What do you think?
Rate this book
The Mercer's House #2
A Spring Dance
A family in trade moving up in the world. A family of landed gentry stepping aside for them. And the sons and daughters caught in the middle.
Will Fletcher is the eldest son and heir to the family fortune, and although his father is reluctant to relinquish his roots in trade, Will is more than happy to become a gentleman. He looks and sounds the part, but can he act the part, too? He soon finds that the world of high society is not easy to break into. It’s humiliating enough that the aristocracy disdain him, but how dare a lowly poor relation spurn his attentions?
Eloise Whittleton is very glad to be summoned to London to assist her distant cousin the Marchioness of Carrbridge manage her social engagements. For a few weeks she can forget she’s poor and dance her way through the season, storing up a few memories for when she returns to her retired life in Bath. There are some annoyances, though, and handsome, roguish Will Fletcher is everything she despises. When he tries to impress her, she’s determined to teach him a lesson he won’t forget.
This is a complete story with a happy ever after. A traditional Regency romance, drawing room rather than bedroom.
Book 2 of a 6 book series. A family grown rich in the wool trade. The landed gentry they’ve displaced. And the gentle daughter whose beauty will open the door to an even greater prize - the nobility.
Will Fletcher is the eldest son and heir to the family fortune, and although his father is reluctant to relinquish his roots in trade, Will is more than happy to become a gentleman. He looks and sounds the part, but can he act the part, too? He soon finds that the world of high society is not easy to break into. It’s humiliating enough that the aristocracy disdain him, but how dare a lowly poor relation spurn his attentions?
Eloise Whittleton is very glad to be summoned to London to assist her distant cousin the Marchioness of Carrbridge manage her social engagements. For a few weeks she can forget she’s poor and dance her way through the season, storing up a few memories for when she returns to her retired life in Bath. There are some annoyances, though, and handsome, roguish Will Fletcher is everything she despises. When he tries to impress her, she’s determined to teach him a lesson he won’t forget.
This is a complete story with a happy ever after. A traditional Regency romance, drawing room rather than bedroom.
Book 2 of a 6 book series. A family grown rich in the wool trade. The landed gentry they’ve displaced. And the gentle daughter whose beauty will open the door to an even greater prize - the nobility.
372 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 12, 2022
316 people are currently reading
122 people want to read
About the author
Mary Kingswood
68 books479 followersI live in the beautiful Highlands of Scotland with my husband. I like chocolate, whisky, my Kindle, massed pipe bands, long leisurely lunches, chocolate, going places in my campervan, eating pizza in Italy, summer nights that never get dark, wood fires in winter, chocolate, the view from the study window looking out over the Moray Firth and the Black Isle to the mountains beyond. And chocolate. I dislike driving on motorways, cooking, shopping, hospitals.
The lovely lady in my avatar is Archduchess Clementina of Austria (1798-1881), Princess of Salerno, painted around 1839.
NOTE: I read Regency romances as well as write them, and I review them all on my website, or you can find them right here on Goodreads on my real-name account at Pauline M. Ross.
The lovely lady in my avatar is Archduchess Clementina of Austria (1798-1881), Princess of Salerno, painted around 1839.
NOTE: I read Regency romances as well as write them, and I review them all on my website, or you can find them right here on Goodreads on my real-name account at Pauline M. Ross.
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 68 reviews
September 1, 2022
Slightly disappointing
I had very much liked the prequel and the first book of the Mercer series and was eagerly awaiting the next instalment, wondering how the Fletcher family would cope with a London Season. Well, I have to say that A Spring dance did not grip me. Trying to analyse why this was, I think that I could not relate or empathise with the main characters, in particular Eloise. Her thinking, even explained by her own family’s problems, seemed rather tortuous. For people who have read many Regency romances, the usual trappings of a London season were comfortably familiar, the gentlemen’s clubs, the geography ,Vauxhall gardens, the patronesses in Almack’s, Manton’s shooting gallery, Jackson’s boxing etc. Also pleasant was meeting again the Carrbridge family in particular Connie, her husband and brothers. However, it has to be said that their characters seemed different from the ones described when they first appeared in previous series.
The unfolding of the story was rather slow and once it was established that the nobility was going to spurn them because they were cits in trade, then several examples of this situation rather slowed the story. The last minute full explanation of Eloise’s father’s disappearance seemed contrived and did not bring much to the tale, rather leaving unanswered questions as to how it might develop.
