assumed he was incapable of feeling. When she is forced to pursue him to return his gloves before anyone knows he visited her, a renewal of their argument leads to a passionate kiss that shocks Elizabeth by how eagerly she returns it.
But they are not alone. And when Lady Catherine hears of Elizabeth’s behavior and demands to know the man’s identity so she might marry him, Darcy has no choice but to confess, dreading the knowledge that it will force Elizabeth to marry a man she despises.
Traveling to London so they can acquaint Elizabeth’s family with the marriage, Darcy must do all he can to win her heart, knowing that if he fails, it will mean a lifetime of misery for them both. And Elizabeth must conquer her anger and bitterness about her forced marriage to allow herself to see that the man she has despises might just be the perfect man for her after all.
Fitzwilliam Darcy finally succumbs to his feelings and begs Elizabeth Bennet to be his wife. To his shock and dismay, she flings his proposal back in his face, claiming he is the last man in the world she could ever marry. Needing to be alone, he leaves in haste and forgets his gloves. When Elizabeth follows him to return them, their reaction to one another surprises them both.
Elizabeth Bennet cannot believe the cold gentleman she has always disliked has been in love with her all along. Especially when she assumed he was incapable of feeling. When she is forced to pursue him to return his gloves before anyone knows he visited her, a renewal of their argument leads to a passionate kiss that shocks Elizabeth by how eagerly she returns it.
But they are not alone. And when Lady Catherine hears of Elizabeth’s behavior and demands to know the man’s identity so she might marry him, Darcy has no choice but to confess, dreading the knowledge that it will force Elizabeth to marry a man she despises.
Traveling to London so they can acquaint Elizabeth’s family with the marriage, Darcy must do all he can to win her heart, knowing that if he fails, it will mean a lifetime of misery for them both. And Elizabeth must conquer her anger and bitterness about her forced marriage to allow herself to see that the man she has despises might just be the perfect man for her after all.
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Published May 9, 2022
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June 1, 2022
I think my favorite part of this story is when, much to their chagrin, Collins and Lady Catherine learn that the man Elizabeth has compromised herself with and whose name they are demanding so that she can be forced to marry him, is none other than Fitzwilliam Darcy. Darcy (overhearing their demands for a name), has stepped forward and confessed.
Yes, we are at Hunsford, Darcy has proposed and been cruelly rejected, and leaves in haste. Elizabeth, finding that he has left his gloves and not wanting anyone to know she has had a male visitor hastens after him to return his gloves. An impromptu kiss surprises them both in that Elizabeth reacts with some passion on her own. Little do they realize that Collins has rushed home from Rosings and on his way witnesses the incident but only sees the gentleman's back.
Collins reports to Lady Catherine. However, they are not the only ones to know about the incident. servants and area residents are soon gossiping about it also. There is no hope of hiding it. Darcy does give Elizabeth "that letter". However, in this variation, she puts it into her trunk and forgets about it for a long while. (Believe that or not.) So, it is that her opinion about Darcy's treatment remains an "event" that comes between them coming to an understanding. Knowing how Elizabeth feels about him, Darcy even offers to allow this to be a marriage in name only except for needing an heir.
As in canon, obviously, Elizabeth and Darcy have some misunderstandings to clear up.
I did enjoy this variation and recommend it.
Yes, we are at Hunsford, Darcy has proposed and been cruelly rejected, and leaves in haste. Elizabeth, finding that he has left his gloves and not wanting anyone to know she has had a male visitor hastens after him to return his gloves. An impromptu kiss surprises them both in that Elizabeth reacts with some passion on her own. Little do they realize that Collins has rushed home from Rosings and on his way witnesses the incident but only sees the gentleman's back.
Collins reports to Lady Catherine. However, they are not the only ones to know about the incident. servants and area residents are soon gossiping about it also. There is no hope of hiding it. Darcy does give Elizabeth "that letter". However, in this variation, she puts it into her trunk and forgets about it for a long while. (Believe that or not.) So, it is that her opinion about Darcy's treatment remains an "event" that comes between them coming to an understanding. Knowing how Elizabeth feels about him, Darcy even offers to allow this to be a marriage in name only except for needing an heir.
As in canon, obviously, Elizabeth and Darcy have some misunderstandings to clear up.
I did enjoy this variation and recommend it.
