I think if this book was polished up a bit, it would be golden. But even in its current state I really enjoyed it.
Having a magical academy setting will always endear a book to me; this was no different. Bambust did a great job at constructing the academy, making sure to include delightful details like how the dorms worked and what kind of classes the MC was taking. It felt like a wonderful place to live and study in. The reader learns about the magical world at this academy through the eyes of the MC. And what an incredible magic system! I can tell that Bambust was thorough in the way she gave historical context, an explanation for why children were involved in protecting the magical world, limits to magic, and more. I was fascinated by how familiars worked: their recruitment, the ritual, their magic and transformation, and how their experience of the academy was different. I loved how the transformative element of being a familiar was the catalyst for the MC realising they were trans.
The MC’s queer discovery is the focus of their character development. As the MC adjusts to being in a safe space for the first time, they are able to explore their identity. Seeing them grow to know themself was a delight, enhanced by the acceptance they were given in their new environment. Adding to this trans joy was a super sweet and earnest romance that developed naturally and only added to the story. Aside from their trans identity, the MC was also loveable because of their curiosity, which rendered them a capable and creative magic user, and their desire to help, which was just this innate drive they never questioned.
The SCs were similarly endearing, just generally being quite wholesome and amusing. The MC and SCs formed a little found family, headed by their carer Charlie. It was incredibly heartwarming to observe this dynamic throughout the book. I was just so happy that the MC had found a place to be loved.
Something that will bring joy to many hearts is that this book uses every opportunity to take a dig at HP. I was FULLY on board. I loved how it pointed out the ludicrousness of JKR’s world-building while at the same time providing a more sensible alternative.
My biggest issue with this story was the pacing and plot direction. Given where the story went, we needed to have been introduced to the villain and their corresponding plot line earlier in the book so that it didn’t feel so thrown in and rushed towards the end. It was also sometimes a little too convenient that the characters could learn and implement complex magic so quickly as near beginners. Finally, the ending muddied things in an unnecessary way. I believe the book should have ended a little before the close of the penultimate chapter, the extra context saved and expanded upon in a sequel (which it looks like Bambust is gearing up for).
Rep: sapphic trans MC, sapphic LI, trans SC, gay SCs