There was an immediate disconnect and I couldn't warm up to Lucia or her life and world. She was so distant. I couldn't put my finger on it but for some reason I couldn't get it into it. It was like the writing was hands-off; even though it was first-person it felt like third person for all that I felt like I knew her.
It wasn't the best introduction to Lucia that she couldn't concentrate on anything the teacher said in class because of a cute boy. I also didn't like the scene the next day after she's seen the army trucks, where she wakes up contemplating the yellow headband that goes good with her dark hair or the green and white that matched perfectly with her starched outfit.
When she got mad at her mom for not letting her hang out with her friend because things were dangerous, I was so irritated. I know she's only 14 but that didn't lessen my irritation. There are army trucks and communists and school's been closed and everything else, so for her not to see the danger in that and get all upset annoyed me.
It was interesting that there were rebel meetings and people wore brigadista uniforms. Her friend Ivette told her the boy she liked from school was there and he was going to teach peasants, because the government called on students over 13 to go to the countryside and teach the peasants for 3 months. The book should've started out with this and it would've captured my interest.
When Lucia got mad at her mom for taking the red umbrella out to get groceries with I almost lost it. Red brought them attention and she wondered why her mom insisted on embarrassing her with it. A terrible time to be in the POV of such a bratty little teenager.
I was so irritated that Lucia refused to see reason about Castro. No matter what she heard her dad and mom talking about, no matter what he said, she took the government's side and didn't see what the big deal was. Seeing her dad's boss tied up and hearing him be shot, her dad saying he was given the job and told to spy on people, saying their money and valuables would be taken. None of that clued this idiot in to the fact that the government was bad. No, she thought her parents were paranoid and that Cuba would do so good under Castro's communism. I think your parents know a little something more about how politics work than a 14 year old spoiled brat. Fool.
The way she treated her mom, saying "Okay, sure" when her mom said there would be extra money after she bought the medicine and that Lucia would buy some face powder or nail polish, she deserved to be smacked. She was only nice to her mom when she was told she could go to the dance. And the way she went on and on about that truly perfect shade of nail polish annoyed the crap out of me. I want a character that doesn't obsess over clothes and looks. Materialistic ppl make me sick. And I don't think the bottle of nail polish would break just from falling on the ground. That's hard glass and doesn't break very easily.
At least she finally saw the danger of going out when she saw the doctor's body hanging from a tree. She sobbed into her mother's chest like a baby and said she was never leaving the house again. Serves her right for being such an idiot.
On cloud 9. Seventeen Magazines. Miss High Fashion.
I hate when characters make such stupid mistakes that are going to come back and cause trouble. She knew Ivette's family was with the revolutionary, they're not on their side and have been brainwashed by the government along with everyone else. So, her parents said they would have to make an effort to go with the flow and not cause suspicion or get in trouble. That's why her mom invited Ivette and her mom over. So what does Lucia of the one brain cell do? She tells Ivette that her dad hid her mom's jewelry in the floor. What a colossal idiot! When will she ever learn? And you can see what Ivette thinks of it when she says isn't that what the government told them not to do? They're supposed to have everything in the open so the government can determine if there's a better use for their things. Way to go, Lucia. Ivette isn't on your side and she's going to rat you out. I hate stupid characters.
When she referenced Sandra Dee's dresses I was like are you kidding me? Grease came out in 1978 and this was in the early 1960s. Wtf is this author thinking?
The lie she pulled to her mom made me so fed-up with her. I wanted nothing more to do with her as the main character. She overheard her dad and his brother arguing and knew it was a big deal, but the night of the dance her dad was running late and her mom couldn't leave Frankie home alone, so when her uncle pulled in the driveway she lied and said her mom would be okay with him chaperoning her at the dance. She then lied to her mom and said her uncle was there to apologize to her dad. Where does she get off meddling with adults like that?
It got steadily worse. She asked what he was fighting about with her dad and he said her dad needed to learn some hard lessons. She doesn't even comment, react or act like she even heard it. Who could hear someone say their dad needed to learn a hard lesson and not get upset? Then she asked him what patria postestad meant, a phrase she heard her parents talking about. Why does she keep telling on her parents to revolutionaries?!? This girl doesn't have two brain cells to work with.
