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The Eldrasian Chronicles #1
The Dragon Healer
Elinta Ferran can feel the emotions of a dragon....
Sixteen year old Elinta has wanted to be a healer her whole life and is in her third year as an apprentice when she stumbles upon something impossible; a dragon.
The laws of Eldras mandate that the beast be killed, but the dragon is injured and Elinta won’t put aside her training. When she’s discovered with the beast Elinta’s world is turned upside down and she’s forced to flee her home on the dragon’s back. But an unusual bond has begun to form between them, one that hasn’t been seen in over one hundred and fifty years.
When Lorrin, Prince of Eldras, stumbles upon them while going against the king’s wishes, Elinta must decide whether their fate lies together or apart. One road could lead Elinta to a life of loneliness, but the other will lead her straight into danger. If she goes to the palace with the prince, she’ll be hiding in plain sight of the very people who want the dragon killed.
But the officials of Eldras aren’t the only ones after the dragon. Someone sinister is lurking in the shadows and he’s ready to make his move, and Elinta might just be in the way.
‘How to train your dragon’ meets ‘Red Queen,' The Dragon Healer is the first in The Eldrasian Chronicles, a young adult fantasy trilogy.
Sixteen year old Elinta has wanted to be a healer her whole life and is in her third year as an apprentice when she stumbles upon something impossible; a dragon.
The laws of Eldras mandate that the beast be killed, but the dragon is injured and Elinta won’t put aside her training. When she’s discovered with the beast Elinta’s world is turned upside down and she’s forced to flee her home on the dragon’s back. But an unusual bond has begun to form between them, one that hasn’t been seen in over one hundred and fifty years.
When Lorrin, Prince of Eldras, stumbles upon them while going against the king’s wishes, Elinta must decide whether their fate lies together or apart. One road could lead Elinta to a life of loneliness, but the other will lead her straight into danger. If she goes to the palace with the prince, she’ll be hiding in plain sight of the very people who want the dragon killed.
But the officials of Eldras aren’t the only ones after the dragon. Someone sinister is lurking in the shadows and he’s ready to make his move, and Elinta might just be in the way.
‘How to train your dragon’ meets ‘Red Queen,' The Dragon Healer is the first in The Eldrasian Chronicles, a young adult fantasy trilogy.
348 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 8, 2022
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Tiani Davids
6 books33 followersTiani Davids is the author of The Eldrasian Chronicles, a young adult fantasy completed at the end of 2023. She has since begun a series of standalone fairytale retellings. Tiani is a lover of reading, writing, and all things Tolkien.
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July 8, 2023
I was astounded that this was the author's debut novel, yep, completely astonished in the depth of the plot, the fullness of the characters and the intricate storytelling. It felt fresh and the opening chapter, where Elinta "meets" Zhayra are some of the most beautiful sensitive scenes I've read.
Elita is a simple girl living in a simple village, in a world where Dragons are loathed and feared, hunted and killed until they all vanished. With an affinity for healing she's apprenticed to a healer, her desire to help any creature, human or animal, is paramount. So what does she do when she stumbles across an injured Dragon? Once she overcomes her initial disbelief and fear, she helps the dragon of course! Thus starts the most beautiful tale of friendship, bias, misconception and an adventure of a lifetime!
Elinta is a caring, warm character, one who doesn't enthusiastically embrace the Eggslaying, but she doesn't let on, she hopes that becoming a fully fledged healer will gain her the approval of her stern cold father. Only her brother Blaine seems to understand her. I loved the close bond Elinta has with her brother Blaine. Forced to flee from her village, leaving the only life she has known, she encounters an elusive race, a Prince and a realisation that what she thought she knew, well, suffice to say, she didn't! I enjoyed watching the evolution from an insecure young woman wanting approval to one of determination and poise
Zhayra is a dream, a perfect Dragon specimen, at least to me, her protectiveness of Elinta is gorgeous, the way they bond is simply gorgeous. I found the characters all complimented each other, the goodies were supportive, the baddies justifiably, well, bad. I really enjoyed Niles, a fun humourous character, the complete antithesis to Lorrin, who is more stoic, he is a Prince after all! And he's so darn likeable, just ask Elinta! There's a lot more to General Nash other than being Lorrin's aunt. An interesting characters is Ford, he seems genuine but there's something not quite right about him... can't wait to find out if there is! In fact, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Elita is a simple girl living in a simple village, in a world where Dragons are loathed and feared, hunted and killed until they all vanished. With an affinity for healing she's apprenticed to a healer, her desire to help any creature, human or animal, is paramount. So what does she do when she stumbles across an injured Dragon? Once she overcomes her initial disbelief and fear, she helps the dragon of course! Thus starts the most beautiful tale of friendship, bias, misconception and an adventure of a lifetime!