As for Rosie, the beautiful sister for whom the removal to London was organised, we never get a chance to truly understand what makes her tick. Even the device of reading her letters to her friend in Sugborough did not show much light. As with the first book, I was left wondering about the motives of Lizzie, the stepmother, so keen to marry her stepdaughters into the nobility. The occasional vignettes with Pa Fletcher, showing his no nonsense, compassionate approach to life and his loving relationship with his children were the bits I enjoyed most. His son Will is in turns a very capable man about town or an emotionally immature young lad. Here too I was not able to really warm to him.
So, this is not the book I enjoyed most, but it is not to say that I would not recommend it as Mary Kingswood’s books are always good reads. I perhaps expected too much and look forward to her next book in this series featuring Angie, the younger, lively sister.
I am grateful to have received this book as an ARC and this review reflects my own opinion.
I had very much liked the prequel and the first book of the Mercer series and was eagerly awaiting the next instalment, wondering how the Fletcher family would cope with a London Season. Well, I have to say that A Spring dance did not grip me. Trying to analyse why this was, I think that I could not relate or empathise with the main characters, in particular Eloise. Her thinking, even explained by her own family’s problems, seemed rather tortuous. For people who have read many Regency romances, the usual trappings of a London season were comfortably familiar, the gentlemen’s clubs, the geography ,Vauxhall gardens, the patronesses in Almack’s, Manton’s shooting gallery, Jackson’s boxing etc. Also pleasant was meeting again the Carrbridge family in particular Connie, her husband and brothers. However, it has to be said that their characters seemed different from the ones described when they first appeared in previous series.
The unfolding of the story was rather slow and once it was established that the nobility was going to spurn them because they were cits in trade, then several examples of this situation rather slowed the story. The last minute full explanation of Eloise’s father’s disappearance seemed contrived and did not bring much to the tale, rather leaving unanswered questions as to how it might develop.
As for Rosie, the beautiful sister for whom the removal to London was organised, we never get a chance to truly understand what makes her tick. Even the device of reading her letters to her friend in Sugborough did not show much light. As with the first book, I was left wondering about the motives of Lizzie, the stepmother, so keen to marry her stepdaughters into the nobility. The occasional vignettes with Pa Fletcher, showing his no nonsense, compassionate approach to life and his loving relationship with his children were the bits I enjoyed most. His son Will is in turns a very capable man about town or an emotionally immature young lad. Here too I was not able to really warm to him.
So, this is not the book I enjoyed most, but it is not to say that I would not recommend it as Mary Kingswood’s books are always good reads. I perhaps expected too much and look forward to her next book in this series featuring Angie, the younger, lively sister.
I am grateful to have received this book as an ARC and this review reflects my own opinion.
September 14, 2022
4 1/2, really. If this had been written by anyone other than Mary Kingswood it would have gotten a 3. But I just can’t downgrade one of my absolute favorite authors. But the truth is, this book doesn’t live up to her standards. This summer I binged the audiobooks of all her previous series with total enjoyment. The previous books in the Mercer’s House series are enjoyable, though I must admit I miss the mystery aspect of her other books. But here we have removed from the interesting countryside of Yorkshire to the oh-so-familiar environs of the London Season, with all the usual entertainments, gossip, and drama that every other author in this genre has done to death. I like that MK sets her stories in small towns. It sets her apart from other authors. It is still a good read because MK’s prose and characters are so good, but it is lacking. Her three main characters, Will, Rosie, and Eloise, are all very contained, which makes it hard to enter into their feelings. Especially Rosie, who never speaks. There is great contrast between her actions and the letters she writes, which is entertaining. At least she isn’t that character we are all so tired of, the spoiled beauty. But she is unchanged by the London experience, which doesn’t make sense. And we all know she is going to end up back in Sagborough married to Ricky the apothecary. Frankly, she’s boring. Eloise is so angry and resentful I can’t like her, even in the end when she finally wises up. She never takes responsibility for her dreadful behavior. She doesn’t apologize, even. To anyone. Ever. She owes a lot of apologies, dammit! I’m really annoyed with her! Will is more sympathetic, especially as the story progresses. He has several really great moments when he is truly heroic, and he made me laugh out loud several times. He deserves better than the treatment he gets from stupid Eloise. Much better. I was happier when he was invited to join Boodle’s than when his suite was finally accepted. I really enjoyed Pa and Stepmother Fletcher. And I hope we see Lord Albury again. He is truly a stand up guy. I’d like to see him get his own HE. The next book takes place in Bath and deals with Miss Mischief, Angie. I have high hopes for a five star book which deserves the rating, unlike this one which gets it on credit.
