A secret kept, a queen hidden, and her warriors lost.
Afflicted by a mysterious and terrible illness that's haunted me since childhood, I’ve resigned myself to living life as a burden to my family. Until a fae knight comes to my village and tells me that everything I know is a lie.
It seems impossible, but he swears that I’m a fae queen, raised in the mortal realm for my own safety. And the time has come for me to return home to Faerie and rule.
Only my queendom isn’t what it once was. It’s fractured, divided, broken. And the men of my royal guard—a group of deadly and eccentric warriors sworn to protect me—have disappeared, scattered to the wind. I have to reunite them if I want to have any chance of surviving the war that has consumed the land, and the invaders at our gates.
This is a slow burn reverse harem novel intended for mature readers only.
Marie Mistry is a reality challenged reverse harem romance author whose books are full of pirates, magic, and spicy adventures. When she's not writing, you can usually find her curled up with a game or a book and a large cup of tea. She lives in a wonky cottage in Kent with her other half and a super sweet shepherd named Meg.
This was pretty good!! And then it was boring. Then it was good again, and then it was boring hahaha I don't really know how I feel about this one
The plot was actually very good, very engaging. The writing was decent. The worldbuilding wasn't too bad, I had a great time overall. So how come I couldn't connect to any of the characters at all? 🤨
The first 50%, I thought it was just because the world was still setting up for me. The fmc, Rose, was okay, easier to relate to I guess since this book is mostly in her POV. The MMCs on the other hand.
This is a slowburn so I understood why I felt a lil disconnected to the MMCs at first. But then I finished the book and I realized I genuinely couldn't care less about any of them lol
I thought I liked Jaromir at first, he was your Resident Good Guy™ and he had the perfect recipe to become the swooniest but then he became too boring. Like everything he did was predictable because you know.. he's the good guy of the group. Gotta serve his purpose and all.
And then Drystan was the Dick™, which I was excited for at first because if you know me you know my favorite is always the asshole. But then I started mixing him up with Jaromir, even read an entire chapter of his POV thinking it was Jaro LMAOOO hate it when the MMCs start to blur together.
Oh, and when I finally got read his "moment" with Rose, I got SO bored I couldn't wait for the entire thing to end.
Then Lorcan who appears to be the crowd favorite.. and I agree, he was the psycho of the group and had the best one liners. Definitely better than the first two. But he also wasn't all that. Like he wasn't enough to carry the whole entire series, no offense.
And Bree, well my heart broke for him. And I guess I liked him? His story made me sad so I guess out of all the guys I wanted to see his development more, but like it's okay if I didn't 😭
Lastly, the enemy of the harem, but also part of the harem, Caed, who I think is supposed to have the enemies to lovers arc with Rose, but ain't gonna lie chief he's playing the enemy role way too damn hard. Like, maybe he could just stay being the enemy, you know what I'm saying?
For Rose, she was a little bit naive but that was expected. I'm not obsessed with her or anything but she was at least likeable.
Now that I think about it more, the only characters I was actually invested in was Katarni, the high priestess, and the knight twins, who were in the book for probably like 60 seconds of screen time, and talked a total of two sentences lol
And I also think this was a bit too long? around 60% in I thought this was at least a 4 star read, but then it kept dragging and dragging and I got super bored
Oh well. I did research on the next books in the series and I don't really like where this story seem to be going, and I read a bit of the second book and I didn't like that either, but this is still a pretty decent series despite all that so I think I might continue this once the series is completed.
As soon as I saw that glossary, I should have assumed this book was not written for me. I feel like it's a lot of world-building and the romance is a waiting game.
I DNF at 27%, so my opinion is based only up to this point.
The world-building is in no way a bad thing. I understand that it is necessary and this is a 4 part series, but I think (for me) this made the plot drag slightly.
Up to 27%, we had only met 3 members of the harem, so it’s definitely a slow burn situation. However, I'm struggling to see any connection between them, probably due to the lack of intimate moments. I don't need a lot, but beyond the statement that they are ‘fated mates’ I’m not getting the envious feeling I want from a romance.
This might be a situation of pushing through to a certain chapter, because I do like the writing style. However, I started this 2 weeks ago and have tried it again today, and have the same feelings.