Lucia finally got to dance with her crush Manuel. At least she could shut up about it and we could get on with business. I found myself staying removed from him because I already knew, thanks to the plot spoiler summary, that her parents were going to send her and her brother to the U.S. so nothing would come of it. That ruined the time spent in Cuba because I was just waiting for it to come to an end. After they danced and went to get drinks, he dropped her hand to get them and she said she had never hated cups so much in her life. What a ridiculously stupid and immature thing to say. That was so stupid.
In typical book fashion it turns out Manuel isn't a nice guy. Not only is he a steadfast revolutionary and thinks people should die that don't support it, he tries to force himself on her. I was so irritated at that. Of course he has to do that. It's too much trouble to make him be nice, much easier to ruin his character completely and get him out of the way. So overdone.
The really annoying part was Lucia's reaction after. She thinks she acted like a little girl in front of him and is humiliated, all because she couldn't handle a boy kissing her. So now she's reached a new low of idiocy. She doesn't know the different between a kiss and sexual assault.
Pg 139 Telling them it'd been a mistake to send us here.
It'd is it and would combined, not it had. If would been a mistake. Come on.
Obviously there was something wrong on the author's part that I couldn't grasp the gravity of the reality of communism and kids having to leave their parents. It was so unemotional. The author can't convey emotion. She's writing that Lucia's thinking about her parents but I don't feel it and I don't buy it.
At the facility I found it highly convenient that Frankie just guessed which bunk Lucia slept in. He found her suitcase at the bunk bed and just guessed that she was on the top, avoiding a scene where he could've really scared the girl on the bottom. The boy should play the lotto with luck like that. And I thought it was weird how Angela, the girl on the bottom, gave her a cookie and milk and Lucia tossed hem up on the bed, before Frankie ever ate the cookie. That was a weird thing to do to throw a cookie up on your bed. Convenient setup for Frankie eating it.
And so convenient that the director of the boy's facility knows their dad. He recognized the town she was in, a big stretch if you ask me, then put together their last name to produce a connection to the man who is the sole reason he took this job. Their dad helped Mr. Ramirez out when he didn't have money and got medicine for his kid. Some story.
The author kept referencing things from American culture that I just don't think Lucia had access to. She referenced Grease which didn't come out until over a decade after this, then she referenced Seventeen magazine and I wondered how American magazines made their way to Cuba. When she said she had seen movies about Al Capone I was like what movie hasn't this girl seen that relates to what she's going through? So convenient. And there again, I wondered if she would've had access to an American movie, how long it takes a movie to make it to other countries and whatnot.
"I heard blah, blah, blabbity, blah, Cuba, then some more blabbity, blah.
How immature.
I thought they had been speaking English the entire time, because only a word or two here and there would be in Spanish, and everything else would be in English. Then suddenly when they met their foster parents Lucia said "I sorry. I no understand." And I thought she was doing it as a joke to get the woman to slow down as she talked so they could understand the English. But then she kept it up. "We happy to be here." And I was like why is she talking like that? It didn't work. I know the book had to be in English so English-speaking readers could read it but since it was, that meant I thought the characters were speaking English the whole time. Poor writing that it wasn't made clear to readers that they were speaking in Spanish. And a terrible decision to have a few words Spanish to make me think they were only saying those words in Spanish, when everything else was written in English even thought it too was Spanish.
It was funny how Mrs. Baxter asked Lucia about where she was for and she said Puerto Mijares was on a bitch and Mrs. Baxter said never say that and told her how to pronounce beach. The book could have used some humor.
Mrs. Baxter gave her Tabasco sauce to put on her eggs and it was so hot she had to drink half of her juice. She thought they ate spicy food because they do in Mexico and Lucia had to tell her in Mexico yes, Cuba no. Another humorous situation. And when she said there will be snow in the winter Frankie ran to the window expecting there to be snow out, bcuz he can't understand English well.
At least Lucia finally saw the light once she was of of Cuba and had a mature thought. She read the newspapers about the bad things happening in Cuba, and knew that when Fidel Castro had said he was going to help out the poor and losing some freedoms to do that didn't seem like too high of a price. She saw in newspapers that people outright criticized President Kennedy and she knew if anyone did that to Castro that they would be branded a traitor.
When anyone was jailed or threatened or forced to leave their homes she thought they did something to deserve it or didn't love Cuba enough, which I guess showed how powerful Castro's brainwashing was.