September 13, 2022
Another absolutely charming and lovely read from Mary Kingswood.
This is the second full length novel in The Mercer's House series. The Fletcher family, made rich by trade, are moving up in the world. And to help launch Rosie, the Yorkshire rose, the family are headed to town for the London Season.
Will Fletcher, the eldest son, educated among the best of the ton, in appearance and manners of a gentleman, wants to make sure he passes muster. The world of high society is incredibly hard to break into and Will must find his way to gentlemanly success.
When he meets the poor, but noble, relation of the Marchioness of Carrbridge, Eloise Whittleton, she quickly puts him in his place. His roguish charm and handsome good looks she finds despicable and annoying. Determined to teach him a lesson, she continues her acquaintance with him. Will, eager to impress and prove her wrong, seeks out her company. Will these enemies become friends, or something more?
This enemies to lovers, slow-burn romance is a delight. I really enjoyed seeing the Fletcher family try and succeed in society. Ms. Kingswood highlights social dilemmas and structure so well, and how the Fletcher family must navigate the waters of the ton, to make sure their new venture into the higher echelons of society does not sink.
It was also fun to see characters from other novels by Ms Kingswood. Her world is so well built and believable. And her characters feel so real and down to earth. Will and Eloise are also just enjoyable to get to know, and as they slowly fall in love, it feels very real.
I really do think that a lovely TV series with all Ms. Kingswood's works would be most enjoyable. If you have not read any of her books, this is a great series to start with.
Thank you to Ms. Kingswood for this eARC. This review is my own and unbiased opinion.
This is the second full length novel in The Mercer's House series. The Fletcher family, made rich by trade, are moving up in the world. And to help launch Rosie, the Yorkshire rose, the family are headed to town for the London Season.
Will Fletcher, the eldest son, educated among the best of the ton, in appearance and manners of a gentleman, wants to make sure he passes muster. The world of high society is incredibly hard to break into and Will must find his way to gentlemanly success.
When he meets the poor, but noble, relation of the Marchioness of Carrbridge, Eloise Whittleton, she quickly puts him in his place. His roguish charm and handsome good looks she finds despicable and annoying. Determined to teach him a lesson, she continues her acquaintance with him. Will, eager to impress and prove her wrong, seeks out her company. Will these enemies become friends, or something more?
This enemies to lovers, slow-burn romance is a delight. I really enjoyed seeing the Fletcher family try and succeed in society. Ms. Kingswood highlights social dilemmas and structure so well, and how the Fletcher family must navigate the waters of the ton, to make sure their new venture into the higher echelons of society does not sink.
It was also fun to see characters from other novels by Ms Kingswood. Her world is so well built and believable. And her characters feel so real and down to earth. Will and Eloise are also just enjoyable to get to know, and as they slowly fall in love, it feels very real.
I really do think that a lovely TV series with all Ms. Kingswood's works would be most enjoyable. If you have not read any of her books, this is a great series to start with.
Thank you to Ms. Kingswood for this eARC. This review is my own and unbiased opinion.
September 11, 2022
Mary Kingswood’s prose is such a delight to read. I have really enjoyed all of her series. They are all different, and this latest one is a fascinating and unique scenario in which each member of the family of a self-made wealthy man tries to enter society and encounters its snobbery and strict rules of etiquette. Her characters leap off the page, and her storylines are always well written and convincing. Mary is one of my favourite authors, and I am so looking forward to reading the rest of this series. I received an advanced copy for review.
January 19, 2024
Very enjoyable and fun. Plus look at the cover, isn’t that gorgeous.
November 13, 2022
3.5 stars! Thank goodness Mary Kingswood has finally started writing entertaining and witty books instead of drawn out ridiculous fictional stories (The Stranger Series). I think her other series would have been better if they had had better editors! Now, I’m actually looking forward to her next book!
September 19, 2022
A Miss for Me
I’ve read and enjoyed every book by Mary Kingswood, so it pains me to say that I struggled to get through this one primarily because the female protagonist, Eloise, who I found to be unbelievably tedious. I understood her rationale for her actions through the first half of the book but beyond that point, she just seemed mean and manipulative, persisting in what I believe to be, wholly unfair treatment of Will, our hero. As a consequence, I found myself more angry with Eloise, than understanding.