June 2, 2022
After ‘The Proposal’ Darcy writes his letter to Lizzy. But she puts is aside and never reads it. Also Lizzy is accidentally compromised by Darcy so they must marry. So they must marry and she doesn’t know the contents of his letter, but Darcy thinks she knows.
The rest of the story unrolls with not many surprises. By the time the HEA happens all of Darcy’s weaknesses and Lizzy’s weaknesses caused me not really believe the HEA. Thus the 4 star rating.
As written if I knew Darcy from school or investing with him, I would say have overlooked his rude shyness ways. But If I was a casual acquaintance via church or in common friends, I wouldn’t have like Lizzy. She seemed like she had too much in common with her parents.
The rest of the story unrolls with not many surprises. By the time the HEA happens all of Darcy’s weaknesses and Lizzy’s weaknesses caused me not really believe the HEA. Thus the 4 star rating.
As written if I knew Darcy from school or investing with him, I would say have overlooked his rude shyness ways. But If I was a casual acquaintance via church or in common friends, I wouldn’t have like Lizzy. She seemed like she had too much in common with her parents.
May 27, 2022
3.5*
Quite cute, although it does take what could be a fairly serious topic and condense it to a shortish, light hearted read.
We never get to see Elizabeth's emotional fallout to the kiss. We also aren't privy to Darcy's process of getting over himself as far as Elizabeth's situation is concerned.
Take it for what it is and it's enjoyable.
Quite cute, although it does take what could be a fairly serious topic and condense it to a shortish, light hearted read.
We never get to see Elizabeth's emotional fallout to the kiss. We also aren't privy to Darcy's process of getting over himself as far as Elizabeth's situation is concerned.
Take it for what it is and it's enjoyable.
June 4, 2022
Very Good
A very good forced marriage scenario, the beauty of which is unknowingly precipitated by Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine herself. The dialogue was good, with entertaining banter at times.
Some proofreading misses, but a well-written story. Recommend
A very good forced marriage scenario, the beauty of which is unknowingly precipitated by Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine herself. The dialogue was good, with entertaining banter at times.
Some proofreading misses, but a well-written story. Recommend
May 12, 2022
Sweet story
This is a pretty good book.
I liked Darcy and Elizabeth's character (majority of the time.)
I loved the beginning of the book.
I like that Darcy and Elizabeth decided, while at Rosings, to make the most of their situation, and put on a united front (although, it didn't carry over while in London.)
I like the sweet moments between Darcy and Elizabeth.
I have to admit, I wasn't in the mood for Mrs. Bennet's shock value, so I started skimming her scenes.
Overall, I'm glad I read it.
Darcy and Elizabeth are the main characters ✔
No Caroline ✔
Wickham is only mentioned✔
This is a pretty good book.
I liked Darcy and Elizabeth's character (majority of the time.)
I loved the beginning of the book.
I like that Darcy and Elizabeth decided, while at Rosings, to make the most of their situation, and put on a united front (although, it didn't carry over while in London.)
I like the sweet moments between Darcy and Elizabeth.
I have to admit, I wasn't in the mood for Mrs. Bennet's shock value, so I started skimming her scenes.
Overall, I'm glad I read it.
Darcy and Elizabeth are the main characters ✔
No Caroline ✔
Wickham is only mentioned✔
July 25, 2023
A very sweet, low angst story. This Darcy was verry vulnerable and sweet. The encounter with Lady Catherine and Collins was quite enjoyable. Great and fast paced read.
March 15, 2023
I loved the new ‘thread pulled’ plot
I really did love the story and I’d love to put this on my reread shelf but not until the book is edited. The story deserves that. With a scene in the beginning chapter that changes everything after the canon P&P Hunsford proposal, and one we’ve all fantasized about, (swoon!) the story is off to a rousing start. Woo hoo! The paths Darcy and Elizabeth need to take to get their happily ever after are charming and sometimes painful to watch, a FMS plot twist in the beginning becomes a love match before the wedding takes place. The author writes such sweet scenes. I recommend the book based on this.
I am so reluctant to have to criticize a book. But if I disliked the story I wouldn’t even bother with a review. Good story though, and I would hope the author will continue writing, but the book seriously needs needs an editor and some JAFF beta readers.
I really did love the story and I’d love to put this on my reread shelf but not until the book is edited. The story deserves that. With a scene in the beginning chapter that changes everything after the canon P&P Hunsford proposal, and one we’ve all fantasized about, (swoon!) the story is off to a rousing start. Woo hoo! The paths Darcy and Elizabeth need to take to get their happily ever after are charming and sometimes painful to watch, a FMS plot twist in the beginning becomes a love match before the wedding takes place. The author writes such sweet scenes. I recommend the book based on this.