When Marie Mistry announced a new fantasy RH series loosely connected to The Deadwood series (one of my favorite RH series), I was both so excited and a bit nervous because what if it didn't meet my expectations? This first book in The Fifth Nicnevin series blew my expectations away. I loved Rose as the FMC who had no idea who/what she was, her Guard which is made up of five intriguing and very different males, and this beautiful but dangerous world she's built with her version of Faerie. The story is told in first person, multi-POV. There's no ow/om drama, no mm/ff, the FMC is a virgin but it doesn't appear any of her Guard are (and one has a background of abuse in this area), and this is a slow burn romance with little heat in this first book.
The book begins with Rose thinking she's human and living in a small village. She's been ill and physically limited her whole life. Her whole world upends when she learns that she's actually fae and her illnesses are related to that. Rose is taken back to Faerie because she happens to be the rightful ruler who was hidden away because of visions her mother had. A lot of information and challenges come at Rose quickly throughout the book, but through it all she's starting to grow. My favorite FMCs are more vulnerable ones with great character growth arcs and I see Rose as being one of these. She's vulnerable and overwhelmed, but she's still curious, caring, and there are hints of strength.
Her Guard are a hot mess to start with clashing personalities, including a villain who's part of an invading army, and quite a bit of internal angst. I'm excited to see where the group will go from this start individually and once they actually form a unit. I don't have a favorite yet and I've seen a lot of readers seem to prefer the more unhinged harem member, but I saw a lot of potential for all of them, which is also how I felt about the harems in Ms. Mistry's other stories. But there's definitely a personality I think for everyone with a more protective male, a broody/distant one, an emotionally broken male, an unhinged but obsessed one, and then the bad guy who we're still trying to get a feel for.
Lots of world building is laid out here and foundations for the characters. Some interesting side characters are introduced and there's a potential animal side kick that I am 1000% on board for. Quite a bit of action is taking place and some pretty emotional times as well. The story does end on a cliffhanger, but it's not as bad as some I've read personally. I'm incredibly psyched for book 2.
Fantastic Fae Fantasy If you love folklore, particularly Gaelic, in a Lord of the Rings inspired world then this is absolutely the RH for you! Marie creates a fantastical world drawing deeply on all kinds of mythology to bring the Fae alive, there’s your traditional beliefs of what Fae maybe and then there’s all these different kinds too (there’s a great glossary/guide at the beginning) welding all different types of magic and abilities! Although the land itself has been struggling without its High Queen the MicNevin…. Rose has grew up in the very sheltered human world oblivious to the mysticism around her! It’s not until a stranger turns up and starts to explain that fate may have a whole plan laid for her beyond the faerie gate 😄 Naive, innocent and undoubtedly scared she throws herself into learning as much as she can about the Faerie world, but don’t let that fool you she has a spin of steel and corpse to go with to undertake the tasks ahead of her! Starting with finding her guard; there’s the protective wolf; the slightly psychotic assassin, one who’s damaged but sweet and then the asshole….oh and let’s not forget the sworn enemy 🙈🙈 there’s some brilliant connections being built and definitely some questions being raised 🥰 can’t wait to see where this series goes!
Loved it! Excellent start to a new High Fantasy series. This is the second series I've read from this author (or am reading?) and I'm thinking I need to read everything she's published now.
We start out with an FMC who's a bit older (25? I think, older for romance novels. After college age is basically a dinosaur in the world romance🙄) and has been sick for a long time but lots of adventure is just around the corner! She learns she's not human at all she's really a Fae Queen in hiding, sounds like the start of every fantasy romance novel I know, but this series really is unique and the author has a talent for the kind of world building that can be hard to find in reverse harem novels. I don't want to give too much storyline away so take my word when I say you won't get bored with this one. Also, this is a Slow Burn so far.
Onto the Characters! Lorcan!!! OMG, This Psycho! He's insane in all the best ways. The author was channeling Mad Hatter when she wrote this character except no one's taking naps or having tea time. No, our Mad Hatter is popping up all over the place with his "blinking power" and stabbing everyone who looks at our girl wrong while taking her on stargazing picnic dates.
Then we have Drystan who has the Grump/Sunshine personality with more Grump for now. Once again, the author was channeling some classic with this character, he's basically the headless horseman of the wild hunt. Sleepy Hollow goes Fae.
Next up is a beast of a man Jaromir who (going a bit traditional with this one) can turn into a wolf. He's a soldier who was tasked with watching over the FMC as she grew up, this is my first issue, for a guy who spend 25 years watching over someone from the shadows he seems to know nothing about his fated mate, you would think he would have a direct line to her thoughts after spending all that time watching over her but he's kind of clueless.
