A random kindle freebie I found that looked decent enough but ended up being a reminder of the sort of quality that is floating out there in these days of self-publishing and anyone can do it sort of mentality.
A story of a woman kidnapped to serve as a vessel for an evil force to be released into the world, this novella actually has a plot and it appears to have been professionally edited but the writing leaves a lot to be desired.
The narrative style is so ‘stick your pinkie out” affected that it ranges from annoying to laughable. Someone wanted to go all poetic or maybe fancied themselves emulating gothic novels of a bygone era, whose paperback covers featured willowy women in peignoirs roaming the moors or some such silliness. Which results in sentiments like anxiety berated her sanity and she wanted to chastise her kidnapper for his heinous actions. Kind funny at first, but gets tedious after a while.
The entire thing is very overwritten, with pompous and occasionally repetitive descriptions. Very much the case of style over substance And what substance is there leaves a lot to be desired too. Including that very, very, very drawn out and not all that satisfying dénouement.
Was it the worst book out there? No, not by any means. Mainly because there’s a lot of crap out there floating around amid kindle freebies. I almost uprated it just to be nice, but then I had a thought…well, did I want the time spent reading it back? And the answer is yes. And so, the rating stands low. Sorry. No.