The tedium set in when I began to wonder not ‘if’ they’d get to their HEA, but how much more of Eloise’s ill treatment of Will I’d have to read before getting there. Eloise keeps testing his gentlemanly qualities as he’s jumping through hoops nine ways from Sunday to live up to her standards. Eloise frequently notes that he’s meeting her expectations but she doesn’t trust them to be anything but superficial compliance. Bottom line, I felt that there was just a bit too much repetitiveness if this plot element. Will just never seems to be able to catch a break with our dear Eloise.
All of that said, the ‘kiss-and-make-up’ scene was movie quality writing. So, overall, while I wouldn’t say this book was bad, it was just a miss for me.
I’ve read and enjoyed every book by Mary Kingswood, so it pains me to say that I struggled to get through this one primarily because the female protagonist, Eloise, who I found to be unbelievably tedious. I understood her rationale for her actions through the first half of the book but beyond that point, she just seemed mean and manipulative, persisting in what I believe to be, wholly unfair treatment of Will, our hero. As a consequence, I found myself more angry with Eloise, than understanding.
The tedium set in when I began to wonder not ‘if’ they’d get to their HEA, but how much more of Eloise’s ill treatment of Will I’d have to read before getting there. Eloise keeps testing his gentlemanly qualities as he’s jumping through hoops nine ways from Sunday to live up to her standards. Eloise frequently notes that he’s meeting her expectations but she doesn’t trust them to be anything but superficial compliance. Bottom line, I felt that there was just a bit too much repetitiveness if this plot element. Will just never seems to be able to catch a break with our dear Eloise.
All of that said, the ‘kiss-and-make-up’ scene was movie quality writing. So, overall, while I wouldn’t say this book was bad, it was just a miss for me.
September 12, 2022
A Spring Dance Mary Kingswood
This is a clean Regency novel that is the second release in The Mercer's House series. It describes the experiences of the wealthy merchant Fletcher family trying to make the difficult shift to landed gentry and launching the daughters into London Society. They have the Grosvenor Square money, but not the connections, so invitations are few and far between at first.
Will Fletcher is the handsome amiable heir to the Fletcher fortune and their new estate in Hertfordshire. His sister Rosie is this season's Incomparable, with a 50K dowry to boot. We watch Rosie being pursued for her beauty, dowry or both by a rogues gallery of suitors. Will's attention is captured by Eloise Whittleton, the 25-year-old poor relation and latest project (i.e., secretary/companion) of the Marchioness of Carrbridge.
Eloise is contrarian and is not taken in by Will's charms. Will is frustrated by her and continues to pursue her despite her obvious dislike. It is a merry dance of will they or won't they and what is motivating them, how long it will keep going, and who will pull the trigger to stop it (or not).
This author always impresses me with her world building, her cast of dozens of inter-related characters across multiple series of novels, and the lack of falling into expected traps that would make this story common. I fully enjoyed this novel and eagerly await the rest of the series.
Pre-release (ARC) version provided to me by the author, but opinions are my own.
This is a clean Regency novel that is the second release in The Mercer's House series. It describes the experiences of the wealthy merchant Fletcher family trying to make the difficult shift to landed gentry and launching the daughters into London Society. They have the Grosvenor Square money, but not the connections, so invitations are few and far between at first.
Will Fletcher is the handsome amiable heir to the Fletcher fortune and their new estate in Hertfordshire. His sister Rosie is this season's Incomparable, with a 50K dowry to boot. We watch Rosie being pursued for her beauty, dowry or both by a rogues gallery of suitors. Will's attention is captured by Eloise Whittleton, the 25-year-old poor relation and latest project (i.e., secretary/companion) of the Marchioness of Carrbridge.
Eloise is contrarian and is not taken in by Will's charms. Will is frustrated by her and continues to pursue her despite her obvious dislike. It is a merry dance of will they or won't they and what is motivating them, how long it will keep going, and who will pull the trigger to stop it (or not).
This author always impresses me with her world building, her cast of dozens of inter-related characters across multiple series of novels, and the lack of falling into expected traps that would make this story common. I fully enjoyed this novel and eagerly await the rest of the series.
Pre-release (ARC) version provided to me by the author, but opinions are my own.