Onto Bricriu which starts with my second complaint, The Names! Why do they have to be as fantastical as the storyline? I get them so confused! I know we're in a Tolkien Fantasy here and names like Greg and John aren't going to cut it but if I can't figure out how to pronounce it, I won't remember it, and learning a new word here and there is fine but we have a large cast of characters (a whole court worth) and I can't keep up with all the new fanatical names. Thankfully the author did use nicknames for the main characters which helps some so Bricriu is called Bree, who can turn use the power of 3 different animals that are tattooed on his body. He can pull a whole animal from the tattoo or borrow partial forms, like bird wings and cat ears which he wears a lot Can you imagine a man with large raven like black wings and cat ears? So cute. Bree is a damaged soul that I just want to bundle up and protect forever. His mental scars make it hard for him to be intimate but that doesn't stop him from stalking our FMC from balconies and gardens. He just can't stop watching her, it heals his battered soul.
Last, we have our Enemies to Lovers pick Caed who is the prince of a mysterious group of warriors that come on boats to pillage and kill. The Fae have been at war with them for centuries and no one really knows what started it. It's as mysterious as Caed himself who can't quite figure out if he wants to capture and imprison the FMC or not.
I'm sure you'll fall in love with this fun cast of interesting characters.
*+:。.。 3 stars for Lore and the world-building 。.。:+*
When I first started reading this I thought it was a standalone and I was so worried about the romance because nothing really happened 💀😭 but it makes so much sense now bye.
Anyway, I LOVED LORE 😭😭 He was so psychotic and crazy and he had me obsessed- he's like a golden retriever version of the mad hatter. He was so entertaining.
I'm not too sure where I stand with the other guys just yet but we'll see- there just wasn't enough of them 'being love interests' imo 🤷♀️.
Overall this was a really solid introduction to the story. You can tell that a lot of thought went into this world and it shows. I loved all the magic and fantasy aspects of this book. I wasn't too sold on the RH part of it, but I'm hopeful for the next one.
Where do I even start? I finished this book hours ago and still can’t think of a way to word my review that will do it justice. Marie has done it again. Bringing yet another fantastical world for readers to get lost in.
This book introduces Rose, a woman who’s world is completely flipped upside down when she turns 25. She is immediately thrust in to a vivid world of intrigue, magic and dangers that she didn’t know existed. Rose is preciously naive and it was almost comical watching her learn new things.
Her harem is made up of several different kinds of fae and I loved the lore behind each one of them. They all have unique personalities and while we only learn a bit about them in this book, I’m excited to see how each relationship unfolds. Marie does an excellent job at taking each relationship at its own pace. As well as giving each character a worthy story to back up their personality traits.
This world building was vivid and beautiful and I found myself wanting to be discovering it along side Rose. Marie did a great job researching fae lore and putting her own twist on it. I can’t wait to see where she takes this series next and I’m so excited to be part of the ride.
3.5 stars rounded down to three, because the second book was much better.
In the first book of The Fifth Nicnevin there is a lot of world building. That why it was too slow going for my liking. It's a good start to the series, but I prefer the plot to be a little faster. The relationship building is done slowly, which is a good thing. And I like that one of the MMCs is more broken than the FMC. And the other MMC is a loveable but very crazy guy.
I'm looking forward how the story continues in book 2.
I can't believe how many RH fantasy books I stumbled upon recently and this one's even in the High-fantasy genre.
‧₊˚ ⋅ Actual rating: 4.5🌟‧₊˚ ⋅
⤏ What to expect: ∘ Adult High-fantasy Romance ∘ Reverse Harem - size: medium (5) ∘ Multiple POV ∘ Fae & Royalty ∘ Complex worldbuilding ∘ Gradual Character Development ∘ Villain as member of Harem ∘ Virgin FMC ∘ Unhinged MMCs (most of them) ∘ Tension 🔥 ∘ Heavy in Folklore & Mythology ⤏ Tropes: ∘ Slowburn ∘ Fated Mates ∘ "Touch her and die" ∘ Enemies to Lovers
⤏ Trigger Warnings: violence & gore, mention of sexual assault, mention of rape, PTSD, death, war themes, enslavement, depiction of trauma, kidnapping
⤏ Plot & Writing
It's been so long since I've read a book so rich in worldbuilding and lore, the inspiration behind it being Gaelic. Thank God we had a glossary! But even without it, I wouldn't have been completely lost because the author skillfully ensures we get the necessary information by having other characters explain things in relevant situations.
