Full disclosure: I was asked by Katrina @ Goodreads to review Operation Overlord: A Tommy Collins Adventure in exchange for a free copy of the novel. My review is voluntary.
When Goodreads first asked me to review this novel, I had never heard of Francis Moss, and after reading his bio, I did not recognize any of his work. The bio, however, and the subtitle, A Tommy Collins Adventure, led me to assume that the novel belongs to the Young Adult category, so I asked to receive a copy for review.
As soon as I started reading, I realized why I was asked to review the novel. I had written a review of Terry Bowe's novel Schimmert: Journey to Silence, which is a love story between an American journalist named Joe and a Dutch farmer named Sterre. The story between Tommy and Annike has many parallels with Joe and Sterre's story except that Tommy is English and both Tommy and Annike are teenagers.
Operation Overlord takes place on the eve of the Normandy invasion in World War II. Tommy's father, Royal Naval Lieutenant Commander Lawrence Collins, is called down to Southampton and decides to take his son with him. That convenient plot device struck me as unrealistic as did Tommy's maturing as he transitions from reading Treasure Island and The Wizard of Oz to "capturing" Annike as a "German spy," to their friendship, and then to their collaboration to discover the real spies and thus save the military operation.
I found some of the dialogue amateurish. In fact, the book reminded me of the novel I wrote when I was 13 years old, which I had written in the style of the Hardy Boys series. In many ways, Operation Overlord does remind me of a Hardy Boys' adventure. Even the subtitle suggests that. I had to keep reminding myself that this is a young adult novel, so that writing style is acceptable and should be expected.
One observation I had while reading is that American readers might have trouble with the English idioms sprinkled throughout, such as "'You're not going all lobster on us, are you?'" (p. 7) or "'Well, that tosses everything into a cocked hat,'" p. 34. But it turns out, déjà vu, I had the same experience that I had reading Anthony Burgess' A Clockwork Orange. I didn't realize until I finished reading that the author had included a glossary at the end of the text.
The novel is well researched but also presents World War II at a level that a young teenager would be able to understand. There are also several humorous episodes, such as when Tommy hears Annike speaking Dutch and assumes she is speaking German. There are also some plot twists that keep the novel moving forward. For example, I thought the surprise was going to be that Annike's family would be in the trailer, but I guess that would be unbelievable. Well, actually most of the novel is unbelievable for an adult reader, but the fantasy is "feel good," and the read is fast and fun. So I recommend the book for middle schoolers or perhaps advanced students in elementary school.