Elinta is a caring, warm character, one who doesn't enthusiastically embrace the Eggslaying, but she doesn't let on, she hopes that becoming a fully fledged healer will gain her the approval of her stern cold father. Only her brother Blaine seems to understand her. I loved the close bond Elinta has with her brother Blaine. Forced to flee from her village, leaving the only life she has known, she encounters an elusive race, a Prince and a realisation that what she thought she knew, well, suffice to say, she didn't! I enjoyed watching the evolution from an insecure young woman wanting approval to one of determination and poise
Zhayra is a dream, a perfect Dragon specimen, at least to me, her protectiveness of Elinta is gorgeous, the way they bond is simply gorgeous. I found the characters all complimented each other, the goodies were supportive, the baddies justifiably, well, bad. I really enjoyed Niles, a fun humourous character, the complete antithesis to Lorrin, who is more stoic, he is a Prince after all! And he's so darn likeable, just ask Elinta! There's a lot more to General Nash other than being Lorrin's aunt. An interesting characters is Ford, he seems genuine but there's something not quite right about him... can't wait to find out if there is! In fact, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
November 1, 2022
I received an ARC of this book and am leaving a review voluntarily.
This was a nice change of pace for me while still having a lot of fantasy tropes I appreciate. I really enjoyed our main protagonist, she was a nice balance of traits, which definitely contributed to her feeling fleshed out.
The world felt a little lacking at times. I have a feeling we’ll learn about more as the series progresses but I wanted more than we were given. But, given I adore world building, this may be a personal taste thing.
I think the plot really works well here and you want to follow the characters. I wish we got a bit more of a resolution but again, given it’s a series, I look forward to a more complete ending in future books!
Absolutely worth a look if you want gentle but competent heroines and dragons!
This was a nice change of pace for me while still having a lot of fantasy tropes I appreciate. I really enjoyed our main protagonist, she was a nice balance of traits, which definitely contributed to her feeling fleshed out.
The world felt a little lacking at times. I have a feeling we’ll learn about more as the series progresses but I wanted more than we were given. But, given I adore world building, this may be a personal taste thing.
I think the plot really works well here and you want to follow the characters. I wish we got a bit more of a resolution but again, given it’s a series, I look forward to a more complete ending in future books!
Absolutely worth a look if you want gentle but competent heroines and dragons!
July 18, 2023
Is seeking the truth worth sacrificing all you know?
In a world where the death of dragons is not only encouraged but celebrated, Elinta is confronted with the choice of either conforming to her upbringing or forfeiting her way of life to save a wounded dragon long thought to be extinct. Could there be more to this mysterious beast than meets the eye? And how intelligent is it really?
Narrative Voice: 3rd person (limited)
Cussing/profanity: 0/5
Drug/alcohol use: 0/5
Kissing: 0/5
Sex/nudity: 0/5
Violence/gore: 1/5
I received a free copy in exchange for my honest review
Right off the bat, Tiani Davids establishes the setting and stakes of the world of Eldras. I liked the unique description of the Asali race and highly commend Davids for her creation of a fantasy language! The premise of Elinta being able to feel a dragon’s emotions is fascinating, and the mystery surrounding this ability kept me reading for answers.
Relationships between the characters are wholesome and full of refreshingly clean and humorous dialogue. Niles is my favorite, whose distinct personality got me to chuckle a few times. Elinta is quiet and meek, at least to me, and sometimes felt a little passive. I like Lorrin better, but it may be because I’m partial to male characters regardless. The setting is quite grounded with the story taking place mostly in the palace or nearby forest; a steady point for the plot to bloom.
I personally found the dialogue a little clunky and awkward at times, but otherwise this is a well-written and reasonably-paced book; a great clean adventure that’s perfect for fans of How To Train Your Dragon and Eragon.
4/5 would recommend
In a world where the death of dragons is not only encouraged but celebrated, Elinta is confronted with the choice of either conforming to her upbringing or forfeiting her way of life to save a wounded dragon long thought to be extinct. Could there be more to this mysterious beast than meets the eye? And how intelligent is it really?
Narrative Voice: 3rd person (limited)
Cussing/profanity: 0/5
Drug/alcohol use: 0/5
Kissing: 0/5
Sex/nudity: 0/5
Violence/gore: 1/5
I received a free copy in exchange for my honest review
Right off the bat, Tiani Davids establishes the setting and stakes of the world of Eldras. I liked the unique description of the Asali race and highly commend Davids for her creation of a fantasy language! The premise of Elinta being able to feel a dragon’s emotions is fascinating, and the mystery surrounding this ability kept me reading for answers.
Relationships between the characters are wholesome and full of refreshingly clean and humorous dialogue. Niles is my favorite, whose distinct personality got me to chuckle a few times. Elinta is quiet and meek, at least to me, and sometimes felt a little passive. I like Lorrin better, but it may be because I’m partial to male characters regardless. The setting is quite grounded with the story taking place mostly in the palace or nearby forest; a steady point for the plot to bloom.
I personally found the dialogue a little clunky and awkward at times, but otherwise this is a well-written and reasonably-paced book; a great clean adventure that’s perfect for fans of How To Train Your Dragon and Eragon.
4/5 would recommend
November 7, 2022
Thank you to the author for an advance review copy.
As other reviewers have noted, this is a remarkable debut novel. The depth of world building was excellent and I loved diving into what feels like a fresh story about dragons and those who love them. Elinta is an engaging lead who finds herself on the outside after helping (rather than killing) a dragon she finds injured in her village.
Highlights from the read include the banter, friendships, political intrigue and slow burn romance and scope of the world. It truly feels like this series has just begun revealing itself and I’m excited to see where it goes next. The original language and culture developed for the story feels fresh and exciting, integrated and driving the plot onward.