Rose has spent her 25 years in the human realm, battling an illness with no known cure, facing disdain from others for her perceived weakness, and with no knowledge of her true heritage.
On her 25th birthday, a Fae Knight arrives, turning her world upside down. She embarks on a journey to reclaim her throne and reunite her Guard―a group of warriors sworn to protect her.
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A fast-paced plot that, despite the speed at which things are progressing, does not lose its essence. Being ignorant because of her upbringing, Rose has to learn everything from zero. So this journey is both a discovery for her and a captivating experience for the reader.
I was so impressed by the worldbuilding—so many places to explore, so many creatures and species to learn about. Some were terrifying, some harmless, but despite learning about a few of them, there are still many more we have yet to encounter. The world is described in such a magical way that I wouldn't know what to compare it to. It seemed the inhabitants of the Faerie realm had a deep respect for nature, and everything was handled with care.
The perspectives of the other male characters helped us understand a lot more about the world and the circumstances our protagonist found herself in. It also served to introduce us to the characters who will accompany us on this journey.
⤏ Characters ∘ Rhoswyn We learn pretty quickly that Rose is a Queen considered to be the reincarnation of the Fae's Goddess, Danu, and was sent to the human world by the Goddess when she was only an infant. She's innocent in a world full of creatures that either revere her or look to take advantage of her.
What I found even more interesting was the fact that she has three Guides who have been with her from the beginning and helped her every step of the way. I loved them from the start and only grew to appreciate their presence more.
Rose is still naïve, and her lack of knowledge about the Fae turns out to be a problem more often than not. However, she wants to learn more about this world she's supposedly a part of—her role, her powers, her partners... everything. I appreciated her determination, and it was a pleasure to watch her slow progress throughout this book.
She still has a long way to go, but I'm here to stay.
∘ The MMCs Her Guard consists of five male members, and while I'm used to the male leads being all-powerful beings, this one took a slightly different approach. They are still special and powerful, but they are not of the highest rank in their respective courts, as you'd probably expect.
Drystan - a member of The Hunt, the last of his kind― still not sure what that is, based on the ability he shows at the beginning of the book, he might be a headless horseman (?). As a winter Fae, he's as cold as you'd expect and can be rude at times, seemingly lacking patience and unwilling to muster empathy. Jaromyr - a loyal Knight & a powerful shifter. He's the only one, besides Drystan, that can keep a straight head (pun intended, lol). He's a good leader and consistently prioritizes the well-being of others over his own. I have a feeling he may already harbor feelings for Rose, even if he hasn't realized it yet.. Lorcan - an unhinged murderous red-cap. His obsession with our FMC is clear as day, as is the fact that he is indeed quite crazy. I actually don't mind his type of craziness; it's rather... adorable? Perhaps it's not quite right to say that, but oh well... Bricriu - a tormented puca, yet undeniably powerful. My heart broke for him; he faces a long journey to heal from the trauma he's endured. I'm sure he'll receive all the support he needs. Caedmon - a Formorian, enemy of the Fae. He's a complicated male, that can't even distinguish what it is he wants and what it is he should want. Essentially, he struggles to understand his own desires and motivations. The poor prince is both confused and confusing as hell.
The controversy surrounding Rose's Guard primarily revolves around two members being what they consider 'under-fae', species not of high fae status. Little do they know, the fifth member is the son of their enemy and heir to his throne.
Despite their differences, they are all fiercely protective and possessive when it comes to Rose, except for Caedmon. While he cares for her, his actions are often questionable. I hope he soon realizes the extent of his mistakes and finds a way to rectify them, as he has made too many grave errors. I really liked him in the beginning, but my opinion of him changed by the end. I wish it hadn't...
⤏ Romance The intricacies of the romantic dynamics are complicated. While she instantly clicked with some of the men in her Guard, there's still some hesitation when it comes to the others. I have no doubt that things will escalate soon, but apart from occasional stolen kisses (mostly by Lorcan, the sneaky one), the tension and burning attraction among the harem members remain unaddressed.
