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Club Sin: Chicago Session 1
Room Fourteen: Making Her Beg
It was just supposed to be a fantasy.
Dancing at the club makes my world crazy enough. But now my reality is three dangerously hot men wanting to be with me…And a stalker who’s making my life a living hell.
But just when I think this life of mine can’t get crazier, it does.
Because I’m falling for all three men. Each tempts me, teases me, and then denies me what I’m craving most. It’s enough to drive a girl wild.
Truth is, I want them all. But they’ve made a bargain, a deal that means none of my prince charmings will get me there…yet. Still, I can’t complain. They’re all pretty perfect and I’d prefer to keep them all. Because I love how things are between us. Except I sense they’re hiding things from me. And I start to fear the worst…
Could one of my sexy suitors actually be my devil in disguise? And is this new club they’re all inviting me to the end of our little arrangement…or just the beginning for us all?
Dancing at the club makes my world crazy enough. But now my reality is three dangerously hot men wanting to be with me…And a stalker who’s making my life a living hell.
But just when I think this life of mine can’t get crazier, it does.
Because I’m falling for all three men. Each tempts me, teases me, and then denies me what I’m craving most. It’s enough to drive a girl wild.
Truth is, I want them all. But they’ve made a bargain, a deal that means none of my prince charmings will get me there…yet. Still, I can’t complain. They’re all pretty perfect and I’d prefer to keep them all. Because I love how things are between us. Except I sense they’re hiding things from me. And I start to fear the worst…
Could one of my sexy suitors actually be my devil in disguise? And is this new club they’re all inviting me to the end of our little arrangement…or just the beginning for us all?
156 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 14, 2022
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July 4, 2022
hard to read
So many typos and grammatical errors made this very difficult to read. My often used instead of me, sentence structure was odd. I realize many indie authors don’t have a professional staff but someone needs to proofread a book before publishing.
So many typos and grammatical errors made this very difficult to read. My often used instead of me, sentence structure was odd. I realize many indie authors don’t have a professional staff but someone needs to proofread a book before publishing.
June 19, 2022
I really enjoyed the previous books in the series but I couldn't get into this one. I didn't feel the chemistry between them. The three guys were not already a group & you can tell that in the book.
June 30, 2022
Stalkers, step brother, age gap and teacher!
A little disappointed with this I'm afraid. Only Val, Derek and Diesel felt fleshed out, poor Cameron felt very underwhelming. The same went for the heat between them, it was good with Derek and Diesel, but Cameron just seemed to be there to make up the numbers. The stalker was built up really well but then faded away and was sorted out off page. There were also no consequences with Val's Dad, even though it was mentioned several times.
Plus there were spelling mistakes throughout the book.
A little disappointed with this I'm afraid. Only Val, Derek and Diesel felt fleshed out, poor Cameron felt very underwhelming. The same went for the heat between them, it was good with Derek and Diesel, but Cameron just seemed to be there to make up the numbers. The stalker was built up really well but then faded away and was sorted out off page. There were also no consequences with Val's Dad, even though it was mentioned several times.
Plus there were spelling mistakes throughout the book.
December 7, 2022
Was it the guy from the poker game that was following her the whole time? Did they catch up with him? What happened when her father found out about them? Did she keep dancing? Lots of things left open, a few grammatical errors, but the start of something that could be super sexy.
September 27, 2024
The idea was fun, the characters were fleshed-out, the female lead was strong and feisty, the male leads were all compelling in their own individual way, there was some humor along the way and the smut when they finally got around to it... wow, hot af!
Based on all of that it should have been a five star read but..
“And what about you, Derek? You took me on my first motorcycle ride. Can you really take my breasts out and my nipples until I come all over your dick?”
“I don’t have any other questions, but I’d like to say that we should all really try to remember that we’re doing this to enjoy yourselves, I guess.”
“What if there are two men after men and not just one?”
And that is just three examples of errors that littered the book. Seriously needed a lot more more editing passes, not only to correct the myriad of mistakes like the above, but also to cut down the unnecessarily long lead-in and correct a couple of story issues.
Recommend if you can deal with poor writing. Otherwise pass because there is a lot of it.
