I read this book because I was recommended to teach it to my year seven class. I have three year seven classes, and all of my classes are reading this book as a class. This means I have to read it at least four times. I am never blindly listening to a recommendation for my classes’ book study again.
It is criminally boring. The main character Wylah has no real personality. She is “strong and brave” and is going on a mission to save her tribe because as her Grandma said, “it is [her] destiny now”. WOW, who could have seen that coming? Everyone. This story has been done a thousand, million times over. Something destructive happens and the only person who can save everyone is a tween who is destined to be a hero because of… tradition, bloodline, whatever other predictable stuff you would like. Been there, done that.
However, it’s been done a million times because it is a trope that sells and it can easily be made interesting and fresh. This trope is not interesting in Wylah. Nothing is interesting in Wylah because of the awful writing style. Gould was never taught “show, don’t tell”. It’s so dry. It is insulting to the readers. It feels like it was written for children who have no inference skills. It feels like it is treating the audience like they are dumb. I feel that this book’s writing style insults the target audience.
There is also barely any descriptions in the book. Every chapter you get teleported to a new location and there is almost NO world building. This lack of descriptive world building is due to Gould’s lack of ability to put ANY detail into the setting other than 1-2 plain, unflavoured, “telling” sentences.
All of the characters are unmemorable. Wylah is supposed to be strong and brave, but there is just not a sufficient amount of her internal monologue to make her journey interesting. There is nothing to her other than fulfilling the overused trope of a girl who is brave and is the chosen one. There is nothing that defines Wylah as a person, apart from that trope. That is all she is, a trope. How disappointing. The same goes to all of her animal friends, although they are not even much of a trope, they just suffer from a lack of defining personalities. Their names could be switched around at any point in the book and I wouldn’t notice because their personalities are indistinguishable.
I don’t like the art either. It feels as if Pritchard could not choose between a realistic art style or a cute art style and tried to go somewhere in between. This in between style doesn’t work. I also find a lot of the artwork looks out of proportion or a bit off. It’s like he didn’t take the time to make sure the art was finished. The art lacks a lot of personality, making it very fitting for this novel.
I took a week’s break from reading this book and when I went back to it, I could remember barely anything about the book. I couldn’t remember any of the characters other than Wylah. I could barely remember what the story was about.
This book is popular enough that it is up to book four or five of the series. I am hoping that indicates that there are people who enjoy this book. I genuinely hope my students get enjoyment out of this book. I sincerely hope that they do not find this book as mind numbingly dull and painful as I did because I do not want to put someone through what I experienced when I was reading this. I am already excited for next year when I know not to choose this book for my students.