⤏ Conclusion Beyond the Faerie Gate is a perfect read for the RH lovers out there who are looking for a series rich in worldbuilding and where the romance takes a backseat in the first installment. Rose and her male companions offer a captivating journey, and I wholeheartedly suggest giving this series a chance.
I have no words to describe how much I loved this book, Marie wrote another masterpiece and it’s impossible not to give it 5 stars, everything from the world building, to the characters to the writing was incredible, I just can’t wait to read the next one and see where Marie takes us.
OH MY GODDESS, this book has the most deliciously unhinged fae warriors (especially Lorcan, you beautiful psychotic cinnamon roll). Eating it up and so starved for more, I might start actually biting my Kindle. The world-building is EVERYTHING, and if you don't immediately fall in love with this magical realm and its band of protective, slightly murderous guard members who would literally kill for their queen, then I don't know what to tell you except YOU'RE MISSING OUT!!!
I was really looking forward to this book but I'm feeling a smidge let down.
The writing is lovely, but I want less descriptive language about the fae realm and more character/ relationship development (or a balance of the two plzzz??). I feel like I still don't fully understand each Guard or Roses relationship to them because there has literally been no intimate moments. 😮💨 I'm not talking sex (although there's none of that either), I'm talking a sense of closeness and connecting more deeply to one another. She hasn't *really* gotten close to any of them the entire book?? Idk how but it's true lol.
Other than that, I do love the plot, the beauty of the realm, and the potential for the characters!
This was a great start into a new book about someone who grew up thinking they are human but are actually Fae. And a Queen at that. I like the guys, for the most part. I found myself wandering whenever Rose would get too detailed in the description of her surroundings, but I also understand with a Fae story it’s usually needed. I still don’t know why they dislike the other species of Fae or claim they aren’t Fae I suppose we will find out.
My favorite so far is Lore. He’s crazy for Rose lol.
Unique, lovable characters and brutal cliffhangers seem to be a theme within Marie's books, and I am really enjoying it!
⭐⭐⭐.5 🫑
This book was definitely unique and very easy to read! All of the lore and magic was very different from a lot of the Fae books I have read in the past. The characters all have very different personalities that keep you engaged, which is necessary for me in RH books.
I really enjoyed the easy plotline. This first book gives us a good introduction to the world and the characters. There is a lot of room for the relationships and worldbuilding to develop in the next books, which I found nice! A good amount of tension and banter throughout. This is definitely a slow burn, so I am super invested in seeing how everything unfolds in the next book. 💞
i do not like Caed, i get enemies to lovers esque arc, but there are LINES, he keeps crossing them i am scared to read book 2
the premise, setting and the writing is good it sucks you in, faes, 5 fated mates courts you get the gist.
i love lore and bree already, so court is out on the rest esp Caed, i don't want to say anything too spoilery
safety, 25-year-old virgin FMC mates are super duper old so and faes are horny mfers, but we are not told anything about their past so didn't bother too much
one of the mates was a sexual slave, so trigger warning
Three stars is basically a normal persons five so I promise I did like this book.
For its fantasy elements it was unique in its use of non conventional aspects of fae mythology and I really enjoyed seeing the diverse fae species and how the world interact with holidays such as Samhain. For a first book that was as long as it is, I was worried about pacing and my fragile attention span but to my pure joy the book moved fluidly and was clearly well planned out. The writing style was also easy going, avoiding a lot of the clunkyness that comes with fantasy sometimes.
I’m a sucker for reverse Haram books where the reason for multiple partners makes sense to the story and world they are in, however I did wish that there was more character insights and developments in this book considering it was 700 pages. All of the love interests had vague descriptions and even vaguer personalities beyond, the nice one, the mean one and the crazy one etc. Caedin’s story definitely is the one I’m sticking around for because he seems to be the only character with a back story worth exploring. As for our main girl Rose, I was probably most disappointed with how her character evolved, or rather didn’t. In the very first pages of the book Rose appears to be made of strong stuff, willing to move out and live on her own in a medieval world that isn’t the greatest place for a young woman. Yet the second she encounters her Guard she becomes an overly innocent almost infantilised character that’s main trait is saying “no please don’t fight” *puppy dog eyes*.