The only drawback is that the structure of the story feels overly familiar at times, occasionally to the detriment of pacing. Additionally, the ending of the book felt sudden and left me looking for more answers than I’d received.
Overall the comfort and enjoyment of this story can’t be understated if you’re looking for a cozy fantasy story with the promise of more to be delivered in the sequels. Clearly a lot is being set-up in this novel for the next instalments and I’ll be keeping an eye out.
As other reviewers have noted, this is a remarkable debut novel. The depth of world building was excellent and I loved diving into what feels like a fresh story about dragons and those who love them. Elinta is an engaging lead who finds herself on the outside after helping (rather than killing) a dragon she finds injured in her village.
Highlights from the read include the banter, friendships, political intrigue and slow burn romance and scope of the world. It truly feels like this series has just begun revealing itself and I’m excited to see where it goes next. The original language and culture developed for the story feels fresh and exciting, integrated and driving the plot onward.
The only drawback is that the structure of the story feels overly familiar at times, occasionally to the detriment of pacing. Additionally, the ending of the book felt sudden and left me looking for more answers than I’d received.
Overall the comfort and enjoyment of this story can’t be understated if you’re looking for a cozy fantasy story with the promise of more to be delivered in the sequels. Clearly a lot is being set-up in this novel for the next instalments and I’ll be keeping an eye out.
October 9, 2022
Elinta is a young woman with modest goals: become a village healer, and make her cold father proud. This changes the day she finds an injured dragon in the forest. Everyone knows dragons were vicious, murderous creatures who deserved getting hunted to extinction. So why doesn’t Elinta feel scared in this one’s presence? When she heals the dragon and is forced to flee her village, it sets her on an epic journey to save the remaining dragons, and takes her to the heart of the kingdom.
This is a charming, sweet YA about choosing love over hate. Elinta is a lovely protagonist: compassionate without being weak, sheltered but perceptive. The story is well-paced and engaging: not everybody Elinta meets is trustworthy, but we don’t know what they’re hiding or why. I enjoyed the lore of dragons, and the promise of further revelations about them and their history with humans.
The main criticism I have (that others might not mind) is there’s a lot left hanging at the end of the book. TDH is the first in a trilogy, but it feels less like a complete book than part 1 of a single story. The world is vaguely medieval, but like a lot of YA fantasy the dialogue and behaviour is very modern and colloquial. I therefore didn’t get a lot of “atmosphere” from the setting. I’m interested in reading the next instalment to see what happens though, so these are minor complaints overall. 🐉🌿⚔️🤴
I received an advance copy of this book, and I am leaving a review voluntarily.
This is a charming, sweet YA about choosing love over hate. Elinta is a lovely protagonist: compassionate without being weak, sheltered but perceptive. The story is well-paced and engaging: not everybody Elinta meets is trustworthy, but we don’t know what they’re hiding or why. I enjoyed the lore of dragons, and the promise of further revelations about them and their history with humans.
The main criticism I have (that others might not mind) is there’s a lot left hanging at the end of the book. TDH is the first in a trilogy, but it feels less like a complete book than part 1 of a single story. The world is vaguely medieval, but like a lot of YA fantasy the dialogue and behaviour is very modern and colloquial. I therefore didn’t get a lot of “atmosphere” from the setting. I’m interested in reading the next instalment to see what happens though, so these are minor complaints overall. 🐉🌿⚔️🤴
I received an advance copy of this book, and I am leaving a review voluntarily.
November 7, 2022
Thank you, Tiani Davids, for sending me an e-book ARC of your debut novel, The Dragon Healer.
The cover immediately caught my attention, and the blurb and the pitch 'How to train your dragon meets the red queen' was enough to convince me to read this book. Of all the mythological creatures, dragons are my absolute favorite.
The question is, did the story deliver what the pitch promised?
Yes, a little from How to train your dragon, but I do not agree with the story being like that of the Red Queen.
+
The four main characters:
This was the book's strongest point. Most characters are well-rounded and fleshed out with some exceptions which I will mention further down below.
Elinta is a fine protagonist. Smart, capable, and willing to learn and strengthen her weaknesses which I appreciated. For the most part, she's smart and grounded, but for plot convenience, she sometimes acts without thinking. Her friendship with Zhayra the dragon is the best thing about the story.
Lorrin is the typical smart and nearly perfect guy, with no real flaws, and his personality plays it safe all the time. He didn't leave a huge impression on me but I didn't dislike him.
Niles is the trickster and funny sidekick character and he brightens most scenes he appeared in. I liked him most of the male characters.
The setting:
This is the book's second strong point. The author did a fine job with descriptions that painted a vivid picture in my head as I was reading.
+ and -
Worldbuilding:
At times brilliant and sometimes questionable, there wasn't a good balance between the modern and medieval elements. A perfect example of this was the names of the characters, some were too modern while the names of locations were spot on for a fantasy world. The same unbalance could be found in how advanced the world was, certain things seemed out of place and too modern.
One thing that stood out the most was how the servants acted at the castle. It was one thing for Niles to not always address the royals correctly since he was practically family, but for a maid to refer to the prince by his name instead of his title is ridiculous and would never happen in real life, present or past. Especially to someone, she'd only just met.
