This is book four and the final book in the series and must be read in order. This contains spoilers for books one, two, and three so if you haven't read them, turn back now!
Aly, Nicoli, Jeremy, Jay, Kiran and Ajax have a lot on their plates as they try to keep themselves and the people they care about safe. They need to help Anna while protecting Aly, convince supernaturals that their mating is real and get the Hunters to stop coming after them. Not to mention Ryan is still out there with an agenda.
Will they be able to find their happily ever after or will the world get in their way?
*This is a medium burn, paranormal, reverse harem, meaning she doesn’t have to choose and book four of four in the series. The story changes POVs between the main character and her men. The steaminess factor will go up as the series goes on and is intended for 17+. This is 45,000 words and the final book in the series.*
This serie started so well!... but it got worse and worse🤦🏻♀️ The more time passed, the more the characters sounded more like immature teenagers always in heat! 🙄 It's easy to summarize this book: every ten pages they just f*ck! The story progressed so slowly that I skimmed a lot of these boring sex scenes... Not sexy anymore when it felt sex is just here to prolong the book! Usually, the last book of a serie should be the cherry on the cake and at least as good as the first one but here it fails badly...
This ending to the series sort of fell flat for me. The more spice that was added it felt like the more we lost the plot. I still found some sweet moments but I also myself skimming a few times. The book was wrapped up nicely with no questions other than what was going to happen with the spin-off series. It was a cute quick series and I’m glad I finished it.
Really disappointing. The story potential in this series was there. Unfortunately it really suffered from a lack of editing. In the first half of this last book alone I found over 10 spelling and punctuation errors and that was while speed reading. I stopped keeping track after that to be honest so I could skim and just finish the book. I don't mind occasional errors because people make mistakes but that's a lot for the first half of a short book and this was a common occurrence throughout all four books. It really took me out of it. The story felt very rushed and could have used some extra fluff. Sentences were very choppy and sometimes difficult to follow. The ending was kind of a let down and left some questions that may be answered with Anna's story but I will unfortunately be skipping that.
I liked the characters and the storyline had potential but fell flat. I also struggled with the writing style. It was very on the nose and gave off a children book vibe. For example, things were pointed out very clearly and the reader doesn’t have a chance to make inferences. Aly gets mad at someone in one paragraph and then they explain how they feel in the next paragraph. Then in the third paragraph she will think wow I really understand where they are coming from. I forgive them. What is the point of the conflict then if it’s over in less than 60 seconds of reading? Or like there was a scene with Jay cooking and Aly talks about how great he is for alway taking care of their little family. That’s an inference the reader can make on their own and it didn’t need to be spelled out so literally.
This was the worst story yet and it was the conclusion to the Saga (bar the bonus chapters in The Brickstone Univeristy book).
I literally finished this so the author can get paid on KU. There is absolutely no good storyline. It is a stream of consciousness that is just - this and then that and that and this and that and it is so badly written I am half convinced a human couldn't have written it.
If you want zero character development, zero side characters, shallow zero-depth main characters, zero descriptions, God awful communication/conversations and ridiculous action with a mix of spicy scenes which are also just terrible - read the book.
This book has a 2000 year old book that informs everyone of mates being between the six species - dark fae, light fae, shifters, mages, demons and hunters and a 3000 year old vampire happens to have a non-spelled version (great he was alive when the book was published), which they need because a confusion spell has been placed on the only supernatural copy, everyones memories wiped, our six fated mates then present this evidence to the Supernatural Council (god this scene is one of the worst), after stealing it from this obviously bad vampire [who accidentally killed his mate and wanted everyone to suffer forever] (another awful scene like wtaf was that - you go to his house, you're rude to him, you don't introduce yourselves - it was so badly written). At the Council meeting you tell them that you have a 4000 year old book that proved inter-species mating...what? You said 2000 in the last book...God it was terrible.
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I didn’t hate this series but I also didn’t love it. I found the storyline interesting and fun. And personally I love a little instalove when it comes to fated mates.
I feel like this series needed some fleshing out. Like a lot of fleshing out. There would be an issue but it was mostly used to prolong the story not add to the overall plot. Many roadblocks the MCs come across conveniently are cleared within a few paragraphs or at most a few pages. It interrupted the overall flow. There was zero character development, the guys were distinctly unique but everyone including the FMC was surface level. The dialogue is a little choppy and clunky, doesn’t feel like a real conversation someone would have.
This was a 3.5 ⭐️ series for me. If you are looking for something quick and sweet with lots of spice. I would recommend.
Very easy to read. Raunchy if you wanted but I skipped a lot. Different perspectives for supernaturals. I liked the combination of the mage, Nic keeps the pack together as the leader. Jay, the wolf shifter, fun loving but ready when needed. Jeremy the demon, which is very much his personality except with Aly. The twins, dark far Kiran and light far Ajax (Jax). And Aly, the hunter who didn't know a supernatural until she met one. The characters stayed true to their characters as the subject matter changed that helped the war end between hunters and supernaturals so if their true mates were in another species, they could be happier like Aly and her pack.
