I challenge them at every turn, pushing their boundaries, testing their limits…and yet they keep trying to tame me.
It’s working, and I love every second of the power exchange.
But our pasts are full of unresolved conflict. And as I find our very safety threatened, I learn one very powerful lesson: I will do whatever it takes to save my men.
Submitting to Them is the third installment in Calista Jayne’s steamy MFM series, Cinderella’s Daddies! If you love thrilling romances about dominant men who punish and cherish their lucky woman, get your copy today!
In this one, they finally get to the butt stuff and DPs. Because you know that with two Daddies, the author was eventually going to go there. Smutty daddy kink without the age play. the over the top plotlines continue with yet another kidnapping plot.
I still don’t like to read 1st person. I still don’t like serials. I’m still reading this one, despite both of those. And as much as I would love to give this segment 5 stars, I just can’t. If I could give it 4.5, I absolutely would. (It is a 4.5 in my reading log.)
This one was almost as well written as the first two, but there were sections that were just… flat. Almost like they were added in as an afterthought or written by someone else. Or maybe written as just a way to get from point A to point C, because the story needed “something” between them.
And then there were some issues my editor brain just couldn’t ignore. Misspelled words, sudden location shifts without any mention of moving, a partial phone conversation that was suddenly NOT a phone conversation (it’s hard to explain without spoilers and likely most won’t even notice it), an extra “the” in the middle of a sentence where it made zero sense, little things that a casual reader might miss or ignore, but as I said before, editor brain. It’s a curse sometimes.
This segment was focused mostly on Kingston and someone seemingly trying to destroy his company while simultaneously moving the trio’s story forward. The pacing was good. The story was good. The sex was steamy. It was trope-y in all the places I wanted it to be and how I wanted it to be. It just needed a little more editing.
And, yes, they finally get to the “butt stuff”, because with two Daddies sharing their princess, it was bound to happen.
I’d recommend it to anyone who wouldn’t be offended by the sex and language. Because, yeah. Sex. And language. But that’s why I’m reading it, so… yeah.
Oh. And a trigger warning. Because non-consensual choking in an attempt to kill someone.
Book 3 MC's Anna Marchand 26, aspiring singer songwriter, Sebastian Crown 43, famous Rock Star making a comeback with a new agent, Kingston Tyler 41, Tyler Analytics billionaire. Main Events Ella (Cinderella) decides to move in with Kingston and let her apartment go. Natasha and Ella both quit working at Bartleby's. Ella just cleans for Maids in Heaven. Ella has two bodyguards with her now after being surrounded by the loan sharks looking for Tommy and Sebastian was stabbed and was admitted to the hospital. Kristin was found after being kidnapped for a month by Joel and his mother. Police arrested both of his parents Raylean and her new husband. Joel is hiding out. Joel tricks Ella into getting into his car and kidnapping her. He plans on taking her to Mexico. King and Bash get Ironwood Securities to help track her down along with the police. They find Joel's Silver Porsche at one of his parent's homes and King and Bash drive there looking for Ella too. Someone reported seeing Joel swerve and hit Ella in the face on the hiway when they passed their car. Ella crashes the car on purpose because she believes Joel intends to kill her before arriving in Mexico as she doesn't have her passport with her. King and Bash arrive right after the car crash and call 911. King halls his son out of the wreck and gets Ella out too. Joel is arrested and behind bars.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Falling for them is NOT a standalone - The Author writes it at the beginning, and so shall I.
This is a 4 book Series - Leaving you on 3 cliffhangers and 1 happily ever after.
