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The Outsider: A Ghost Suspense Short Story

What happens in the dark, stays in the dark.

It's 1979 and divorcee Tabitha has escaped her fast-paced city life to renovate and reopen the Orpheum Theatre on Mackinac Island.

Her dream of a quiet life in a real community finally looks like it’s coming true. However, when a workman is brutally attacked, Tabitha realizes there may be more to the tragic past of the theater than she had been told.

Long-buried secrets and the restless dead soon threaten to bring the theater to another fiery end. Can Tabitha get to the bottom of this tragic mystery and finish the renovations, or will she be drawn into the dark by the whispers of the ghosts?

The first short story of the Damned Souls series by R.N. Moon, The Outsider is a gripping thriller filled with mystery about ghosts of the past and demons of the present.

55 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 2, 2022

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1,406 reviews150 followers
December 27, 2024
Spooky Vibes in an eery theater being renovated. I loved it and the backstory. The twist near the end had me shocked! Such a good short story!
689 reviews10 followers
June 29, 2022
A really good ghost story.
964 reviews10 followers
July 24, 2022
If you like ghost stories, this is a very good short ghost story. Tabitha has moved to a small town where she is the outsider. The townspeople keep to themselves. She buys an old theatre that had burnt down and wants to restore it. The people of the town have hard feelings about this as many of their kin had died in the fire. As she starts to rebuild, strange things happen. She sees things that are confusing. The story builds up into an exciting conclusion. I received an ARC copy from the author and this is my honest review.
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1,229 reviews13 followers
July 25, 2022
I received this shorty and this is my review. I'm getting hooked on these short stories (or better known as pay per chapters). This promises to be be a great read. The character(s) Tabitha is attempting to rebuild an old theatre. The ghosts have other ideas! P.S. this is rated as a young adult, I'm A young at heart senior at 72, and am enjoying this!I
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1,589 reviews120 followers
September 21, 2022
Twisted

In addition to the ghost story, we get a taste of ‘big city versus small town’ mentality. There’re also elements of divorce-by-affair, rage, and mid-life crisis.

I'd read more by this author.
2,154 reviews12 followers
July 14, 2022
Fair. Don't need more of this so will forego these stories.
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1,190 reviews7 followers
August 1, 2022
Cute story, but big miss that Mackinac Island doesn’t have motor vehicles.
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12 reviews4 followers
August 15, 2022
This is a quick, easy-to-read story with a good twist. I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.
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114 reviews2 followers
January 14, 2023
This was a very good short story. It was fast paced, and had some really good twists at the end that I didn’t see coming.
25 reviews
July 24, 2025
Good story. I liked the plotline but the only thing that threw me off was the use of cars on Mackinac island. When authors write books they should probably check more into the history 🤣
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July 21, 2022
Good read.

Interesting characters, very well written. The descriptions of the characters and locations made it easy to imagine what the writer was trying to share.
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