-
Pacing, repetition, and lack of plot/subplots:
I devoured the first 30% of the book, loving every part of it, thinking this is such a well-balanced story, but then the story came to a halt when Elinta and Lorrin arrived at the capital. Scene after scene played out almost the same way, sightseeing, eating, failed research, train, cute moment between characters, visit the dragon. Rinse and repeat.
The few story seeds scattered in between were not enough to justify the length of this book.
Weak antagonistic force:
The villain was mentioned in passing a few times and shown once as a cloaked figure in town, then a few pages from the end he introduced himself. Since there hadn't been anything else remotely resembling a villain before in the story, it did not come as a surprise. Despite having a short cliched evil monologue, we didn't learn anything we already didn't know or guessed from the failed research Elinta had been doing. He was only introduced to give the ending a tiny bit of flare and to spark interest for book two.
The romance:
Even though there wasn't much, there is a romantic tension between Elinta and Lorrin, one that I hope will never bloom. The author tried so hard to make a slow-burn infatuation between them, but sadly, I did not feel the right chemistry. There were so many times when through Elinta's inner monologue we were told how amazing he was, instead of showing us.
They are great as friends, but the one Elinta has the most natural chemistry with is Niles, he showed us many times how great he was without the narrative having to tell us this. He, unlike Lorrin, interacted with Zhayra, speaking to her, petting her, something Lorrin never did. Zhayra is important to Elinta, so if there is to be any romance, that partner should interact with Zhayra and gain her approval, something Niles did.
In conclusion:
I'm impressed with the voice and writing style of this debut author, but I'm on the fence about picking up book two because just like book one, the story/plot sounds good, but the main issue of book one is that there is too little story and subplots, 50% of the book is nothing but filler content and repetition. I'll keep my eyes on Tiani though, she has the potential to become a great writer and I will most definitely try future works of hers.
The cover immediately caught my attention, and the blurb and the pitch 'How to train your dragon meets the red queen' was enough to convince me to read this book. Of all the mythological creatures, dragons are my absolute favorite.
The question is, did the story deliver what the pitch promised?
Yes, a little from How to train your dragon, but I do not agree with the story being like that of the Red Queen.
+
The four main characters:
This was the book's strongest point. Most characters are well-rounded and fleshed out with some exceptions which I will mention further down below.
Elinta is a fine protagonist. Smart, capable, and willing to learn and strengthen her weaknesses which I appreciated. For the most part, she's smart and grounded, but for plot convenience, she sometimes acts without thinking. Her friendship with Zhayra the dragon is the best thing about the story.
Lorrin is the typical smart and nearly perfect guy, with no real flaws, and his personality plays it safe all the time. He didn't leave a huge impression on me but I didn't dislike him.
Niles is the trickster and funny sidekick character and he brightens most scenes he appeared in. I liked him most of the male characters.
The setting:
This is the book's second strong point. The author did a fine job with descriptions that painted a vivid picture in my head as I was reading.
+ and -
Worldbuilding:
At times brilliant and sometimes questionable, there wasn't a good balance between the modern and medieval elements. A perfect example of this was the names of the characters, some were too modern while the names of locations were spot on for a fantasy world. The same unbalance could be found in how advanced the world was, certain things seemed out of place and too modern.
One thing that stood out the most was how the servants acted at the castle. It was one thing for Niles to not always address the royals correctly since he was practically family, but for a maid to refer to the prince by his name instead of his title is ridiculous and would never happen in real life, present or past. Especially to someone, she'd only just met.
-
Pacing, repetition, and lack of plot/subplots:
I devoured the first 30% of the book, loving every part of it, thinking this is such a well-balanced story, but then the story came to a halt when Elinta and Lorrin arrived at the capital. Scene after scene played out almost the same way, sightseeing, eating, failed research, train, cute moment between characters, visit the dragon. Rinse and repeat.
The few story seeds scattered in between were not enough to justify the length of this book.
Weak antagonistic force:
The villain was mentioned in passing a few times and shown once as a cloaked figure in town, then a few pages from the end he introduced himself. Since there hadn't been anything else remotely resembling a villain before in the story, it did not come as a surprise. Despite having a short cliched evil monologue, we didn't learn anything we already didn't know or guessed from the failed research Elinta had been doing. He was only introduced to give the ending a tiny bit of flare and to spark interest for book two.
The romance:
Even though there wasn't much, there is a romantic tension between Elinta and Lorrin, one that I hope will never bloom. The author tried so hard to make a slow-burn infatuation between them, but sadly, I did not feel the right chemistry. There were so many times when through Elinta's inner monologue we were told how amazing he was, instead of showing us.
They are great as friends, but the one Elinta has the most natural chemistry with is Niles, he showed us many times how great he was without the narrative having to tell us this. He, unlike Lorrin, interacted with Zhayra, speaking to her, petting her, something Lorrin never did. Zhayra is important to Elinta, so if there is to be any romance, that partner should interact with Zhayra and gain her approval, something Niles did.
