Purchased as part of this year's World SF/F bundle on Storybundle! Also, vacation read 2023 1/5.
This is a stylistically and conceptually interesting novella which I found less compelling at the character/relationship level. I absolutely love the nonlinear structure, and the way that each perspective was written in a different style and format. Stev's multiple screens were the most interesting for me, as I feel Coelho really captured the way people code-switch between different online interactions, and the way that attention is fragmented by the many things in the modern world which demand it.
The characters and their relationships felt flatter, especially Alice - even in her own POV, she seemed to mostly exist in relationship to Liverloin, rather than as a whole person. Some of this is the natural limitation of short-form storytelling, but some of it felt to me just like... the way a lot of male writers, especially in high-concept SF, tend to use female characters kind of like props.
Thematically, it felt like a very topical read for the current moment (though admittedly, a bit odd to take to the beach, as I did). The way Coelho presents AI as an extension of the panopticon effect of social media was chilling - and, reading it after the release of AI art and writing programs which scrape the internet for datasets, hit close to home. It is unfortunately true in the modern world that anything, even this review, could be used as part of an AI training dataset, and therefore spread and known far more widely than it was ever meant to be. After decades of (relatively) unfettered internet, that's something we all have to reckon with.
Definitely an interesting little jaunt, and a writer I'd read more of.