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432 pages, Hardcover
First published March 14, 2023
“You are married to a soldier gone off to fight an infinite war. […] You will be wedded to a ghost. […] Your marriage will be made up of three beings: a wife, her husband, and the sea between them. And because of that, you will—for better or worse—be free.” (pg. 30-31)However, these moments are not representative of the quality of writing in the rest of the book, or of the mood, which becomes rather trite and soapy rather than hauntingly emotional as I had hoped. The author notes in the acknowledgements that she wrote the first 40 pages as part of a class – and it is clear that this part of the book received the most attention and editing.
“Although Maria, now twenty-seven, has left behind the formal profession of teaching children, educating others will always be a love of hers…” (pg. 36)The dialogue between characters during the promised “great fire” is long, awkward, and chatty – like the people have absolutely no urgency to act while their town burns. In one instance, a fireman informs Maria: “We’re doing everything we can to save the Atheneum. That place is important to us all, Nantucket’s greatest treasure” (pg. 254). That second sentence is completely unrealistic and needless exposition at this point in the book, when we have had many opportunities to encounter descriptions of how culturally valuable the Atheneum is to all the townspeople. Unfortunately, this is typical of dialogue from the book, as if all of the characters know the reader is listening in, are concerned that the reader may not have been paying attention earlier, and are therefore trying to be as helpful and contextual as possible when they speak to each other.
“Not only did Maria teach at the local grammar school, but she also opened and ran successfully her own school for a year…” (pg. 36)
“Maria thinks back to the year she opened her own school for girls.” (pg. 73)
“As a former teacher, [Maria] knows she has a tendency to teach—but she is an activist at heart, and feels compelled to share her knowledge…” (pg. 97)
“Although [Maria] loves the work she’s done at the library, and the years of teaching she did before that…” (pg. 99)
“The customers, Black and white alike, applauded. One man even bought a new pair of boots just to celebrate. He called them his ‘stomping on injustice’ shoes.” (pg. 179)Notably, the scene above depicts community members’ responses not to a major success or “win,” but simply to hearing about an individual’s plan to take a specific action in response to a recent policy change. Strangely, no one has any opinions about the plan other than that it is completely perfect and an absolute stroke of genius. No one thinks the plan is too risky/too safe, too extreme/too conservative, too fast/too slow. No one questions its likelihood of success. This community has a hive mind of total agreement, just like any typical small town, right?
“Applause! For finally the men have stopped being fools! Hooray!” (pg. 244)In my opinion, the pacing of this novel is off. The fire promised on the blurb on the back of the book doesn’t happen until page . The after-effects of the fire (hundreds of people homeless, island out of food and supplies) are mostly glossed-over as if the characters think: “oh yeah, times are hard. But anyway…” They are more concerned about their social standing among friends, their letter writing, their next entrepreneurial endeavor, etc. Don’t read this book expecting a nitty-gritty disaster and recovery account – the fire is mostly just an exciting excuse to get the three main characters into the same building so that they can be emotionally “bound to each other forever” (*tearful hugs*) and have a bit of personal growth.