I am so reluctant to have to criticize a book. But if I disliked the story I wouldn’t even bother with a review. Good story though, and I would hope the author will continue writing, but the book seriously needs needs an editor and some JAFF beta readers.
June 20, 2022
Disquieting but romantic
Who would have thought that the machinations of Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins would be the cause for their engagement? But the story goes beyond that and offers a lovely narrative of their developing relationship. A very recommended read.
Who would have thought that the machinations of Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins would be the cause for their engagement? But the story goes beyond that and offers a lovely narrative of their developing relationship. A very recommended read.
June 1, 2022
A sweet story really enjoyable.
August 27, 2023
below average
Review comments will be in notes and highlights. Salty comments are the result of reading while intoxicated- they are honest but exaggerated. I think my sarcasm is funny, but often it comes across as mean. I have an emotional and passionate response to proofreading errors.
Review comments will be in notes and highlights. Salty comments are the result of reading while intoxicated- they are honest but exaggerated. I think my sarcasm is funny, but often it comes across as mean. I have an emotional and passionate response to proofreading errors.
August 20, 2022
If I loved you less, I could talk more. I love that line and it fits for this story. A failed proposal and then scheme to embarrass finds our dear couple engaged. They learn of other through incidents, flirting and many misunderstandings on their way to happily ever after.
June 5, 2022
nice
A slow burn story that warms the heart. I wish we got more kissing, but at least we get to see Lady Catherine sputtering over her own stubbornness!
A slow burn story that warms the heart. I wish we got more kissing, but at least we get to see Lady Catherine sputtering over her own stubbornness!
May 23, 2022
The beginning is stronger than the middle or ending.
There are some sweet moments between Darcy and Lizzy that I liked, but Lizzy was more likely to misunderstand something about Darcy, make assumptions about what he must be thinking, and then get short with him, leaving him wondering what was going on. Or vice versa.
For two people so obviously making an effort to get to know each other, they both liked to jump to conclusions without talking things out.
I can give this a bit of a pass because not everyone is like me and struggles with the miscommunication trope.
Overall, the story lacked cohesion for me. Some scenes felt out of place. I wasn’t sure why some scenes were included the way they were presented. For example, Lizzy has a realization about Darcy that she has already had before because of something an actress says to her. I think the scene was to show Lizzy being jealous, but instead of her realizing she’s jealous, she just realizes again that he loves her. So instead of adding depth or something, it just felt like wasted time or a missed opportunity for the author to do something else.
There were words and phrases used that were not in keeping with the time period. There were quite a few anachronisms that pulled me out of the story (I’m staring at you, miss cigarette smoking actress), some to the point I ended up down a rabbit hole on Google instead of reading the story (again with me staring at the cigarette smoking actress).
I wish I could have had more of the scenes where ODC were learning about each other, when they talked and flirted a little. Those scenes felt more genuine and less contrived than many of their other interactions.
There are some sweet moments between Darcy and Lizzy that I liked, but Lizzy was more likely to misunderstand something about Darcy, make assumptions about what he must be thinking, and then get short with him, leaving him wondering what was going on. Or vice versa.
For two people so obviously making an effort to get to know each other, they both liked to jump to conclusions without talking things out.
I can give this a bit of a pass because not everyone is like me and struggles with the miscommunication trope.
Overall, the story lacked cohesion for me. Some scenes felt out of place. I wasn’t sure why some scenes were included the way they were presented. For example, Lizzy has a realization about Darcy that she has already had before because of something an actress says to her. I think the scene was to show Lizzy being jealous, but instead of her realizing she’s jealous, she just realizes again that he loves her. So instead of adding depth or something, it just felt like wasted time or a missed opportunity for the author to do something else.
There were words and phrases used that were not in keeping with the time period. There were quite a few anachronisms that pulled me out of the story (I’m staring at you, miss cigarette smoking actress), some to the point I ended up down a rabbit hole on Google instead of reading the story (again with me staring at the cigarette smoking actress).
I wish I could have had more of the scenes where ODC were learning about each other, when they talked and flirted a little. Those scenes felt more genuine and less contrived than many of their other interactions.
