*minor SPOILERS throughout this review*
This book had a great premise and I was sold by the authors marketing, however, I ended up disappointed with this book. I think this could’ve been amazing if there’d only been more focus on the aspects of the book that was used to market it. Ie: the bodyguard romance, enemies to lovers (this may have only be alluded to by the author saying they dislike each other at first to be fair, I’m not positive she ever claimed enemies to lovers), the Hannah Montana vibes, and, most importantly, the suspense.
The author made a few confusing choices for this book, in my opinion. Starting with the fact that our bodyguard character, Heath, isn’t a bodyguard. He’s never had any sort of security job, been any sort of bodyguard, and he doesn’t even have a background of being in the military or a fighter of some sort, nothing. He was a construction worker who randomly decided to lie about his experience to become a security guard, I guess, because they’re paid better? And ending with the fact that the main bad guy/stalker shows up before the book starts, spends the majority of the book in jail while the MC is getting attacked randomly here and there, and then resurfaces again in the end. There was no real build up or suspense in any part of this novel.
I had the same problems with this book that I did with this author's Marionettes book and that’s two things:
1. It never felt like much/enough was happening. There was no clear throughline making the plot extremely weak imo. By which I mean, Parker's first interaction with her stalker happens before the book starts. Said stalker is then in jail for most of the book before showing up at the end for the final showdown. Meaning, there's no real suspense for most the book. There are no letters from the stalker from prison. Nothing but a few seemingly random attempts at killing Parker where no time is spent trying to figure out who's doing it and nothing links to the stalker so nothing is linking together to build suspense.
The few things that were happening often just didn't make sense to me. This is a personal thing, a I didn't suspend my disbelief far enough kind of thing. But a lot of the aspects with Parker and so many people wanting to kill her, I found hard to believe. These are some questions I had while reading:
How is this one random stalker so much more skilled than every security guard / cop / person he comes across?
How did he constantly find them?
How come her address keeps leaking? In real life, plenty of celebrities manage to keep that stuff secret, why are Parker's people so incapable of protecting her information?
Why do so many people want to hurt Parker? (Don't get me wrong, I know there are a lot of terrible people out there who send plenty of death threats to famous people. But most, as far as I know, don't go so far as to place a bomb under their car. Or throw a steel toed boot at them on stage.)
How did the stalker escape jail?
How did the stalker get pass their security system? If he was there before they got to the beach house, how did he know about it?
How did Heath get back to the house before the police?
And 2: the characters lacked depth and never managed to go beyond two dimensional archetypes. I’m going to use a line from the marketing again here, the author refers to Heath as an “intimidating bodyguard with a secret heart of gold”. Meanwhile, we’re shown from the very beginning in Heaths POV chapters (which the book starts with) that he’s a soft/sweet/caring person. There’s nothing secret about his “heart of gold”. I also found it really hard to see him as intimidating because of the aforementioned fact that he has no training. He's just a tall guy with muscles.
For a story about a Hannah Montana type superstar, Parker was a pretty uninteresting character. A lot of this has to do with the fact that we don’t get to see her as the famous pop star with a secret identity. We only see the aftermath of her secret being leaked. Besides being in danger because she's famous, there's really not much of her being a popstar in the book and nothing with her having to balance her identities or anything because that was made moot by the beginning of the story. There was no real depth to her, to her interactions with other characters (mainly because she spends most the book alone or with Heath), or her relationship with fame.
This is just something that personally annoyed me but nobody in this book likes to do their job. Heath did not take his job as a bodyguard very seriously. He had family things going on yes, but you're being paid a lot of money to do a job and you just keep leaving the person you're supposed to be guarding. Then there was the brief plot point of Parker not being able to get out of her contract with her record company. This could've been an interesting plot point and made sense if there was more time spent on it. If it was showed that the record company was pressuring her to get back out there before she was ready, if there was any real back and forth. Instead, it's just suddenly thrown in that she wants to quit and her record company won't let her. And, for me, it was hard to have sympathy, because, again, this is your job, of course you can't just randomly decide to quit with no repercussions. I think the author was trying to show how manipulative and controlling record companies can be but it missed the mark for me because there wasn't enough time building up that aspect of the book.
The romance was okay. I don't think it was terrible or anything but the lack of character development made me not particularly care about the romance one way or the other. The third act conflict was.. not the best, in my opinion, and by the end of the book I was skimming because I couldn't connect to either character so I didn't really care what happened by the end.
This review got away from me but, to be clear, I didn't hate this book. I found it really easy to read and I was pretty addicted in the first half. I think the writing itself was really good and easy to read. I just personally thought/wished it would've focused more on the suspense and building up the characters than it did, and that the plot had been a little stronger and more of a focus.