• TITLE: “A Fun & Engrossing Adventure to a Haunted Space Station”
• This is a well-written, fast-paced, fun space adventure with well-developed characters with touches of humor and romance. The tension between the two main characters, Raj & Lasadi, is palpable and done very well, especially as the book reaches its climax. Jessie Kwak portrays the emotional baggage each character carries with nice details that hint at the dangerous underlying currents between Raj & Lasadi without boring the reader or tipping her hand to show too much too early. I enjoyed that aspect of her writing best of all. I’ve not read many sci-fi novels with the emotive forces so aptly developed and expertly described. Her ability to capture the scene in good detail without slowing the plot too much is impressive as well.
• The psychological aspects between Raj & Lasadi are excellent fuel for inner conflict & character redemption, preventing both of them from getting through an impasse from their collective past until the climax. Kwak weaves reminders of this conflict in seamlessly with a great mix of internal dialogue, facial expressions, and juxtaposed words & actions. The tech is cool and understated, just the way it should be: seen & used, but not gawked at or marveled over.
• The story starts off with a heist as seen from two different vantage points. Overall, it’s nicely done, but perhaps a little slower than I’d expected. However, the pace picks up quickly after that. The author trades off plot pace for character development, and it took me a little while to appreciate that, but it definitely pays off in the latter half of the book. The professional and sexual tension between Raj and Lasadi is fun to read and experience with them. The “Will they? Won’t they?” questions are nicely balanced by their haunted pasts.
• Speaking of haunted things, the traps and surprises the space station has in store for the crew of the Nanshe are interesting without being overly burdensome to the plot or its pace. Overall, they were very welcome additions to the story.
• The book is written in present tense, a format I’m not used to, but that choice helps keep the intimacy & immediacy for the reader riding along right beside the characters. So, for this plot, it’s an excellent choice. (One tiny pet peeve, though: too many semicolons were used. People don’t talk in semicolons).
• The only real knocks I have about it are… I was hoping for a bit stronger climax, a bit more threat of death, a bit more hints of ghosts (artificial or real) when the crew finally hits the deserted space station in the last third of the book. I never really felt the fear of visiting a haunted space station or the threat of pending death like I’d hoped/expected, especially considering how well the author developed the emotional arcs of the characters. Also, while I understand the need/desire to set up for the next book in the series, I felt the plot post-final-battle to be too anti-climactic, going on a bit too long. The author does tie up a lot of loose ends, which I appreciated, but perhaps they could’ve been wrapped up a little quicker. However, this book does nicely set up for the next one without leaving the reader with too many unanswered questions.