French Kiss is the first book in the ‘Flying into Love’ series. It stars Valentin Aubrey, a handyman, and Dale Calverley, a businessman. It’s told in third person from Dale and Valentin’s pov.
3.5 Stars
This is the third book I’ve read by this author, all from this series. I read the series in reverse, having read Irish Charm and Aussie Sun first and second. I only have Spanish Siesta to read next. The blurb does a good job of explaining what’s happening in the plot. Except for one thing. It doesn’t say that everything that happens is within the span of one week. And sadly, that is the main flaw of this book which I’ll explain later. But for now, Dale has come to a remote location in France to deal with selling his father’s home when he died. Upon arrival Dale finds Valentin living there. The story revolves around both men learning to drop their walls in order to trust each other, but there’s so much baggage in both of their paths that when someone from Valentin’s past shows up, it tears the men apart on a total misunderstanding. This is an opposite attracts and forced proximity story.
The author has a terrific knack for creating a place that draws me right in, and characters that are believable. However, in this story, there is a major flaw. The plot takes place over one week only. I found it unrealistic that these two men, who are both hiding aspects of themselves, and especially Dale who has walled off his true self behind thick walls, would drop all pretense over such short a period, especially to a stranger, let alone create emotional ties to that stranger. There’s no way that Dale would do that. If Dale was staying for maybe two months, I can see that possibly happening, but one week isn’t long enough and it interfered with my belief in this story.
As to the characters, Valentin was a man who used to live a life that he didn’t care for. Because of his looks and sex appeal, he could’ve succeeded at finding himself a sugar daddy, but that wasn’t him and he chose to become a vagabond handyman for room and food when he just wanted a permanent home. Dale’s father was a godsend for Valentin, and he helped maintain the cottage for the father. Dale just wanted to sell the place, but Valentin convinced Dale that Valentin would help with interpretation and tidying for staying a bit longer. Dale had his own personal problems. He resented his father not paying attention to Dale once his mother died. He hid the fact he was gay and poured himself into his work thinking he wouldn’t feel so empty inside. It wasn’t until he met Valentin who showed him a different way to live, and told him what Dale’s father was like, that Dale thought maybe life could be different, until the past caught up. Both men were both closed off about who they really were or about their pasts, and very uncommunicative, it’s no wonder the break-up was explosive. Once Dale dropped his walls, and trusted in Valentin enough to express his true self, Dale was free. Valentin had to get over his insecurity that anyone would want him only for his looks and sex, and not want him because Valentin liked the wilderness and working with his hands. I could believe in the two men as a couple once they were honest and truthful with each other. But NOT after only ONE WEEK!
I enjoyed the plot of French Kiss and the setting. Dale and Valentin were realistic men who I could believe as a couple but only if the timeline had been over a two-month period or longer. There’s no way their relationship could have happened in one week with how much baggage both men carried, especially Dale. If I was to give a grade for the relationship time period alone, it would get an ‘F’. That problem made the story unrealistic and lowered my rating to 3.5 Stars. Since I can’t give half stars, I will give this story, 3 Stars. I don’t think it’s quite as good as the other two books I’ve read in the series.
I received a copy from the author and am giving my honest and unbiased opinion.