July 13, 2022
Delightful
The classic compromised engagement with Elizabeth only slowly coming to understand herself, but done with pace, lightness of touch and panache. Many of the exchanges between ODC are delightful, and their feelings tangible and moving. Not deep but neither is it shallow. Greatly enjoyed.
The classic compromised engagement with Elizabeth only slowly coming to understand herself, but done with pace, lightness of touch and panache. Many of the exchanges between ODC are delightful, and their feelings tangible and moving. Not deep but neither is it shallow. Greatly enjoyed.
May 18, 2022
Interesting
An interesting premise in this enjoyable little variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Kate Beauford.
An interesting premise in this enjoyable little variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Kate Beauford.
June 14, 2022
This book is from the same author as "Rescuing Elizabeth Bennet: A Pride and Prejudice Variation " . Very nice story.
It starts as other stories I've read, with the awful Hunsford proposal, but it varies from canon straight after, when Elizabeth realises Mr Darcy left his gloves ( a bit of a nod to "North and South" there I see) and goes to give them back to him as she doesn't want anyone finding out he was at the parsonage with her. She finds him in the woods on the way to Rosings and they have another argument, that gives way to Darcy's passion to get out of control, so he kisses her and… his kisses are accepted by Elizabeth (a blissful but heartbreaking moment for Darcy), but for their bad luck, she (but only she) is observed by Mr Collins, who tells the story to Lady Catherine with the intention to both humiliate Elizabeth and get a revenge for having been rejected by her. What he didn't expect was that the man kissing Elizabeth was none other than her ladyship's nephew… so Mr Darcy and Elizabeth decide to say they were already engaged and go through with the marriage.
Nice story but I would have prefer for them to have more romantic moments and a better understanding before 90% of the book. They spend a lot of time getting to know each other but that doesn't mean there are not misunderstandings, because even if Darcy was quite nice he was still a bit of his non reformed self so he still had the haughtiness and the pride. He spent a lot of time thinking of his unrequited love instead of focusing his energy in making Elizabeth fall for him and return it.
I understand that he would react to Lizzy in the way he did way but man, if you want her to love you, perhaps you could make the effort to woo her and be less unpleasant to her family? Anyway, the ending was ok (both overcoming fears and things like that) and they did have a frank conversation at the end of it. I just wished it would have come sooner. I also wished that, with such a sweet start, there would've been more romantic sweet moments between the couple, but Mr Darcy lost many opportunities. 4 stars, not as good as the first story from this author but still recommended.
It starts as other stories I've read, with the awful Hunsford proposal, but it varies from canon straight after, when Elizabeth realises Mr Darcy left his gloves ( a bit of a nod to "North and South" there I see) and goes to give them back to him as she doesn't want anyone finding out he was at the parsonage with her. She finds him in the woods on the way to Rosings and they have another argument, that gives way to Darcy's passion to get out of control, so he kisses her and… his kisses are accepted by Elizabeth (a blissful but heartbreaking moment for Darcy), but for their bad luck, she (but only she) is observed by Mr Collins, who tells the story to Lady Catherine with the intention to both humiliate Elizabeth and get a revenge for having been rejected by her. What he didn't expect was that the man kissing Elizabeth was none other than her ladyship's nephew… so Mr Darcy and Elizabeth decide to say they were already engaged and go through with the marriage.
Nice story but I would have prefer for them to have more romantic moments and a better understanding before 90% of the book. They spend a lot of time getting to know each other but that doesn't mean there are not misunderstandings, because even if Darcy was quite nice he was still a bit of his non reformed self so he still had the haughtiness and the pride. He spent a lot of time thinking of his unrequited love instead of focusing his energy in making Elizabeth fall for him and return it.
I understand that he would react to Lizzy in the way he did way but man, if you want her to love you, perhaps you could make the effort to woo her and be less unpleasant to her family? Anyway, the ending was ok (both overcoming fears and things like that) and they did have a frank conversation at the end of it. I just wished it would have come sooner. I also wished that, with such a sweet start, there would've been more romantic sweet moments between the couple, but Mr Darcy lost many opportunities. 4 stars, not as good as the first story from this author but still recommended.