In conclusion:
I'm impressed with the voice and writing style of this debut author, but I'm on the fence about picking up book two because just like book one, the story/plot sounds good, but the main issue of book one is that there is too little story and subplots, 50% of the book is nothing but filler content and repetition. I'll keep my eyes on Tiani though, she has the potential to become a great writer and I will most definitely try future works of hers.
November 9, 2022
"I'm meant to be collecting herbs for Galen, you know? Not treating injured dragons." - Elinta
Dragon! Dragons are supposed to be no longer present in Eldras! Yet Elinta cannot deny the giant "beast" in front of her nor the fact that it's injured. Showing no signs of the fabled aggressiveness Elinta takes a risk, one that condemns her as a traitor when men from her village stumble upon her. Elinta's soon transported away from her village and the peaceful life she was wanting to lead.
Elinta finds herself surrounded by things she had only heard stories of. A race who no longer associates with humans, a prince who wishes to mend the past, and a kingdom that celebrates the end of the dragons. Being connected to a dragon is the least of Elinta's worries as she tries to form a plan with the prince to bring true peace to all life in Eldras. Can she trust the prince? What happens if Elinta and her dragon are caught? Which path is the correct one?
"Killing an injured animal that showed no aggression. . .she couldn't condone it." - Elinta
I have to say as I was reading this story and getting submerged into it, I was a little afraid it was going to follow the plot line of "How to Train Your Dragon" a little too much. I was pleasantly surprised and shocked! You do get the vibes of "How to Train Your Dragon" from this book but the stories are very different, and I loved the flow of this storyline!
I love how you have this plan in mind for your life and then fate just decides to show its hand. . . Elinta certainly did not expect her life to change so quickly in a short amount of time. Elinta's sixteen and this feels like it's going to be her coming of age story. I loved how things progressed throughout her journey and where she ended up at. The bond she forms with the dragon is a unique one and I admired it.
Some of my favorite scenes were with Elinta and the dragon as they connected whether it be in the sky or in a lake swimming together! I loved getting to see riding on the back of a dragon as it tore through the sky, though Elinta may have other opinions on the matter. I enjoyed watching their bond grow and strengthen as the book went on and how not everything is as it seems. Elinta's figuring that out as she continues to connect to her dragon.
"I think I just witnessed an argument between a girl and a dragon." - Lorrin
I loved all the characters of this book and how the main three helped to balance one another out. Not to mention getting into many mischievous acts when a certain two are paired together. The acceptance and understanding amongst the cast along with building of friendships. I just hope the friendships will last until the final book of this series, yes of course it would make for epic plot twists but still. . .
"I know I'm attractive, but there's no need to stare." - Niles
Tiani did an incredible job with world building! I was intrigued by the different races and the cultures of this world. I loved the action scenes with sword fighting, whether it be serious fights or simply training ones. The descriptions of everything were fantastic and I loved being able to feel Elinta's emotions. This is a single POV story and that being Elinta's POV. The world we are placed in is just breathtaking and sad on several accounts. Loved learning how things are not fully what they seem and that there may be more to everything!
Tiani spoils us with a little pronunciation guide in this book! This is a YA fantasy book with no language or intimate scenes. There are hints of a possible romance blooming, but the main cast are a little too focused on other things. As the title suggests there are some injuries that need healing, nothing is really detailed out or gory. Blood is mentioned and treatments are given. The cliffhanger will get you and I am so ready for the next book!
I really loved this YA fantasy that reminded me of "How to Train Your Dragon" and "The Sea Beast". I also cannot deny my fixation with dragons and was very excited to read this book! I cannot wait for the next step in Elinta's journey and hopefully she can get some answers!
Enjoy the fantasy with a girl and a dragon and don't forget to give the author some stars!
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Dragon! Dragons are supposed to be no longer present in Eldras! Yet Elinta cannot deny the giant "beast" in front of her nor the fact that it's injured. Showing no signs of the fabled aggressiveness Elinta takes a risk, one that condemns her as a traitor when men from her village stumble upon her. Elinta's soon transported away from her village and the peaceful life she was wanting to lead.
Elinta finds herself surrounded by things she had only heard stories of. A race who no longer associates with humans, a prince who wishes to mend the past, and a kingdom that celebrates the end of the dragons. Being connected to a dragon is the least of Elinta's worries as she tries to form a plan with the prince to bring true peace to all life in Eldras. Can she trust the prince? What happens if Elinta and her dragon are caught? Which path is the correct one?
"Killing an injured animal that showed no aggression. . .she couldn't condone it." - Elinta
I have to say as I was reading this story and getting submerged into it, I was a little afraid it was going to follow the plot line of "How to Train Your Dragon" a little too much. I was pleasantly surprised and shocked! You do get the vibes of "How to Train Your Dragon" from this book but the stories are very different, and I loved the flow of this storyline!
I love how you have this plan in mind for your life and then fate just decides to show its hand. . . Elinta certainly did not expect her life to change so quickly in a short amount of time. Elinta's sixteen and this feels like it's going to be her coming of age story. I loved how things progressed throughout her journey and where she ended up at. The bond she forms with the dragon is a unique one and I admired it.
Some of my favorite scenes were with Elinta and the dragon as they connected whether it be in the sky or in a lake swimming together! I loved getting to see riding on the back of a dragon as it tore through the sky, though Elinta may have other opinions on the matter. I enjoyed watching their bond grow and strengthen as the book went on and how not everything is as it seems. Elinta's figuring that out as she continues to connect to her dragon.