This woman is 25 years old and while I was willing to ignore some of her naivety due to her puritan upbringing, it got to the point where her constant mis-understanding of sexual innuendo was just embarrassing and uncomfortable. My final gripe with the book that I SWEAR I DID LIKE, is the lack of relationship building with Rose and her Guard. So many Mate trope books fail at this so hard and this one is no exception. An instant attraction sure, but half the fun of reading romance books is seeing the development of the relationships which is something we just don’t get here. Instead we get a grossly innocent heroine just being like “oh 5 husbands dope, I guess I love you all now.”
Excited for the second book but please Author little less focus on bodily tingles and more focus on actual conversation between romantic partners.
I LOVED this. I honestly cannot recommend it enough. It was so well written, with AMAZING storytelling and lore. Like the world building was fantastic.
I cannot wait for the second book. I feel like Rose has so much potential and I'm super excited to see her grow as a character. Plus, you know, more romance with her guard...
My only slight thing was Lorcan, the character, kind of annoyed me. He was a little much. Jaro was definitely my favorite for sure.
I feel like this deserves to be #1 on the fantasy reverse harem lists right now. It was so fantastical and romantic, without being corny. Often times the RH fantasy books are a little... cringe (although I still read them) but this definitely wasn't.
Anyways, give it a shot for sure. I love all of the Marie Mistry books I've read so far.
This is a GREAT book! The world building is good. I love Rose. She's strong, but not confident, which makes sense with the way she was raised. She needs to learn how to rely on herself. She's also sweet and fair. I like most of the MMCs. Jaro and Lore are my favorites. I feel sorry for Bree, but we don't get to see much of him. He's very traumatized, which is understandable. I want to see how their relationship will unfurl. I don't like Drystan. He's an absolute asshole for no other reason than he can be one. He mistreats Rose a lot. Caed... Well, I didn't like that last part. His cousin killed Rose, and I know he won't do anything to her (and I guess she's Florian's mate). He's on my shit list for now.
One thing I didn't like in this novel is how the power is imbalanced here. Rose is ignorant to everything, and the MMCs exploit that to hide things from her under the excuse they are protecting her. I mean, she was chosen by the goddess. They should be teaching her. She knows nothing about anything, and when she asks, the answers are almost condescending. It's very annoying. Sometimes they even ignore her completely! It feels like a red flag to me. They have all the power and she has none.
I hope Rose learns quicker in the next book because her ignorance is hindering her. They need to step up their game asap. And Caed needs to make up their mind.
I absolutely loved this romantasy. The plot was original and I felt connected to the characters. The slow burn love story and a reverse haram add a lovely bit of spice. I definitely can’t wait to see what’s next in their adventure.
A promising start to a series with a lot of intriguing worldbuilding. Rose is a sympathetic and likable main character. I am beyond frustrated with certain members of her guard who don't tell her crucial information to 'protect' her. Ugh. The conflict between the Fae and the Fomorians is a tantalizing mystery. I'll be checking out the rest in the series.
I haven't read a GOOD high fantasy in a while so this series has gripped me so fiercely. Rose is a FMC who's essentially tossed into faerie with insurmountable expectations and a slew of lore she didn't even know she was connected too. What I love about her is she's niave while still rising to the occasion. She sees what she needs to do and there is hiccups and a lot of hurt that surround it but she pushes herself because she feels that it's right. Her guard are unique and I love that she doesn't question her feelings surrounding what's right with them.
This book captured my heart from the very first chapter and I couldn’t put it down for even a second. This book is literally made of fae magic or something! The characters are all wonderful and distinctively unique, making the whole cast vibrant and dynamic. Rose is a great FMC who struggles with her new world but has amazing support from her group! (Excluding Caed >.< ofc.)
All in all this has become one of my favorite book series! ❤️
Entertaining and well written. World building is interesting.
That said, I found Rose to be deathly boring. I'm literally begging her to do something interesting. Her personality is literally "Sweet and innocent romance protagonist", which she is. But, like, she has literally nothing else distinguishing in her personality.
Also, maybe it's my fault for listening to the hype, but Lore was a major let-down. Literally just a murder-hobo.
Drystan and Bree are the only characters who don't feel like "Standard Issue RH Characters".
You have the sweet and naive, but OP fmc. The best friend character who literally does whatever Rose wants with no real agency of her own. The overprotective knight mmc. The older brother whose only defining trait is that he is an older brother. Literally, what else does Florian have going for him??
Like, I'm sure they'll get fleshed out more in the next books, but I was expecting more.
This is one of the most thoroughly average RHs I've ever read.