Lucia was out carrying the bag of chicken feed to the barn and Frankie wanted her to jump puddles with him, so when he took the bag from her it fell and dumped out and Lucia started a mud fight with him. Mrs. Baxter caught them and I thought she'd be so mad but she only sprayed them with the hose when they got close and they had a little water fight. A nice moment if unexpected. Her history showed that she would get mad bcuz they didn't have money to waste with her husband being laid off and having to work at the store.
It was also unexpected that when a lady at church said she should get one, as in a child from Cuba, Mrs. Baxter said they're not pets, because she struck me as having ulterior motives. Like having them work on the farm or something, and her husband had nothing to do with them and never spoke to them. And she wanted them to learn English and to me spoke to them in a condescending way.
At church when Frankie came back with 3 donuts after eating some himself Lucy was upset thinking what would people say. But he comes up and says "for you and you," giving them to her and Mrs. Baxter and the woman at church says "so cute." That was so out of character it wasn't even funny. Trying way too hard. And if that wasn't enough he went up to Mr. Baxter as he talked to a group of men, tapped him on the arm and gave him the donut. They all stopped talking and Mr. Baxter smiled and patted him on the back Make me gag.
I hated that the first introduction to the boy was him mistaking her for another girl and tickling her under her ribs. Whoa. Sucks that he touches another girl like that. And he didn't even apologize to her. All he said was he thought she was someone else and then said sorry to the other girl! What a jerk.
It was such a copout and bad writing that time was skipped over. She would write she liked going to church and in to town grocery shopping but we didn't get to experience that. And that she had made two other friends at school, but we didn't get to see that either. Or that Mr. Baxter would drop her off at Jennifer's house on Saturdays. I just didn't like the things that were left out. And I was so irritated that all the guys at school liked her. A football player in 11th grade that the mean girl Betty likes. Thought she liked the guy from the bus, but I guess she's like most popular girls in high school and had to have them all. And Eddie, a guy in one of her classes. Like come on. I'm so sick of the heroine having all the guys fall over her.
When Ivette wrote back to her saying that America was such a dangerous place and the people were so bad, it was upsetting to know someone painted a free country in such a bad lift. And she alluded to the fact that she had been raped but the word itself wasn't used. And she just considered herself unlucky, held no ill will to the soldiers or the revolution. A brainwashed idiot for sure.
It was sweet of the Baxters to celebrate Christmas on Christmas Eve like they do, and she made food they have. It was cute how she told them the gifts were from Santa and that theirs were more practical because they couldn't be extravagant like Santa.
It was a nice touch how they were in the library choosing a bird for the school project and started laughing about Betty being crapped on by a bird once and they had to cover their faces with their books. They were laughing so hard all people would see was their books bouncing up and down. Jennifer told her to close the book and open it to a random page and that would be her bird, and it happened to be one she saw in Cuba and it migrates to the U.S.
She went on to skip time, focus on some things but then skip over others I would have liked to read, such as the basketball game they were going to. I expected so much more out of the school dance. She thought it was clever of Eddie to ask to dance with Jennifer first and then say to Nathan, who was dancing with Lucia, that they would switch after. I didn't. I thought he should've just asked her in the first place. I was hoping for a kiss or something, but she wanted to keep it friendly which disappointed me. She asked why he didn't call her a nickname and he said she's different, it's hard to think of one word to describe her and she slugs him in the arm bcuz things got uncomfortable. She was so worried about what happened with Manuel happening again. Please. She ruined the dance bcuz of her fear.
The good thing is that there's a happy ending. Her mom applied for an exit visa and was granted leave, but her dad was denied so he bribed an official and was able to travel too. Mrs. Baxter's friend set them up in the carriage house on her property.
Something about it was just off. There wasn't any emotion, only about 4 humorous or cute things. The writing was too simple and therefore didn't convey the gravity of the situation. I didn't believe the feelings Lucia had about anything. When she said she wondered if her parents would be killed, not in those words, but like silenced in a more fatal way or something, I didn't believe she even cared, because she didn't say she was scared, or cried for them, or wanted them to leave Cuba, or anything. Hello, you just said your parents might be killed, can we get some thoughts on that? The only thing I can say is that I now know about communism in Cuba and kids being sent to the U.S. without their parents. But it wasn't really worth reading.