Not bad overall other than all the typos. I highlighted a lot of them, at least the ones that were bad enough to disrupt the story for me.
Not sure about this series. It has potential, but just keeps lagging. The whole point of the story is for him to develop as a healer in order to fulfill a crucial role later. The thing is, other than getting the cleric class which gains him absolutely nothing, he never heals. He runs around like a rogue the whole time. It’s like the author advertised an idea to draw in readers, but has no intention of writing a story that follows said idea.
For a series to have this many typos, and a story that is so wishy-washy, I think I am done and won’t continue. At least fix all the typos before publishing!
Great story for a great universe with so much creativity!
This story that ties into the genesis story arc is such a great idea and expands the scope of all the previous stories. I'd love to finish reading the second regression finished to its conclusion but much is infered from this series and the whole universe is very fluid, creatively speaking. Thanks for the story so for and I'll definitely be getting every next installment. Also it could use a once over editing wise and the final chapter comes after words from the author. Just saying....
I wasn't sure how book two would turn out following book one especially with periodically disjointed timelines/storylines. Or maybe the MC is jumping between characters from the original story line or orb that time witch merged and I didn't mention it in my previous review but I like the idea of the MC choosing a support class even if he's overpowered because he's experienced. Looking forward to next book. Even though we didn't "see" Luca and Paul they were mentioned so I know they are important.
Disapointment. Story ruined by author's inattentiveness.
This story has clearly not been proof-read. It has over two dozen grammatical errors. Not simple errors like a missed comma. Could not get immersed into the story when I have to stop and decode a sentence so frequently. An author's value is how much care they put into their story or lack of care. I couldn't even buy a soda from a vending machine with this net worth.
Good book, good plot, not the best execution. It’s worth a read but get ready for the grammar errors, otherwise there’s a bit of detail missing that just prevent five stars.
The second book was very good. I like it a lot. A lot of character development and all for the best. Looking forward for the third one. Hopefully I won’t have to wait too long. Lol.
Really glad I started reading this series. I am really enjoying this version of a time line restarting. Like the fact additional knowledge is the main thing that happens
Finding an author has double-spaced a short story and called it a novel is becoming increasingly vexing. You’re not in middle school writing four sides on what you did over the holidays.
I like this story. There are many minor spelling or grammar errors but nothing too bad. The world could also use some more fleshing out. Overall I like the grit of it