June 30, 2022
Deja vu
I think I've come across this same premise for a P&P variation in another book. The story begins with the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy storms out of the house, but leaves his gloves behind. Elizabeth runs after him to return them, not wanting anyone to know that he was there, in the house with her, alone. She meets up with him, they argue again, and suddenly they're kissing each other passionately. Unfortunately, Mr Collins witnesses the kiss, recognizing Elizabeth, but not able to see the man's face. In an attempt to get revenge for Elizabeth's refusal of his marriage proposal, Mr Collins tells Lady Catherine that he caught Elizabeth in a compromising position with a man, and they conspire to force Elizabeth to marry the man she was caught with. All hell breaks loose when Darcy steps forward to satisfy their demands.
Not only have I seen this same premise before, but I didn't like it any better then than I did now. Of course, Lady Catherine is upset and gets really ugly when she's faced with her folly, and with losing Darcy for her own daughter. Mr Collins gets ugly and ridiculous. Darcy is still upset over Elizabeth's refusal, and Elizabeth is livid that she's now forced into a betrothal she doesn't want. In other words, we're in for a story just dripping with acrimony, with no joy to be found, and with a huge uphill battle to achieve resolution. For most of the book Elizabeth is at her most pig-headed and implacable self, refusing to give an inch until the story is almost over.
If you're looking for romance, this isn't it. If you like a ton of angst and contention, then this is for you. I never really felt any chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy. Darcy loves Elizabeth, but he's so fearful and regretful in the face of her resentment that he hardly shows it. The Bennett family members are portrayed as cartoonishly bad and crass. I didn't really want Darcy to be saddled with them. Elizabeth is so stubbornly abusive of Darcy that I didn't like her at all. Where was our kind, brave, and optimistic Elizabeth? Nowhere to be found.
The book is written well enough, and the author knows how to construct a story. However, it's not my cup of tea, and doesn't have what I'm looking for when I read JAFF. I can't really recommend it.
I think I've come across this same premise for a P&P variation in another book. The story begins with the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage. Darcy storms out of the house, but leaves his gloves behind. Elizabeth runs after him to return them, not wanting anyone to know that he was there, in the house with her, alone. She meets up with him, they argue again, and suddenly they're kissing each other passionately. Unfortunately, Mr Collins witnesses the kiss, recognizing Elizabeth, but not able to see the man's face. In an attempt to get revenge for Elizabeth's refusal of his marriage proposal, Mr Collins tells Lady Catherine that he caught Elizabeth in a compromising position with a man, and they conspire to force Elizabeth to marry the man she was caught with. All hell breaks loose when Darcy steps forward to satisfy their demands.
Not only have I seen this same premise before, but I didn't like it any better then than I did now. Of course, Lady Catherine is upset and gets really ugly when she's faced with her folly, and with losing Darcy for her own daughter. Mr Collins gets ugly and ridiculous. Darcy is still upset over Elizabeth's refusal, and Elizabeth is livid that she's now forced into a betrothal she doesn't want. In other words, we're in for a story just dripping with acrimony, with no joy to be found, and with a huge uphill battle to achieve resolution. For most of the book Elizabeth is at her most pig-headed and implacable self, refusing to give an inch until the story is almost over.
If you're looking for romance, this isn't it. If you like a ton of angst and contention, then this is for you. I never really felt any chemistry between Elizabeth and Darcy. Darcy loves Elizabeth, but he's so fearful and regretful in the face of her resentment that he hardly shows it. The Bennett family members are portrayed as cartoonishly bad and crass. I didn't really want Darcy to be saddled with them. Elizabeth is so stubbornly abusive of Darcy that I didn't like her at all. Where was our kind, brave, and optimistic Elizabeth? Nowhere to be found.
The book is written well enough, and the author knows how to construct a story. However, it's not my cup of tea, and doesn't have what I'm looking for when I read JAFF. I can't really recommend it.
August 11, 2022
Truly well done! A simple yet sweet variation
What happens when the staid and reticent Mr. Darcy suddenly gives in to his emotions and does the unthinkable while being observed? Due to the extraordinary compromising circumstance, Elizabeth Bennet is forced to marry the man she initially despised and vowed never to marry. Yet, in the course of their courtship and engagement, Elizabeth Bennet gradually learns there is a different side of Darcy she never knew, and slowly falls in love with him all the while Mr. Darcy thinking she will never care for him.
The beautiful thing about this variation is it focuses on Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, which, in my opinion, is the most essential elements in every Pride & Prejudice variation. Their journey towards love and understanding is the crux of this story which makes it so affecting, endearing and heart-tugging. The light exchanges between the couple helped establish this foundation of friendship and eventually love as Elizabeth Bennet realizes that Mr. Darcy is indeed the best husband for her.