In Book 3 They cover a lot of issues, and I'm happy that all the drama is wrapping up but the spice is still holding strong. In Book three we are dealing with an Over-worked King, and an scheming ex boyfriend. Toss in some drama for the side characters, and we've got a novel that desperately needs to be read so that we can finally get to that promised HEA. Book 3 seems to be cleaning house in that department, as stated up top, the drama seems to wrap up in this book except for some minor problems, like Ella still doesn't want to be spoiled like a princess by the VERY RICH Daddies that long to do so (give in, spend their money), and that brother of hers, Tommy... I still don't know what his deal is, but I'm sure I'll find out soon enough <3
Like I kinda wanna be mad at her for running out like that, but I mean she was freaked out and they do have the same car. She had no reason to believe Joel would be after her like that. But you know some crazy ish is going on, why not call. Lock yourself in a room IDK.
I love the smut in this. I wish there was more on the tag team though. Double P. ;) love that when it happens.
So everything is basically resolved besides the issue with her brother which we know that last note was from his goons. The question is, will she be stupid and not tell her boyfriends even after everything she just went through or will she be smart and do the right thing and let her team know. I have a feeling she's going to be dumb....
Spice 1.5/5 Humor 0/5 Emotional 1/5 World building 3/5 Overall 3.5/5
Family isn't always a good thing. Submitting To Them is the third installment of The Cinderella's Daddies series by Calista Jayne and has so much going on. With the help and support of her two men, Ella gets more comfortable with her music and her amazing talent. Unfortunately while the thrupple work hard to build a relationship company espionage, innocent people getting kidnapped and an addict for a brother keep throwing landmines in their way. There are so many feels in this story you will get swept away. calista-jayne
Definitely better than the last book, had more action going on. This book focus more on Kingston and drama surrounding him and his company, while the second book focused on Sebastian.
Title/Author: Submitting to Them by Calista Jayne
What To Expect 🤍corporate espionage 🤍brother asking for money
Ella, Kingston, and Sebastian. Man can they turn up the heat. I liked the book and how the plot played out in this episode. However, I did find myself getting tired of Ella not just letting the guys spoil her! I'm all for doing my part but come on if they want to take care of her, she should let them. I'm also glad with how this episode ends because it seemed like that plot thread was just hanging out there waiting to get figured out.can't wait to read the last episode and see what dreams come true.
Book three of this series is probably the most exciting and suspenseful! Of course it ends in a cliffhanger, because duh. But not before the spiciest scene yet between Ella, Kingston and Sebastian…. Or should I say, Ella is between Kingston and Sebastian 😜
Half of the mystery and problems of this series are tied up after you read Submitting to Them, but there is still the issue of Ella’s addict brother.
Three books down and one to go, and I can’t get enough of this throuple! No surprise that Calista delivered again!
Pretty similar to the other two. I feel like these books would have been better as one or two books total. They're all short and seem like something is missing. I would also prefer they not end on cliffhangers. Cliffhangers have never been my thing. The spice isn't as descriptive as I'd like and that's really what I'm here for.
First and foremost, you must read this series on order. Each book is about the same 3 people. The writing is excellent and easy to follow, which is so earful because it makes for quick read. All the books in this series follow a simple formula, so you kinda know when things are going to start happening. Heading to book 4! YAY! Happy Reading!
This was so middle of the road for me that I think I could leave it here and not really care. I'll probably finish the last book in the series because I might as well, but it kind of feels like it's taking far too long for the story to progress for me now. It's a lot of the same things happening over and over again, making this book feel so much longer than it actually was for me.
Ella has sure come a long way from where it all started. Joel is still a medded up piece of crap, are things settled with Rayanne, her husband and the whole situation with the Detective seems sus. Why hasn't Ella stopped by to see Mrs Dali? With the final book next time to find out how it all comes together.
Ella and her Daddies story continues in this third installment. I love how comfortable Ella is becoming. Their relationship is really blossoming and evolving. Overall their story is amazing and well written.
I have enjoyed this series so much! I am excited and sad to read the 4th book! I'm going to start it as soon as I send this review! Keep up these types of books please!!!
This one was a bit too angsty for me and lost me for the series. I wanted more submission, less angst. If you like heavy angst this might be more your speed.