This could be a great book if the bullying was not annoying. Cause the bullying is too freakin annoying and happens all the freakin time💩💩💩 LIKE WHAT THE ACTUAL FVCK. I don’t like bullying a lot in a book especially many times cause that’s what i want to escape from the real world😂 We already have bullies in social media and now we have to read in a fantasy book that we should be escaping from the real world🤮 It’s not even funny anymore😒 It’s very annoying and unnecessary…. AND WHAT IS MORE ANNOYING IS THAT THE AUTHOR DIDN’T LET THE HEROINE TO KICK THE BULLIES WHEN SHE WAS POWERFUL ENOUGH TO DO SO🥵🥵🥵🥵 I LIKE IT WHEN THE HEROINE CAN STAND UP FOR HERSELF IN THE FIRST PLACE🥵 DAMN EVEN WHEN I WAS READING WHAT THE HEROINE GONE THROUGH I WAS FEELING SUFFOCATED🥵🥵🥵🥵 THAT’S HOW MUCH I WAS FEELING WHEN I WAS READING WHAT SHE BEEN THROUGH 😒😒😒 THE HEROINE CRIES A LOT AT THE BEGINNING WHEN THE BULLIES AND MEAN WORDS ARE TOO MUCH FOR HER😭 AND TRUST ME, IT’S A LOT.
EVEN MYSELF WANT TO PUNCH THOSE PEOPLE WHO DO HER WRONG🥵🥵🥵🥵 I’m also angry at the heroine cause many times she let the bullies just go and don’t defend herself. And author, that’s not cute at all. That so annoying of you to even made the heroine weak like that😒 SO FREAKIN ANNOYING🥵🥵
BACK THE STORY😂😂
The story starts with the heroine was trying to go to her school and the first day was start with the students have to show everyone in school what powers they have or what elemental power they have. So they can be put in a academy after high school. Before the the heroine went to the auditorium, she meet with one of her mate heroes name RIVEN AND KAI. Riven was not very nice and kai was the nicest one. It was just a friendly meeting, the three of them didn’t know at the time they were mates. While the heroine was talking to kai, her best friend found her and told her to go to the auditorium with her. She went with her best friend and sit and wait for their turn. When it’s time for the heroine’s to stand up and show her powers, she was nervous but at the same time can’t wait to start. When she and the teacher who have to do the test put the heroine in the situation where she have to show her powers, she did. And she did it with very powerful… She turns off all the lights in the school with her powers. And turns out the heroine is a powerful one and was chosen to be in the academy of powerful people in it. Even royals and other higher students are there too… AND THAT’S WHEN SHE MEET UP WITH HER TWO MORE HEROES ❤️❤️❤️ and the journey of the heroine have to find out the true about her powers and the truth about her being is where it all started when she goes to that academy….
This is a REVERSE HAREM but it was really a weird one to start with and it’s annoying actually… WHY? Because:
1. They didn’t even feel the connection right away and say “you’re my mate”. Nope. It take them days after they meet to actually feel their magic together and say they’re mates. I prefer if they actually really just feel it right away though lol.
2. RIVEN the first mate. He is so weird and have a very bad attitude. He is the worst one. He treat the heroine very badly mentally, physically and emotionally. Idk what he deal is. He always push her away non stop and always mean to her for no reason. AND HE HAVE A FIANCE AND A GIRLFRIEND AT THIS TIME WHEN HE FIRST SAW THE HEROINE AND AFTER SEEING THE HEROINE. HE DIDN’T BREAK UP WITH HIS FIANCE WHO LOOKS PRETTY MUCH HIS GIRLFRIEND CAUSE THE WAY THEY ALWAYS TOUCH AND SPENDING ALONE TIME😆 who knows in that time what are they doing right😂 And the author just magically thinks thats okay? Oh no. It’s not okay. It’s not safe romance duh😓 Even in the end of the first book here, the hero didn’t tell or the author didn’t show why the hero was in a relationship while he is mated with the heroine. Didn’t show or have a scene that tells is the hero still in that relationship or not. So it’s annoying😅 Annoying to see the hero is always with that woman in front of the heroine… Like seriously author? What? 😒
3. Confusing things always happening😒😒 The story sometimes it doesn’t really explain well about certain important things😓😓
4. The people who bully her IS NOT GETTING ANY PUNISHMENT. SO WTF? WHAT KINDA ACADEMY IS THIS BULLSHIT? NO PUNISHMENT WHEN THERE’S HUGE BULLYING IN FRONT OF THE TEACHERS 🤮🤮 WTF AUTHOR???!😭😭😭
I love it when a RH is a safe one. And if the RH is a fantasy book, not only it will be better when it’s safe but also better when it’s a great strong powerful heroine character. This heroine in this book have a very powerful strong power inside her but her mental and her emotions is so weak. She got bullied a lot and that’s not even cute at all😒😒😒 Most of the entire academy hates her for no reason, and not only hate her but also creating something to hurt her or to put her in a very bad position. She always is unsafe, danger in everywhere even when she’s only fvcking walk to get some air there’s always something comes up and hurt her. I find myself sometimes is not safe mind to read this book cause how many dangerous parts of the heroine feel. Like it’s very shitty that the author made this book like that for a woman to feel hurt all the freakin time when she’s is innocent 😒😒😒 Also for the RH one of the heroes is dating someone else and touching romantically to someone else in front of the heroine knowing the heroine is the mate is not okay at all🥵🥵 Seriously reading this book gives me a headache 🥲 Only a little scenes of romance… Little. Not many…
TOO MANY UNNECESSARY CHILDISH DRAMA💩💩💩
I do enjoy the book and read it till the end. But because of the scenes that I don’t really like, it made me not like it as much as I want to. If you’re a patient person then you probably will like this 😂😂
‼️‼️‼️TRIGGERS: Killing, high on violence, trauma, panic attack, bullying many times, hate, deception, mysterious, death, blood, anxiety and depression.
‼️‼️‼️NO CHEATING.
But one of the hero is dating someone else and touching someone else while knowing the heroine is the mate. Idk if that’s cheating. Cause in the first book the author didn’t quite say if they have s3x, only touching and always together. So idk🥲🥲🥲
‼️‼️‼️NO SEPARATION
‼️‼️‼️THE HEROES IS OVER THE TOP POSSESSIVE PROTECTIVE POWERFUL ALPHA MALES.
One of the heroes name kai is manwhor3.
Others, it doesn’t look like they are lol.
HEROES:
1. RIVEN
2. KAI
3. PHOENIX
4. ATLAS
RIVEN is a bitch, kai is sweetheart and always say romantic funny words, phoenix is grumpy and atlas is very gentle and like a giant teddy bear lol.
‼️‼️‼️THE HEROES IS OBSESSED AND WANTS THE HEROINE SO BADLY….
‼️‼️‼️NO VIRGINS.
‼️‼️‼️MANY JEALOUS SCENES FROM THE HEROES and little from the heroine.
‼️‼️‼️THERE ARE EX GIRLFRIEND OR EX FVCK BUDDY SHOWS UP FROM THE HERO NAME KAI AND RIVEN. THE OTHER TWO HEROES DOESN’T. AND THERE’S NO FROM THE HEROINE…
‼️‼️‼️HOT SMUT SCENES🤩🤩🤩🤩
‼️‼️‼️STRONG CHEMISTRY.
‼️‼️‼️IT ENDS WITH A CLIFFHANGER.
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