Ted Bell's Hawke wants to be a big, fun adventure in the Bondian tradition but it ends up being a thoroughly mediocre slog, nowhere near as fun or epic as it seems to think it is. Alexander Hawke is a wealthy English lord who regularly goes on grandiose spy adventures for the British and American governments. His latest mission is to discover who is in possession of a Russian super-sub capable of, apparently, single-handedly decimating the entire U.S. Navy. A coup d'état in Cuba, an down-and-out American naval officer, a decades-old treasure map and a tragedy from Hawke's past all figure in to the story.
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There are lots of problems with Hawke, but I think first and foremost is the plotting. Hawke feels a lot slower than it should, and a big part of why is that Bell doesn't seem to understand pacing very well. There are scenes that should be done in one chapter that are spread out over several because Bell feels the need to split them up with other goings on. I understand the impetus to spend a certain amount of time with everyone, but Bell does it in such a way that it breaks the momentum and makes certain scenes drag. Castro's kidnapping, for example, goes on forever. Additionally, Alex Hawke does very little to move the plot forward. For the entire middle section of the book he's mostly relaxing with Vicky. There's no spying or anything going on, just tanning, swimming and talking about feelings (although I did enjoy the sex on the beach). It's his friends and employees who are doing all the investigating. It makes it hard to see Hawke as the swashbuckling hero he's intended to be when he allows so many swashes to go unbuckled.
Then there's the scope of the story, which feels small when it should be epic. Cuba has been taken over by its military leaders! A sci-fi submarine is waiting to destroy any U.S. fleet that comes near it! A biological agent has been hidden in Guantanamo by a turncoat officer! This should be huge! But it's not. The coup d'état takes minutes to implement and the effects are never really felt. The submarine unleashes its awesome might but once, and it destroys... a fishing boat. The attack on Gitmo, while a bit more successful, is marred by the idiotic -- and flat-out annoying -- characterization of Gomer. The sense of danger never quite feels real, and as a result the adventure is much less fun.
Also infuriating is the writing style. Ted Bell just isn't that great a prose writer. He repeats words very often in close proximity to each other (a bugaboo of mine). He isn't very adept at describing anything exciting, which makes the action scenes dull. But worst of all is his dialogue. He wants Hawke to be witty like James Bond, but he doesn't know how to write wit so everything Hakwe says ends up being either corny or just flat. The same holds true for the other characters, but Hawke gets most of what Bell seems to think are the best lines, so he comes out the most scathed.
Now, I didn't hate the book. I liked the air of fun it created, even if it couldn't really deliver on it. The idea of Hawke as a hero in the mold of James Bond or Indiana Jones is very appealing. Throughout the book, Bell has different characters reflect on past Alex Hawke adventures and that works really well in creating this adventure-serial world. I also really liked some of the supporting characters, particularly Vicky and Stokely, with Conch following close behind them. I preferred them greatly to the rather dull Congreve and Ross (Bell seems to do better with American characters than Brits; seeing as he's American himself, that isn't overly surprising in hindsight, though it's a bit problematic since he decided to make the hero of his books an Englishman). I also really liked Rodrigo, a villain very much in the Ian Fleming tradition. Unfortunately, not only is he just a henchman (serving much less-interesting masters) but he is barely present. Luckily the ending seems to suggest he'll show up again down the road.
And I think I will investigate that road further. I was far less than impressed with this book, but I've read that the writing gets much better as the series goes on, so I'm willing to give it another chance. There is a lot of potential in the setup, but Bell really needs to up his game from here on out.