April 29, 2023
The backdrop of this series is the chasm between the upper classes and those from trade, at a time when tradesmen had often amassed huge fortunes, while many of the gentry and titled estate owners had either squandered their fortunes in dissipation or struggled with diminished inheritances. There was now a willingness, a necessity even, to marry women with large dowries. Nevertheless, the Fletcher family, now in London attempting to insinuate themselves into society and hopefully find a titled husband for Rosie, struggle to be accepted and invited to social events.
In this scenario, we find son and heir, Will Fletcher, the very picture of a gentlemen, well educated, well dressed, and hoping to be accepted. At first I thought he was going to be another Caroline Bingley, a social-climbing snob from trade, but he turned out to be quite lovable, like his father, kind, considerate, and thoughtful. His romance with a distant cousin of the Marford family is unusual and captivating. It's a bit difficult to warm up to Eloise Whittleton, but she has a sad past, with no male family members who have given her love and comfort. It made her suspicious and wary of men. She thinks Will's efforts to be a gentleman are an act; he is determined to prove her wrong. Her devious attempt to prove he's a cad backfires for both of them.
Each book I read by Mary Kingswood amazes me more. The way she creates all these different families, with their unique family members and dynamics, is astonishing. This is one of my favorites.
In this scenario, we find son and heir, Will Fletcher, the very picture of a gentlemen, well educated, well dressed, and hoping to be accepted. At first I thought he was going to be another Caroline Bingley, a social-climbing snob from trade, but he turned out to be quite lovable, like his father, kind, considerate, and thoughtful. His romance with a distant cousin of the Marford family is unusual and captivating. It's a bit difficult to warm up to Eloise Whittleton, but she has a sad past, with no male family members who have given her love and comfort. It made her suspicious and wary of men. She thinks Will's efforts to be a gentleman are an act; he is determined to prove her wrong. Her devious attempt to prove he's a cad backfires for both of them.
Each book I read by Mary Kingswood amazes me more. The way she creates all these different families, with their unique family members and dynamics, is astonishing. This is one of my favorites.
August 31, 2023
A clean story. Second in this series and a enjoyed it. Will is attracted to Eloise an indigent relative of a Marquis who is helping the Marchioness durn g the season. There is the difference in spheres they move in, Will’s family moving up from trade, Eloise is from the upper circles but impoverished. Eloise to be honest is quite ‘off’ about Will given their different circumstances, and hates being taken out by him, only going because the Marchioness promotes it. She believes his attitude to be a sham and bizarrely to test him traps him into a marriage proposal, then feels guilty and dumps him. To be honest I would be very war y of her, as whilst she is thinking she should dump him, she asks him to speak on her behalf to her estranged father who has just reappeared. Talking of which that was odd. He suddenly appears is just remarried to his mistress, they were both well connected, Eloise will not speak to him, and I do not think we actually hear of her thoughts on this after Will has spoken with him and he’s told him why he went away. He seems then to disappear from the story line it was a bit like Camilla in Book 1, slightly odd and not sure what it really added.
It was good to see the continuing efforts and trials of the Fletcher family as it migrates from trade circles to gentry. However overall I liked it and look forward to Book 3.
It was good to see the continuing efforts and trials of the Fletcher family as it migrates from trade circles to gentry. However overall I liked it and look forward to Book 3.
February 7, 2025
A family in trade moving up in the world. A family of landed gentry stepping aside for them. And the sons and daughters caught in the middle.
Will Fletcher is the eldest son and heir to the family fortune, and although his father is reluctant to relinquish his roots in trade, Will is more than happy to become a gentleman. He looks and sounds the part, but can he act the part, too? He soon finds that the world of high society is not easy to break into. It’s humiliating enough that the aristocracy disdain him, but how dare a lowly poor relation spurn his attentions?
Eloise Whittleton is very glad to be summoned to London to assist her distant cousin the Marchioness of Carrbridge manage her social engagements. For a few weeks she can forget she’s poor and dance her way through the season, storing up a few memories for when she returns to her retired life in Bath. There are some annoyances, though, and handsome, roguish Will Fletcher is everything she despises. When he tries to impress her, she’s determined to teach him a lesson he won’t forget.
Ah, the social classes at play in Regency England.
Will Fletcher is the eldest son and heir to the family fortune, and although his father is reluctant to relinquish his roots in trade, Will is more than happy to become a gentleman. He looks and sounds the part, but can he act the part, too? He soon finds that the world of high society is not easy to break into. It’s humiliating enough that the aristocracy disdain him, but how dare a lowly poor relation spurn his attentions?