"I think I just witnessed an argument between a girl and a dragon." - Lorrin
I loved all the characters of this book and how the main three helped to balance one another out. Not to mention getting into many mischievous acts when a certain two are paired together. The acceptance and understanding amongst the cast along with building of friendships. I just hope the friendships will last until the final book of this series, yes of course it would make for epic plot twists but still. . .
"I know I'm attractive, but there's no need to stare." - Niles
Tiani did an incredible job with world building! I was intrigued by the different races and the cultures of this world. I loved the action scenes with sword fighting, whether it be serious fights or simply training ones. The descriptions of everything were fantastic and I loved being able to feel Elinta's emotions. This is a single POV story and that being Elinta's POV. The world we are placed in is just breathtaking and sad on several accounts. Loved learning how things are not fully what they seem and that there may be more to everything!
Tiani spoils us with a little pronunciation guide in this book! This is a YA fantasy book with no language or intimate scenes. There are hints of a possible romance blooming, but the main cast are a little too focused on other things. As the title suggests there are some injuries that need healing, nothing is really detailed out or gory. Blood is mentioned and treatments are given. The cliffhanger will get you and I am so ready for the next book!
I really loved this YA fantasy that reminded me of "How to Train Your Dragon" and "The Sea Beast". I also cannot deny my fixation with dragons and was very excited to read this book! I cannot wait for the next step in Elinta's journey and hopefully she can get some answers!
Enjoy the fantasy with a girl and a dragon and don't forget to give the author some stars!
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April 12, 2024
Oh, honey. This was rough to get through and I wanted to enjoy it so badly. I just couldn't.
What was my biggest issue? Let me explain: Imagine you are browsing though books. You find this one. The book sounds really cool. Delightful even. You buy it and are excited for it to arrive on your doorstep. You get the book and open it. The idea is there. This story could be very good. Unfortunately, every sentence is short and choppy. The words lack color. The sentences all string together because they are just so short. The sentences were so choppy. The voice in your head, the one that you hear when you read, is monotone. The voice in your head can't help but be monotone. Why? Because the sentences are all short, choppy, and lack energy.
This shouldn't be YA, this is written at a level for kids - I'm pretty sure my elementary-aged niece would like this, but it pained me to read this. I couldn't even enjoy the story because of how it was written. The editor in me was going mad, foaming at the mouth, eye-twitching mad. There was so much I wanted to fix and rewrite just to make it read and flow better - It really is a shame because the idea was there, and it was good enough to make me want to buy it and read it. But, holy hell, the writing was so simple and juvenile that I couldn't enjoy it.
I feel bad for leaving a review like this, I write myself, but there was just so much that could have been done to really make this a standout novel... And none of it happened. It just... Felt like a kid's fantasy horse girl book.
What was my biggest issue? Let me explain: Imagine you are browsing though books. You find this one. The book sounds really cool. Delightful even. You buy it and are excited for it to arrive on your doorstep. You get the book and open it. The idea is there. This story could be very good. Unfortunately, every sentence is short and choppy. The words lack color. The sentences all string together because they are just so short. The sentences were so choppy. The voice in your head, the one that you hear when you read, is monotone. The voice in your head can't help but be monotone. Why? Because the sentences are all short, choppy, and lack energy.
This shouldn't be YA, this is written at a level for kids - I'm pretty sure my elementary-aged niece would like this, but it pained me to read this. I couldn't even enjoy the story because of how it was written. The editor in me was going mad, foaming at the mouth, eye-twitching mad. There was so much I wanted to fix and rewrite just to make it read and flow better - It really is a shame because the idea was there, and it was good enough to make me want to buy it and read it. But, holy hell, the writing was so simple and juvenile that I couldn't enjoy it.
I feel bad for leaving a review like this, I write myself, but there was just so much that could have been done to really make this a standout novel... And none of it happened. It just... Felt like a kid's fantasy horse girl book.
November 22, 2022
Absolutely Fantastic
I cannot believe this was a first book! I really enjoyed the characters as they learned about dragons and seeing a whole new side to what they were brought up to know. I loved how Elinta grew her own inner strength, without being shown as extremely insecure to begin with. I dont like to write spoilers in my reviews but found it refreshing that while it seems there are hints to some romance, some true friendships develop.
The world-building was very believable and the descriptive writing about the dragons was superb! I think the connection Elinta has is amazing and I can't wait to see how it develops.
The author took her time to describe things in detail, yet kept the story rolling with ease, making this a great book to read. To say I am looking forward to the next book in the series is an understatement...I can't wait to see find out what's in store for Elinta, Lorrin, Niles, and their special friend.
I cannot believe this was a first book! I really enjoyed the characters as they learned about dragons and seeing a whole new side to what they were brought up to know. I loved how Elinta grew her own inner strength, without being shown as extremely insecure to begin with. I dont like to write spoilers in my reviews but found it refreshing that while it seems there are hints to some romance, some true friendships develop.
The world-building was very believable and the descriptive writing about the dragons was superb! I think the connection Elinta has is amazing and I can't wait to see how it develops.