It somewhat irked me though that it took Elizabeth so long to read a letter she was meant to read, and the misunderstandings and hurt feelings would have been swiftly resolved if she had done so. However, I understand how the author needed to use it as a tool of angst between the lovers.
This variation is highly recommended,and will be acquired and read repeatedly by me as it has become one of my favorite variations.
What happens when the staid and reticent Mr. Darcy suddenly gives in to his emotions and does the unthinkable while being observed? Due to the extraordinary compromising circumstance, Elizabeth Bennet is forced to marry the man she initially despised and vowed never to marry. Yet, in the course of their courtship and engagement, Elizabeth Bennet gradually learns there is a different side of Darcy she never knew, and slowly falls in love with him all the while Mr. Darcy thinking she will never care for him.
The beautiful thing about this variation is it focuses on Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, which, in my opinion, is the most essential elements in every Pride & Prejudice variation. Their journey towards love and understanding is the crux of this story which makes it so affecting, endearing and heart-tugging. The light exchanges between the couple helped establish this foundation of friendship and eventually love as Elizabeth Bennet realizes that Mr. Darcy is indeed the best husband for her.
It somewhat irked me though that it took Elizabeth so long to read a letter she was meant to read, and the misunderstandings and hurt feelings would have been swiftly resolved if she had done so. However, I understand how the author needed to use it as a tool of angst between the lovers.
This variation is highly recommended,and will be acquired and read repeatedly by me as it has become one of my favorite variations.
January 8, 2023
There were things I enjoyed about this book and things I didn’t. There were some sweet moments between D&E. I thought it was especially sweet when he bought her the bracelets she liked. I liked that they had some courtship time to get to know one another better and to develop their relationship. I thought the chemistry and romance was nice and appreciated that we could see Elizabeth’s journey in slowly overcoming many of her prejudices about Darcy. The fact that Elizabeth receives Darcy’s letter then forgets about it for so long is something I did not like or find at all believable. I understand that in the moment she receives it, they are interrupted and she would have been distracted for a few hours, but since all she thinks about is Darcy from then on out, it’s too hard to believe she would never come back to the letter. Especially when Darcy reminded her of it shortly after he gave it to her when he realized she didn’t read it. I couldn’t imagine our Lizzy forgetting once, but forgetting twice was just a ridiculous notion to force a plot point. Her curiosity would have been so aroused that there’s no way she’s going to bed without knowing what he had written.
Overall, I liked this story and am glad I read it, but probably would not read it again.
Overall, I liked this story and am glad I read it, but probably would not read it again.
August 8, 2024
The premise of this book is a familiar one in JAFF: a premature marriage brought about by an inadvertent compromise. Here, this happens when Elizabeth is staying at Hunsford, just after Darcy's disastrous proposal. Of the similarly premised compromise books, I thought Beauford did perhaps the best job in developing this plot in a nuanced way with the perfect amount/type of conflict.
Her characters were believably themselves. Darcy is not all of a sudden Mrs Bennet's best friend. Elizabeth does not fall in love with Darcy after two shakes of a lamb's tail. They have to work on things and the romance develops at a reasonable pace. Too many authors like to completely solve every problem immediately; this book is not afraid to have characters continuously dislike things because that's what their personality demands. Elizabeth is stubborn and easily annoyed by Darcy's bad behavior, while Darcy is susceptible to spells of gloominess and sulking. Elizabeth needs a lot to convince herself that Darcy is a good man and one she could choose to marry, while Darcy does his duty and acts considerately, but also in a way designed to bother Elizabeth.
The dialogue works, the characters work, the pacing is great, the romance has tension and catharsis. Great book, will reread sometime.
Her characters were believably themselves. Darcy is not all of a sudden Mrs Bennet's best friend. Elizabeth does not fall in love with Darcy after two shakes of a lamb's tail. They have to work on things and the romance develops at a reasonable pace. Too many authors like to completely solve every problem immediately; this book is not afraid to have characters continuously dislike things because that's what their personality demands. Elizabeth is stubborn and easily annoyed by Darcy's bad behavior, while Darcy is susceptible to spells of gloominess and sulking. Elizabeth needs a lot to convince herself that Darcy is a good man and one she could choose to marry, while Darcy does his duty and acts considerately, but also in a way designed to bother Elizabeth.