Eloise Whittleton is very glad to be summoned to London to assist her distant cousin the Marchioness of Carrbridge manage her social engagements. For a few weeks she can forget she’s poor and dance her way through the season, storing up a few memories for when she returns to her retired life in Bath. There are some annoyances, though, and handsome, roguish Will Fletcher is everything she despises. When he tries to impress her, she’s determined to teach him a lesson he won’t forget.
Ah, the social classes at play in Regency England.
September 2, 2022
If you want a synopsis of the plot then this review isn’t it - it’s just to say the book took me away to another time and culture and made me believe in it completely!
I received an advanced review copy of this book and boy am I glad I did - whilst I would’ve bought a copy immediately upon publication anyway it was good to get to read it early! I absolutely adore this author and as usual wasn’t disappointed.
Too many Regencies are peppered with an unlikely number of dukes or gratuitous sex or downright silly plots, so it’s refreshing to read a realistic and thoroughly interesting story of a family in trade trying to get a toe on the rung of the social ladder.
I was engrossed throughout and couldn’t put it down - it caught my attention fully in spite of reading it in the middle of a rather trying time, when I was otherwise struggling to take my mind off the daily issues of life.
I received an advanced review copy of this book and boy am I glad I did - whilst I would’ve bought a copy immediately upon publication anyway it was good to get to read it early! I absolutely adore this author and as usual wasn’t disappointed.
Too many Regencies are peppered with an unlikely number of dukes or gratuitous sex or downright silly plots, so it’s refreshing to read a realistic and thoroughly interesting story of a family in trade trying to get a toe on the rung of the social ladder.
I was engrossed throughout and couldn’t put it down - it caught my attention fully in spite of reading it in the middle of a rather trying time, when I was otherwise struggling to take my mind off the daily issues of life.
September 16, 2022
The concept for this new Kingswood series is intriguing. A merchant family has purchased a country estate from a family of down on their luck aristocrats. The second son of the otherwise snobbish arstocrats marries the third daughter of the merchant family in the first book. In this second one, the merchant family is attempting to take London by storm during the spring/summer social season, but getting invited to the "right" homes is difficult when you are seen as parvenus. The eldest son, Eton and Cambridge educated, thinks he wasnts to marry a titled lady, so of course falls in love with the secretary, a very poor relation indeed, of a countess down the block. The examination of early nineteenth century manners and mores is as interesting as always, and there are three more daughters and another son to marry off before the family settles into their allotted place in society. At least the girls got vouchers for Almack's!
September 19, 2022
Another great book by Ms. Kingswood
I really enjoyed A Spring Dance, the second book about the Fletcher family and their attempt to join London’s high society. This story is about their son Will. He is a good looking young man, and rather too sure of himself. He gets a shock when he pays attention to a young lady who makes it evident she does not like him. So he sets out to change her mind. It’s a case of pride and prejudice. He is proud and she is prejudiced against him because his manner reminds her of the father who deserted her. As they meet, they talk, learn about each other, and he tries to meet her standards of a gentleman. In his effort to prove to Eloise that he is a true gentleman, he becomes a better man. And they fall in love with each other. It’s a lovely story.
I really enjoyed A Spring Dance, the second book about the Fletcher family and their attempt to join London’s high society. This story is about their son Will. He is a good looking young man, and rather too sure of himself. He gets a shock when he pays attention to a young lady who makes it evident she does not like him. So he sets out to change her mind. It’s a case of pride and prejudice. He is proud and she is prejudiced against him because his manner reminds her of the father who deserted her. As they meet, they talk, learn about each other, and he tries to meet her standards of a gentleman. In his effort to prove to Eloise that he is a true gentleman, he becomes a better man. And they fall in love with each other. It’s a lovely story.
December 10, 2022
One of my favorite authors. Clean and interesting. All novels introduce new characters as well as weave previously met characters into the tale.
In this book, a man of trade (a mercer) has made a fortune and educated his sons. Now he is striving to move up the caste system of society in London. Despite his wealth he likely will be shunned by the upper classes. His daughters are beautiful. His sons are educated. He will always be a man of trade.
The oldest son and heir to the fortune meets a lady who is the impoverished relative of a titled lady. She is spending the season as her social secretary. She constantly accuses him of being a rogue, not a gentleman. Will sets out to prove despite his humble roots, he is a gentleman.
Eloise sets a trap for Will and he is compelled to propose. The farce continues for weeks.