The author took her time to describe things in detail, yet kept the story rolling with ease, making this a great book to read. To say I am looking forward to the next book in the series is an understatement...I can't wait to see find out what's in store for Elinta, Lorrin, Niles, and their special friend.
November 17, 2022
An enchanting story full of wonder and adventure. I love the nostalgia that I felt while reading - it reminded me of the kind of stories I used to enjoy when I was younger, and I felt as encapsulated with this book as an adult as I used to be about similar books as a child. The world building is clever and, although it isn't quite like anything I have previously read, it instantly felt familiar. The characters are well-drawn, diverse and have an element of the extra-ordinary to them. I loved Elinta and her bond with the dragon, and I'm so curious to learn more about her skills!
A well-paced, cosy read that connected me of a part of my younger self that I had forgotten about! This was an outstanding debut and I can't wait for the next installment!
A well-paced, cosy read that connected me of a part of my younger self that I had forgotten about! This was an outstanding debut and I can't wait for the next installment!
November 9, 2022
I love the story! It sure doesn't seem like it was a debut novel at all. Looking forward to the next step in Elinta's journey!
September 30, 2023
As a lover of the Inheritance Cycle, TDH is the first book that has brought me back into the wonder of dragons, love and politics. Cant wait for the next book!
March 26, 2024
This book was just okay. I felt like I was waiting for something to happen throughout the entire book and when something exciting finally did happen- the book ended!!! It’s not a terrible story however, there’s way too much time spent on insignificant moments that really don’t contribute to the plot. The main character is not even with the dragon for 90% of the book!! The majority of this book is the main character building friendships-just not with her newly found dragon. To say I was disappointed is an understatement!!
October 23, 2023
This was an entertaining debut novel, easy to follow and understand whilst providing intrigue and unanswered questions. The world building, race explanations and character development appears to lay good groundwork for the sequel, but still feels like it leaves some unknown mysteries to be discovered in in subsequent books. As part of this gradual build towards the next book, you get to know the main quartet quite well through some quieter studying & training periods - Zhayra, Elinta, Lorrin & Niles.
Zharya, the beautiful, empathetic dragon who’s very nature challenges everything their history celebrates and condemns, and mandates of Eldras.
Elinta, the gentle healer who’s world is turned upside down, pushed out of her comfort zone and forced to adapt while searching for answers.
Lorrin, the kind, brave, generous, selfless prince looking for a path to reconciliation & peace.
Niles, the mischievous, funny, food obsessed, banter master friend who’s got his friends' backs.
As these four strengthen their bonds through training, humour, sadness &, of course, the odd ball or two, they search for answers to questions they never thought they would ask. Everything they believed is challenged and they’re on the hunt for the truth, with mysterious side characters offering cryptic advice. It does contain sections where things seem to progress slowly, in what I assume is a build up the next book and also somewhat realistic; each chapter is not full of action sequences or adventure, but this also allows the reader to invest in the characters and become familiar with them, rather than a lack of depth attributed to the quirky quartet, or an inability to connect with them.
While the villain only truly comes to light just before the end of the book, his malevolent presence is hinted at through the second half of the book, with foreboding and uncertainty until his grand reveal igniting more curiosity and the promise of epic good guys vs the bad guy showdowns to come.
It’s the first taste of what promises to be an exhilarating journey of self-discovery, all things dragons and beautiful friendships. An easy, charming YA read with clear good vs bad elements, loveable characters, a pursuit of truth, and a lot left to discover in subsequent books.
Zharya, the beautiful, empathetic dragon who’s very nature challenges everything their history celebrates and condemns, and mandates of Eldras.
Elinta, the gentle healer who’s world is turned upside down, pushed out of her comfort zone and forced to adapt while searching for answers.
Lorrin, the kind, brave, generous, selfless prince looking for a path to reconciliation & peace.
Niles, the mischievous, funny, food obsessed, banter master friend who’s got his friends' backs.
As these four strengthen their bonds through training, humour, sadness &, of course, the odd ball or two, they search for answers to questions they never thought they would ask. Everything they believed is challenged and they’re on the hunt for the truth, with mysterious side characters offering cryptic advice. It does contain sections where things seem to progress slowly, in what I assume is a build up the next book and also somewhat realistic; each chapter is not full of action sequences or adventure, but this also allows the reader to invest in the characters and become familiar with them, rather than a lack of depth attributed to the quirky quartet, or an inability to connect with them.
While the villain only truly comes to light just before the end of the book, his malevolent presence is hinted at through the second half of the book, with foreboding and uncertainty until his grand reveal igniting more curiosity and the promise of epic good guys vs the bad guy showdowns to come.
It’s the first taste of what promises to be an exhilarating journey of self-discovery, all things dragons and beautiful friendships. An easy, charming YA read with clear good vs bad elements, loveable characters, a pursuit of truth, and a lot left to discover in subsequent books.
May 16, 2023
Rating: 2.5/5
I have a special place in my heart for How to Train Your Dragon so I couldn't resist this book when I found out what it was about. I really enjoyed the first 30-40% of it. After that, I grew bored. The plot was going nowhere. No progress was made. No new revelations. From 42% until 87%, literally nothing happened.
