I hate that I love The Carnal Games to much. Why? Because now I don’t know if I’m going to find anything else to read that can live up to it in the interim while Nebula writes the sequel. It’s so hard to find a good sci-fi alien romance. There’s a million of them out there, but rarely do they contain the perfect mix of world building, romance, and action. Not only that, but the success of these stories also heavily relies on the ability of the author to write a compelling non-human hero, one who doesn’t sound human, doesn’t look human, and doesn’t skeeve the reader out all at the same time. Rarely can I find an author with the ability to do this, and never have I found it all contained in a debut novel.
Enemies for over 13 years, Terran Agent Chayse and Nisroc Kul Prime Zeris Durek have been hunting each other to extinction across the galactic continuum. The atrocities committed against one another are seemingly insurmountable to the point where their far-ranging feud threatens to destroy the peace negotiations between their people. What is supposed to be their final confrontation turns into something neither of them could expect when awaken to find themselves imprisoned in the illegal Carnal Games where anything is fair game, and it only ends when one of them is dead.
It's funny because there are a couple of clichés in this book that could have quickly had me running for the hills, but it’s the way that Nebula chooses to employ them that convinced me to stay. Personally, I’m a little over the ‘Hunger Games’ scenario. At its crux it’s really just an easy way for authors to force their characters into close proximity, throw any number of random events at them, and coerce readers to stay engaged as we wait to figure out how two people will survive in a game with only one victor. It’s an overused template for authors to embed their characters into, contain them in close quarters, make them fall in love, and then mutually sacrifice themselves for one another. I almost skipped this book because of it. I’m glad I didn’t. What I appreciate about Nebula’s use of this gimmick is that she gives us glimpses into the outside world, the workings of the game, and others’ attempts to stop the illegal broadcast of it through the galaxy. Once Chayse and Durek enter into a nebulous truce, they start tracking the origins of the game within the game and in discovering one of the internal bases, gives us an inkling that this illegal sport is way deeper than its outward projection of intergalactic voyeuristic entertainment. Although we are only beginning to touch on it in this book, Nebula has given readers a hint of what is to come and the hope that even if the next book features these games once again there are places for it to evolve and plots to be discovered. In other worlds, she writes with purpose. She includes details that although her characters are physically contained the plot isn’t. It’s the small details and the discoveries our heroes make along the way that separates her ‘hunger games’ from others.
I tend to leave a lot of sci-fi romances half finished because after the initial standoff between the leads, once they enter the trust and cohabitation stage, the plot falls stagnant and they typically have nothing to do except be together until the final showdown. But the introduction of Durek’s daughter into the game, coupled with Chayse and his joined decision to protect her while keeping her ignorant of the nature of their captivity, compounded by the fact that each is less inclined to see the other die and thus bring it to its natural conclusion, continuously motivated me to read on.
Elkartira’s introduction is key. It’s hard to realistically imagine a 13-year-old hatred, compounded by the deaths of comrades, coming to an end. Having them both bond of the importance of protecting a child, is great way to realistically believe that Chayse would subject herself to the atrocities presented by the game, to keep her safe. It is also a great way to slowly morph Durek’s hatred and disgust at her species into something resembling respect. I don’t know how else to illustrate how well thought out this series is. Nebula writes with purpose. She takes old and rehashed concepts, adds meaningful actions, and morphs them into new and interesting ideas.
I don’t know how I waited until now to talk about Agent Chayse and Zeris Durek. I can’t get enough of them. Honestly, they may have ruined me for future romances with the high bar they’ve set for future romantic leads. There’s a couple of things Nebula does that makes them individually and united so successful. First Agent Chayse, our human female, is a badass. She is a combat veteran. She is older, mature, and has many life events that influence her. She is a tight combination of battle hardened, calculated, and intelligent with a long military career and advanced Terran technology at her disposal that allows her to go toe to toe with these monsters of the galaxy. It’s the combination of military training and technology that makes her a believable foe for a Nisroc, because Durek has just about every ‘natural’ advancement known to mankind that could easily make their 13-year feud unbelievable. He has a natural armor, an affinity for fire, and a tongue that can pierce the skulls of his enemies. Coupled with superior strength, speed, and stamina he is everything a human isn’t and so it is only Nebula’s controlled application of divided strengths and weaknesses between the two that keeps the reader convinced these two can truly be equal on the battlefield.
And when Chayse is dropped into the game devoid of her technology it is only the careful and convincing application of an applied disability to Durek that continues to keep them equally matched and is the initial crux that pushes them to align together against the game. Every success in the book is because Nebula keeps everything balanced. Chayse and Durek push and pull on each other. Their strengths and weaknesses complement one another, as they both internally struggle to put preconceived notions and revulsion aside for the sake of survival.
And just as Chayse being a badass capable of keeping Durek on his toes is a major plus, Durek’s alienness makes him a perfect complement to her. Durek is truly alien. I just finished another sci-fi romance where while the plot was strong, the alien hero was alien in appearance only, and every time he opened his mouth, he dispelled every illusion of otherness. That is not true with Durek. From her conscious choice to write his vocal inflection into his speech, to his consistent use of his alien attributes to cement his nature, Nebula truly knows how to convince readers we are dealing with something different than us. There is more to creating aliens then giving them fangs, claws, and tails. One needs to think about how having these additional appendages effects the way they move about the world. And Durek has this in spades. He uses his talons to climb, and his long tongue doubles as both a weapon and scenting organ. His affinity for fire makes cold damp his natural enemy. He is well-thought out, well crafted, and when he opens his mouth his speech, his lack of humor, lack of interest in Terran double talk, marks him as different, and makes him very compelling.
I think my analyzation may distract from what you all want to know about…the romance. Because it’s built on a connection, a common goal, and respect, once it’s time for the two of them to actually fall in love, it’s believable and hot. Durek and Chayse light up the pages together. I said at the beginning that I was ruined for future couples and this is why. They have something to build on, and the result makes their romance all the sweeter. I think Durek says it best when he tells Chayse “We squandered too much time as enemies. Forgive me.” Yes, Durek you did. We readers have been waiting forever for you to get your act together and admit your feelings but truly the wait was worth it.
It’s been a long time since I’ve written a review with no complaints. Nebula employs ideas and concepts that are overused, have the potential to be off putting, disgusting, or unbelievable, but she manipulates each and every one deftly, and that’s what makes the Carnal Games successful. She’s able to deal with very strong, triggering subject matter. She knows when to fade scenes to black; when too much would be gratuitous, and too little; a lack of commitment. Her plot has the potential to expand exponentially. Her characters are more than a single characteristic, they are realistic and damaged and oh so good for one another. And I don’t think Nebula knows how much I’m relying on ‘Talvin’s’ response of “we shall see” to Agent Chayse’s retirement announcement. I know series like this rarely reuse their characters but oh how I hope Chayse and Durek return in the sequel. And if not, I think I definitely deserve a book dedicated to Talvin (and only those who truly know me know how big a statement this is, because I HATE changing romantic leads in a series). This book was killer, it may be the first one to remove me from my reading funk, and now I’m left wondering what I’m going to read now for the rest of the weekend. ***5 stars***