In this book, a man of trade (a mercer) has made a fortune and educated his sons. Now he is striving to move up the caste system of society in London. Despite his wealth he likely will be shunned by the upper classes. His daughters are beautiful. His sons are educated. He will always be a man of trade.
The oldest son and heir to the fortune meets a lady who is the impoverished relative of a titled lady. She is spending the season as her social secretary. She constantly accuses him of being a rogue, not a gentleman. Will sets out to prove despite his humble roots, he is a gentleman.
Eloise sets a trap for Will and he is compelled to propose. The farce continues for weeks.
March 21, 2024
This was ok as long as the audio narrator was not trying to emote any kind of myth or amusement. Then it became very tedious listening to these characters.
In the first place, the main h seemed borderline infantile sounding when the reader was narrating the interaction between her and the H?.
I put a question mark next to the H cuz there are so many characters in this story and it was hard to keep track of them all. The difference in accent, but that tone of voice… that irritating tone of voice she had for the women and when trying to give them some note of happiness… sigh. It was just so hard trying to untangle them and even get into the story due to that.
I do have all 3 books but if this one just kills any kind of ability to keep track of the story or give a damn care about these characters probably will not be reading the rest of them.
In the first place, the main h seemed borderline infantile sounding when the reader was narrating the interaction between her and the H?.
I put a question mark next to the H cuz there are so many characters in this story and it was hard to keep track of them all. The difference in accent, but that tone of voice… that irritating tone of voice she had for the women and when trying to give them some note of happiness… sigh. It was just so hard trying to untangle them and even get into the story due to that.
I do have all 3 books but if this one just kills any kind of ability to keep track of the story or give a damn care about these characters probably will not be reading the rest of them.
September 23, 2022
Never A Dull Moment
This author's stories keep me captivated from beginning to end. I love the characters, the dialogs, the circumstances that they all find themselves in and especially their family dynamics. It is heartwarming to read of the parents' love as well as the relationships of the adult children. It's frustrating to read about the class distinctions and discrimination, but it was, unfortunately, the way of life. I loved Will and Eloise's story and look forward to Angie's.
This author's stories keep me captivated from beginning to end. I love the characters, the dialogs, the circumstances that they all find themselves in and especially their family dynamics. It is heartwarming to read of the parents' love as well as the relationships of the adult children. It's frustrating to read about the class distinctions and discrimination, but it was, unfortunately, the way of life. I loved Will and Eloise's story and look forward to Angie's.
January 27, 2023
Entertaining
Not quite as good as the last one but still entertaining. I don't know why this author claims to write in the style of georgette heyer because these books are nothing like heyer's. This one had quite a lot of Jane Austen phrases thrown in. And the story is very sedate. Nothing like the antics in heyer's stories. But i like that these stories are pleasant and kind. And the writing it good. It's not cheesy like a lot of Regency romances are. So i am liking this series so far.
Not quite as good as the last one but still entertaining. I don't know why this author claims to write in the style of georgette heyer because these books are nothing like heyer's. This one had quite a lot of Jane Austen phrases thrown in. And the story is very sedate. Nothing like the antics in heyer's stories. But i like that these stories are pleasant and kind. And the writing it good. It's not cheesy like a lot of Regency romances are. So i am liking this series so far.
August 3, 2023
A charming Gentleman and Talented Young Woman are Matched by a Marchioness! In this story, there is such a depth of character development that authentic people seem to come alive. Will is an excellent example of a merchant's son who rises in recognition as he deserves. Most of all, he puts the needs of his family as a high priority. He has a relationship with his father to be a responsible son even though he prefers to be frivolous. Connie is a marchioness who annually sponsors a poor relation for experiences with her during the London season. Not only does she supply Eloise with all the gowns she needs, but also the emotional support to improve her musical talent and confidence. Connie's husband is a Marquess that warmly shares his large family. The personalities of all the people and the family relationships warm my heart. I feel so eager to read the following books in the series so I can continue enjoying these characters as I meet the rest of their families.
September 12, 2022
World building on an entirely new level
Do not crack Kingswood's latest expecting any of the usual romantic tropes. This second volume in her innovative new series offers fresh perspectives on the charming rogue verses the poor relation that will make it difficult to put down. Not only do the two main characters spring to life, but you can find delicate layers of detail being added to build a fuller picture of the Fletcher family, their circumstances, and individual stories.