This book was crazy! They were able to get an amulet to help Anna control the sire bond so she doesn’t keep trying to kill Aly. They go to the supernatural council and convince them that fated mates can be of any species including hunters. Aly’s parents give helpful insight about the hunters and how to convince them. The Hunter elders are crazy and get imprisoned. They were the ones that erased that knowledge with the help of imprisoned mages. The hunters revolted and started to find their own mates. The council is going to take care of Ryan. This was such a good series. It was a fast read and had everything you want in a book.
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2 stars for the content and bonus 1 star for the spice 🔥 the book can just end in 1 or 2 books instead of 4 books with dreading smutty sences over and over.
the ending was predictable while how the plot resolved was too "gentle"? it felt like things weren't that tense since biginning with. just weird.
i love anna so much. the theory i had about her in the end was right. however i dont like the fact that author just skipped her phase and emotions. i understand she has her own series but just didn't make sense while aly and anna were bff. and author made aly sound like a whore who prefer her men more than her friend, which is so untrue 🤦🏻♀️
I read all these books in less than a week. I think about 4 days? I absolutely loved them!!!
-RH (obviously) with lots of 🌶️🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥 - I would say spice level is a solid 5/5 -Aly & Anne are BFF's who are super sweet to each other! Absolutely love their friendship. -over all story was great! Loved the character development and loved the relationship building between the characters. Made it seem much more genuine. - loved the fact that these characters are trying to go through college
It's a cute series but the writing could improve. I guess this book is slightly better written at times but it's inconsistent. There are some scenes where the characters could have been challenged, something not go as planned with more chaos, because it felt like they had an idea and the next moment they realised it. A lot of the actions lack details and could have been described better and some could have been cut. I'm curious if the author read the books one after the other when she was ready with them.. It gives another perspective on what looks enough and what is lacking.
Overall, I would give this series a 3.5/5. Each book is a quick read but it just feels like there was too much filler. There is something missing but I’m not entirely sure what it is.
This wasn’t my favorite writing style (almost seemed like a pay by chapter book or something written for online forums). I’m not sure if it’s just this series or if it’s the author’s writing style.
I would recommend if you are looking for something quick to pass the time.
So the first book was great. Great story and dialogue. Book 2 I was like, well it's a buffer. But then book 3 Fated, I kept having to remind myself they were seniors in college cause they sound like elementary kids. Everything was rushed and always worked in there favor. There was no challenge. Plus unanswered questions. What about Ryan... I feel this could have been better. Very disappointing
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So, by the time I got this book, I was over this series, but this is the last book, and we end with a HEA, and I really wanted to know how these guys end up. So I went ahead and read this book, and overall, I’m glad I know what happened, but I was left wanting a little bit more. It feels like we went through so much, but they didn’t overall. The series is kind of predictable. I wish there was a little more action and more HEA at the end since this is the fourth book.
This whole sits could have been one book 🤦🏼♀️. If you funny have kindle unlimited, I wouldn’t bother. This last book read the most rushed and there are SO many typos and grammar issues it hurts to read it
Also why would you ever a serious with loose ends? Went after this many big vamp baddie and then leave it unresolved?? So frustrating!
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My biggest issue for this book was the one I had for the series. There was no need to make this a series. Everything could have been wrapped up in one average size book. This paranormal story was an okay storyline and even the characters were interesting, but some of it could have been condensed down into a more streamline story.
I loved this series! The relationship between Aly & the guys is so real! I loved them all & I’m so sad this is the end! This is one of those series I wish I could read again for the first time!! I never expected to be so infested… great story & yummy spice! Amazing back stories & new things going do on fingers crossed for a spin off 🤗🖤🌶🔥
This is my review for the series as a whole. I had a good time reading these books. The writing is mostly decent (although the excessive use of the word "ya" bugged me) I liked all of the characters, Jax and Jay especially. It's a fairly easy and predictable read which to me isn't bad at all, sometimes its nice to be able guess what is going to happen.
I was hooked from chapter 3 and now I'm sad that its over but I am glad that I found this book while I was looking for something to read while waiting for another book to release.
This series has been absolutely perfect! A good balance between smut and plot. And the HEA is just what this series needed. However, you left me hanging for the new series! Lol guess I’ll keep going.
The writing is amazing. I could not stop reading these books. I hated having to stop and eat or sleep. Hope you enjoy these books as much as I did. Good reading!!!
The story premise is OK but the writing makes it super hard to read and enjoy. It reads like one of these fanfiction you use to read when you were younger. I just wish the writing was done better. Also the story is super predictable but that could have been avoided with better writing.
I adore this series and its characters. So much fun and each member of the harem is completely unique. The later books do turn into a bit of a smutt fest with outside world interaction ratio but I get it. The plot in every single book is amazing.
I highly enjoyed the series. I love the supernatural. All and her guys were the cutest! I wish the series could have been one more book, I’d have loved more detail about all the Elders and explanations about their situations ☺️
This is a quick read series but I REALLY enjoyed it! Even though it’s a quick read I don’t feel like I missed anything or was lost at any point. Definitely worth the read!
This series has such an interesting finish. We definitely added a few plot points towards the end and I wasn't sure how it would wrap up. I was pleasantly surprised how it did. I enjoyed the series as a whole.
This series has been a great read. The sweetness and love from the guys is amazing. I would have loved Aly actually doing more of the hunter stuff than she did but still I'm happy with the overall story.
I really enjoyed this book as I have enjoyed reading about all and her mates. There just seems to something missing like lacking on the climax. Would recommend though