billionaires tainted love

by ishiHAHA

I always wondered what the world was like outside
the four walls that I was trapped inside, until he
came.

He made me want to forget and live, forget that I
was, after all, a murderer and that I deserved the
scars gracing my body.

He made me want to forget that I was a mere
replacement, a shadow of my twin sister with no real
identity of my own.

He made me feel emotions I never felt before, he
made me feel cared for, and then he made me fall in
love.

A love so deep, I wanted to hand over my life to him
even though I knew that I was Just a pawn in his
game of revenge.

45 pages, ebook

Reviews

[Lupi_reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

I mean, what do you expect from Wattpad?
By now we should know what we're getting ourselves into.
We all love our arranged marriage, but this book takes it into a whole new concept. I'll explain the book's main idea in the spoiler, so if you don't want to spoil the book, DO NOT READ IT.

So Alex is a billionaire (obviously, again Wattpad) he's got this thing against this guy (who I forgot the name of, but for the sake of this review let's call him Michael). Michael Has two daughters - identical twins to be exact- one who's a famous model named Sara who's notoriously known for being a bitch and a playgirl (as she should be because this is Wattpad) and the other one -Sierra-who's the runt of the family, the who everyone hates and for some reason, her father and her sister blame her for her mother's death (because their mother died during childbirth, so make it make sense) and not only that but she is trapped in the house like a prisoner, she can't go out, she doesn't go to school (but for some reason, she has a double degree in accounting from an online course and a PhD in something else also from an online course, didn't know you could do that, especially since you have no identity), hell our home girl doesn't even know what a fitting room is, and she has never seen a movie before, that's how much her life sucks.
So as I mentioned, Alex has beef with Michael, so he gives him an ultimatum (and this is where logic escapes me); he either ruins Michael's company or marries his precious daughter Sara as revenge I guess (again, I'm lost on the logic). So Michael -true to his evil guy persona- agrees to marry off Sara to Alex; But instead he forces innocent Sierra to pretend to be her evil sister Sara into marrying an evil Adonis-looking rich man and ships her to the stranger's house at once. So now we have to follow their relationship and the confusion that comes with it, we see how Alex is confused because Sara is not acting the way she should (because he's met Sara before, hello plot holes) and Sierra who does not know how to act like her sister because she's never had the life Sara did.

So the idea of the plot was great, I loved it. If anyone has any similar recommendations, I'd take it. But when it comes to the execution, it missed by a long shot. The writing needs a little bit of development and it also needs to be realistic most of all. It was so cringy. And I felt like the author was laying it on really thick with how Sierre was oblivious to things and innocent and even with her thoughts, it's like she's saying "Look how pathetic I am, I need you to pity me"

[thebleauway · Rating 4 out of 5]

Love how he fell in love with her different ways.

[DIMA48 · Rating 4 out of 5]

OMG WOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOWWWW LOVEDDDD IT AND ATE IT UP IN A DAYYYYYYY : )