Do not crack Kingswood's latest expecting any of the usual romantic tropes. This second volume in her innovative new series offers fresh perspectives on the charming rogue verses the poor relation that will make it difficult to put down. Not only do the two main characters spring to life, but you can find delicate layers of detail being added to build a fuller picture of the Fletcher family, their circumstances, and individual stories.
December 26, 2023
Another excellent book from Mary Kingswood. Love the Fletcher family. Interesting to see how society worked in those days between the nobility and those in trade who had done very well for themselves and had enough money to live like the nobility. I especially loved the elder Mr. Fletcher (Will's father). Such an affable wise man! I thought he gave really good advice and didn't let his wealth go to his head.
July 6, 2024
I love Mary Kingswood and the Mercer series, but I struggled to get through this Particular book. Unfortunately, for me, the characters weren’t interesting enough to keep me engaged unlike the other stories in this series. I didn’t care for the main characters. He was stuffy and she was boring. Just too much time went on and on and on with very little action. I kept waiting for something to happen and then, suddenly, they were engaged. Sorry, this one just boring.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 9, 2025
Really well done but I felt like the hero and heroine were too often inconsistent between each other’s perspectives. She felt warm feelings for him but he saw her as snappish. He was only trying to get her to like him but she felt he was sincerely kind. Maybe I’ll have to read it again, because everything else was so well-crafted! I am enjoying the different threads of the other sibling winding through these stories. A lovely series!
September 15, 2022
Beautifully written
This was no cookie cutter romance and I am so glad. The twists had me guessing and that is rare. Was concerned I would not like a story that wasn't centered on nobility but I wouldn't change a thing about it. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Can't wait for the next.
This was no cookie cutter romance and I am so glad. The twists had me guessing and that is rare. Was concerned I would not like a story that wasn't centered on nobility but I wouldn't change a thing about it. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Can't wait for the next.
September 27, 2022
delightful!!
I have been following this author for about three years. With every book, I like her more and more! She doesn’t disappoint. Unusual characters, unusual story lines. Beautiful language, deep knowledge of the historical period she is writing about! Absolutely joy to read!!!
I have been following this author for about three years. With every book, I like her more and more! She doesn’t disappoint. Unusual characters, unusual story lines. Beautiful language, deep knowledge of the historical period she is writing about! Absolutely joy to read!!!
October 3, 2022
A Spring Dance
Absolutely great storyline. Great characters. Wonderful skills of storytelling. Will is a keeper for male character & Eloise a female keeper character. The lines between the merchants & the aristocracy were drawn plain enough for this reader's understanding.
Great Read. Enjoy.
Absolutely great storyline. Great characters. Wonderful skills of storytelling. Will is a keeper for male character & Eloise a female keeper character. The lines between the merchants & the aristocracy were drawn plain enough for this reader's understanding.
Great Read. Enjoy.
October 4, 2022
I have read and enjoyed all of Mary Kingswood's books (more than once) and this latest was no exception. Kingwood is a great storyteller and her characters are interesting and complex and her women characters in particular are strong, imaginative and resourceful. The Regency period is portrayed with skill. I received an advance copy of this book and can't wait for the next one to come out.
October 31, 2022
enjoyable read
I have read all of Mary Kingswood’s books and it would help if I had a better memory for people from previous books as the cast tend to make periodic appearances which is fun to see. A lighthearted story, with ups and downs, the characters have some meat to them, but they not overly deep.
I have read all of Mary Kingswood’s books and it would help if I had a better memory for people from previous books as the cast tend to make periodic appearances which is fun to see. A lighthearted story, with ups and downs, the characters have some meat to them, but they not overly deep.
May 4, 2023
I wouldn't rate this quite as highly as #1 in the series, but it was still very good and highly enjoyable. It was good to meet up with the Marfords once again as well. As I have read through the many historical romances by Mary Kingswood, I have loved coming across familiar characters - it has been like meeting old friends!
September 24, 2023
Another Great Read
Although I miss the mystery that usually runs through Mary Kingswood's series, the books so far have still been immensely enjoyable which says a lot about the quality of writing and the plot. No mystery but still wonderful romances and that alone makes their series worth reading... on to book 3.
Although I miss the mystery that usually runs through Mary Kingswood's series, the books so far have still been immensely enjoyable which says a lot about the quality of writing and the plot. No mystery but still wonderful romances and that alone makes their series worth reading... on to book 3.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 68 reviews