There was a buttload of questions that Elinta kept asking herself. They went in circles and some of the same came up more than once without being answered or even properly addressed. There's a very simple solution to this issue and that's to pose these questions as action. I know asking the readers questions is a way of keeping them interested and I don't know if it's just me, but I find that it does the opposite. The first time I'm asked, it builds the appropriate anticipation. The second, third times, it makes me impatient. Several things that Elinta discovered and couldn't get her head around after meeting the Asali was brought up more than once (more than necessary) as well.
For a book with a dragon on the front cover and the word "dragon" in the title, there was little focus on dragons in the actual story, which really disappointed me. Aside from that, I think there could've been more of a focus on Elinta and Lorrin's 'friendship' (without straying from the plot). The 45% of the book when the plot was at a standstill could've at least been used to develop that 'friendship' and then it wouldn't have felt so pointless.
I have a special place in my heart for How to Train Your Dragon so I couldn't resist this book when I found out what it was about. I really enjoyed the first 30-40% of it. After that, I grew bored. The plot was going nowhere. No progress was made. No new revelations. From 42% until 87%, literally nothing happened.
There was a buttload of questions that Elinta kept asking herself. They went in circles and some of the same came up more than once without being answered or even properly addressed. There's a very simple solution to this issue and that's to pose these questions as action. I know asking the readers questions is a way of keeping them interested and I don't know if it's just me, but I find that it does the opposite. The first time I'm asked, it builds the appropriate anticipation. The second, third times, it makes me impatient. Several things that Elinta discovered and couldn't get her head around after meeting the Asali was brought up more than once (more than necessary) as well.
For a book with a dragon on the front cover and the word "dragon" in the title, there was little focus on dragons in the actual story, which really disappointed me. Aside from that, I think there could've been more of a focus on Elinta and Lorrin's 'friendship' (without straying from the plot). The 45% of the book when the plot was at a standstill could've at least been used to develop that 'friendship' and then it wouldn't have felt so pointless.
March 17, 2024
Wanted more excitement and dragons
Though I enjoyed the characters and world building, this felt less like a story about a girl exploring her new bond with a dragon, and more like a story about a girl getting to live in a castle and become friends with a prince. Would have loved to spend more time with Zhayra and exploring the bond, as that's what's most exciting about dragon rider stories. The book also felt intentionally unfinished as a means to get the reader to move onto the next book, which is always a frustrating experience.
Though I enjoyed the characters and world building, this felt less like a story about a girl exploring her new bond with a dragon, and more like a story about a girl getting to live in a castle and become friends with a prince. Would have loved to spend more time with Zhayra and exploring the bond, as that's what's most exciting about dragon rider stories. The book also felt intentionally unfinished as a means to get the reader to move onto the next book, which is always a frustrating experience.
July 1, 2025
The concept was there and the author isn’t a terrible writer by any means, but I felt like the story was simultaneously rushed and also way too slow. The depth of character and relationship building was extremely shallow and therefore unbelievable. It was very predictable and hardly expanded upon the blurb. Very simplistic, something primary school aged children would get into.
December 25, 2025
Oh my gosh, what a magical book! It’s hard for me to find books I immediately connect with, but this was gold. Excellent characters, the development of Niles, Lorrin, and Elinta are absolutely fantastic. The slow burn romance is absolutely perfect too. Amazing author, amazing writing. I literally have zero complaints.
June 25, 2023
I loved the dragon parts of this book but ultimately the author wrote 2D characters, pointless scenes, and dull dialogue. The writing made it difficult to get through. Took me 3 weeks of struggling to finally call it quits.
November 25, 2022
This was a cute story, but I think at the end of the day, it just wasn't my thing.
November 26, 2022
3.5 stars
A solid debut, though the pacing was a bit uneven. Full review to come.
A solid debut, though the pacing was a bit uneven. Full review to come.
February 4, 2023
This is a fantastic book. I could not put it down. It is so well written. Looking forward to the second novel in this trilogy.
April 26, 2023
Interesting series, though it moves at a frustratingly slow pace. Not so much you notice it constantly, but each book in this series could be half the length it is and would be much better for it. Also, an oddity for this kind of series, there is zero romantic plot.
June 13, 2023
A brilliant read. A journey of discovery, pushing boundaries, unlikely allies and desperate choices. Can't wait to read book 2
October 27, 2023
A solid, flinchless read
Its been a while since I found a real good read. Fantasy isnt even my typical genre. I will definitely continue with the series
Its been a while since I found a real good read. Fantasy isnt even my typical genre. I will definitely continue with the series
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May 6, 2024Very good
March 9, 2025
Took a minute to get into the book. I did enjoy it, and look forward to the next two books.
June 28, 2025
such a fun blend of How To Train Your Dragon / Priory of the Orange Tree! 🤍 can’t wait to read book two!
April 13, 2024
It was really great! The ending leaves off on a great cliffhanger. Leaves you so excited for the next book!
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July 23, 2025
I did love this book. The one thing I had a problem with was at the beginning. It seems to skip over weeks of traveling and the FMC and MMC had just met. There was no initial conflict or weird situations that would normally happen with new friendships or even people who are strangers. Their first interactions were glossed over and all of a sudden they were the best of friends. That let me down a little.
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