The dialogue works, the characters work, the pacing is great, the romance has tension and catharsis. Great book, will reread sometime.
January 15, 2024
I loved this variation. The book premise is that Darcy and Elizabeth must marry following a compromise, witnessed by Mr. Collins and a servant. Gossip ensues, and because Mr. Collins did not see the face of the man he had seen with his cousin, Lady Catherine and he try to threaten her and badger her into naming the man. It all backfires on them when Darcy steps forward admit it was him. To save Elizabeth's reputation, he tells his aunt and Mr. Collins that he had just proposed to Elizabeth.
The story is well-written and drew me in immediately. Several characters, other than ODC were so entertaining, particularly Colonel Fitzwilliam when he gives Darcy advice on wooing his soon to be wife.
There is plenty of angst, some very tender and sweet moments, and a great story here, so I highly recommend this read.
The story is well-written and drew me in immediately. Several characters, other than ODC were so entertaining, particularly Colonel Fitzwilliam when he gives Darcy advice on wooing his soon to be wife.
There is plenty of angst, some very tender and sweet moments, and a great story here, so I highly recommend this read.
May 27, 2022
Another compromise
I don't like forced marriages but at least we know early on they plan to marry. Unconscionable that Elizabeth forgot the letter for so long. I think their hot/ cold behavior was somewhat realistic. What did not seem realistic to me was that he was familiar with the park near her Uncle's Cheapside home, an hour's walk away from Mayfair. It is hard to tell with Darcy, but he did seem to be unhappy to be in Cheapside, so for it to hold childhood memories seemed odd. Why would his father have felt more at home there? Here was not from trade. Also needs more careful editing as there are missing words that change the meaning of sentences, and other sentences that just make no sense.
I don't like forced marriages but at least we know early on they plan to marry. Unconscionable that Elizabeth forgot the letter for so long. I think their hot/ cold behavior was somewhat realistic. What did not seem realistic to me was that he was familiar with the park near her Uncle's Cheapside home, an hour's walk away from Mayfair. It is hard to tell with Darcy, but he did seem to be unhappy to be in Cheapside, so for it to hold childhood memories seemed odd. Why would his father have felt more at home there? Here was not from trade. Also needs more careful editing as there are missing words that change the meaning of sentences, and other sentences that just make no sense.
July 29, 2022
This is a low angst Pride and Prejudice variation with a compromise that is witnessed by a vengeful Mr. Collins leading to a forced marriage.
The tale itself makes sense, follows a medium pace and is generally pretty wholesome.
But I didn’t fall for it, and I wish certain aspects, like Elizabeth’s shame in clinging to her preconceived notions about Wickham and Darcy and Darcy’s abhorrence for the majority of the Bennet clan were addressed to a more satisfying degree.
I will say that the romance itself was sweet, and an actively courting Darcy is my favourite version of him.
But while I wouldn’t discourage anyone from this story, I will say that it’s not exactly a favourite and leave it at that.
The tale itself makes sense, follows a medium pace and is generally pretty wholesome.
But I didn’t fall for it, and I wish certain aspects, like Elizabeth’s shame in clinging to her preconceived notions about Wickham and Darcy and Darcy’s abhorrence for the majority of the Bennet clan were addressed to a more satisfying degree.
I will say that the romance itself was sweet, and an actively courting Darcy is my favourite version of him.
But while I wouldn’t discourage anyone from this story, I will say that it’s not exactly a favourite and leave it at that.
December 12, 2025
Felt very similar to other book by author, in lots of places.
Here, the misunderstanding is so unconvincing. Darcy gives Elizabeth the letter, and she forgets to read it even after he reminds her again. And, he thinks she read it, even though she never said anything about the content of the letter. Like what even?
Then, we have darcy saying he loves her multiple times. Then, when he is distant for few days, Elizabeth immediately jumps to the conclusion that he is over her now? Again, what?
The scenes felt choosy, lots of darcy interacting with Gardiner kids and being cute.. But, nothing meaningful to develop E&D. The banter in the other book was non existent here. And, Darcy had no personality
Here, the misunderstanding is so unconvincing. Darcy gives Elizabeth the letter, and she forgets to read it even after he reminds her again. And, he thinks she read it, even though she never said anything about the content of the letter. Like what even?
Then, we have darcy saying he loves her multiple times. Then, when he is distant for few days, Elizabeth immediately jumps to the conclusion that he is over her now? Again, what?
The scenes felt choosy, lots of darcy interacting with Gardiner kids and being cute.. But, nothing meaningful to develop E&D. The banter in the other book was non existent here. And, Darcy had no personality
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August 22, 2022
Kaitlyn reading more dubious “Pride and Prejudice” fanfic??? Shocker, I know. 🫠
This wasn’t nearly the worst P&P fic I’ve ever read, but it definitely wasn’t the greatest, either. The number of times that Elizabeth “forgot” to read Darcy’s letter felt like the biggest contrivance to me — I can swallow that plot device once or twice, but after he’s repeatedly asked her to read it, and it’s clearly important to him? Lizzy is too intelligent to just let that slide. This is a fun, lighthearted little romp, and I won’t pretend that I’m not a sucker for the forced marriage trope, but I doubt I’ll be revisiting this one.
This wasn’t nearly the worst P&P fic I’ve ever read, but it definitely wasn’t the greatest, either. The number of times that Elizabeth “forgot” to read Darcy’s letter felt like the biggest contrivance to me — I can swallow that plot device once or twice, but after he’s repeatedly asked her to read it, and it’s clearly important to him? Lizzy is too intelligent to just let that slide. This is a fun, lighthearted little romp, and I won’t pretend that I’m not a sucker for the forced marriage trope, but I doubt I’ll be revisiting this one.
October 4, 2023
Oh, this book is perfect for those who want a compromise and an unkind and unrelenting Elizabeth Bennet. Perfect. Myself, I did not appreciate the fact that she would be waspish and snide in her speaking to Darcy, then be all "why does he not attend me" whiney. However, taking that out of the equation, it is a perfect example of karmic rebounding, as the revenge Mr. Collins intended on Elizabeth for turning him down was then, in every way, opposite of what he intended. I loved that. Charlotte was well-written, for her part, and the Gardiners were every good example. It was, overall, a great addition in this year's TBR challenge!
July 18, 2022
Can Mr.Darcy convince her that he loves her? Can she admit that she feels the same?
From one botched upon proposal to a resounding rejection, Mr. Darcy has been trying to gain the approbation of Miss Elizabeth Bennet. True to form, theirs has been, a series of misunderstandings. No doubt, much had to be due to a failure to open up one's heart. You'll appreciate the introduction of the Gardiner children and their and the mutual respect between Mr. Darcy and Miss Elizabeth's family.
From one botched upon proposal to a resounding rejection, Mr. Darcy has been trying to gain the approbation of Miss Elizabeth Bennet. True to form, theirs has been, a series of misunderstandings. No doubt, much had to be due to a failure to open up one's heart. You'll appreciate the introduction of the Gardiner children and their and the mutual respect between Mr. Darcy and Miss Elizabeth's family.
March 2, 2025
Le variazioni di questa scrittrice mi piacciono perché inquadrano bene l'essenza di Darcy con tutte le sue luci, ma anche le sue ombre.
È perfettamente lui. E ci piace così com' è! È meraviglioso quando entra nel salone di sua zia e dichiara il suo nome. È senza dubbio un gentiluomo quando decide di sposare Elizabeth per salvarla dai pettegolezzi. Ed è stupendo lungo tutto il romanzo. Anche quando si arrabbia, quando è infinitamente triste e quando diventa freddo ed insensibile. È Darcy. E viene descritto perfettamente. Perciò l'autrice si merita 5 stelle
È perfettamente lui. E ci piace così com' è! È meraviglioso quando entra nel salone di sua zia e dichiara il suo nome. È senza dubbio un gentiluomo quando decide di sposare Elizabeth per salvarla dai pettegolezzi. Ed è stupendo lungo tutto il romanzo. Anche quando si arrabbia, quando è infinitamente triste e quando diventa freddo ed insensibile. È Darcy. E viene descritto perfettamente. Perciò l'autrice si merita 5 stelle
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May 25, 2022
Very delightful variation without Wickham and Caroline.
An interesting twist. I have read many Variations and I always want someone to stop Mrs. Bennett's, Kitty and Lydia's behavior. This version improved Elizabeth's feelings for Darcy at a more reasonable path. I would recommend this book for a pleasant evening read.
An interesting twist. I have read many Variations and I always want someone to stop Mrs. Bennett's, Kitty and Lydia's behavior. This version improved Elizabeth's feelings for Darcy at a more reasonable path. I would recommend this book for a pleasant evening read.
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