Based on all of that it should have been a five star read but..
“And what about you, Derek? You took me on my first motorcycle ride. Can you really take my breasts out and my nipples until I come all over your dick?”
“I don’t have any other questions, but I’d like to say that we should all really try to remember that we’re doing this to enjoy yourselves, I guess.”
“What if there are two men after men and not just one?”
And that is just three examples of errors that littered the book. Seriously needed a lot more more editing passes, not only to correct the myriad of mistakes like the above, but also to cut down the unnecessarily long lead-in and correct a couple of story issues.
Recommend if you can deal with poor writing. Otherwise pass because there is a lot of it.
July 16, 2022
Steamy Menage
Twenty year old Val finds herself with the prospect of a menage with Derek, her boss and dad’s best friend, Diesel, her step-brother and Cameron, her former teacher. They say it’s necessary to protect her from a stalker. This was an intriguing storyline, but I felt it could have been developed a bit better. As well, there were quite a few typos and grammar errors that tended to take away from the story. However, if you like steamy forbidden romances, this one had a bit of everything..
I received an ARC of this book from the author in return for voluntarily writing an honest review.
Twenty year old Val finds herself with the prospect of a menage with Derek, her boss and dad’s best friend, Diesel, her step-brother and Cameron, her former teacher. They say it’s necessary to protect her from a stalker. This was an intriguing storyline, but I felt it could have been developed a bit better. As well, there were quite a few typos and grammar errors that tended to take away from the story. However, if you like steamy forbidden romances, this one had a bit of everything..
I received an ARC of this book from the author in return for voluntarily writing an honest review.
July 25, 2022
I really enjoyed the three men one woman. Their was age gap; step bro and teacher all tabos but great tabos. I would recommend this book. I found it on tiktok. But my only complaint is, I didn’t really feel that was much off a story. It took till about 70% of the book till seggs happened. Loads of build up. But no story really. I wanted more story. What happened to the stalker? Who killed him? How? Where? Was there a second after her? Why is her dad so distant with her? What does her dad think of her new relationship set up? That is his step son and best friend and her teacher after all!
Overall a good read, quick but catching. Need to read more for this author.
Overall a good read, quick but catching. Need to read more for this author.
July 10, 2022
Thanks to Amanda Keen - For my copy of this book, here's my honest review:
First time reading this author and was surprised.
Overall, it was a quick and steamy read with hot sex scenes to make you blush.
The story was good, but there were grammar and spelling mistakes throughout, which made it hard to sometimes understand what the author was trying to portray.
There was even confusion over the teacher's name from being Mr. Thomas to Mr. Thompson and back again.
The stalker and rival gang member plot should have been sorted in the story and not brushed aside.
First time reading this author and was surprised.
Overall, it was a quick and steamy read with hot sex scenes to make you blush.
The story was good, but there were grammar and spelling mistakes throughout, which made it hard to sometimes understand what the author was trying to portray.
There was even confusion over the teacher's name from being Mr. Thomas to Mr. Thompson and back again.
The stalker and rival gang member plot should have been sorted in the story and not brushed aside.
September 4, 2022
Club sin gets steamy once again with another reverse harem, this one a bit taboo. Val has been crushing on her dads best friend, step brother, and former school teacher for years. When danger comes her way, who better to protect her than these bad boys who will do anything to protect her and make her their queen? I really enjoyed the build up and the fact that there was actually a plot and not just straight smut. I do think the conclusion to the story was a little anticlimactic, but it was still good.
June 15, 2022
Edging and Begging
So much sexy and steaminess throughout this book!! Erotic dancer, Valentine, has her eyes and heart set on three dangerous men. Men who are forbidden. But when her life is in danger, Derek, Diesel, and Cameron fight to protect and claim her for their own. Hot HEA!
So much sexy and steaminess throughout this book!! Erotic dancer, Valentine, has her eyes and heart set on three dangerous men. Men who are forbidden. But when her life is in danger, Derek, Diesel, and Cameron fight to protect and claim her for their own. Hot HEA!
June 17, 2022
The NY Club Sin books were better. Except for one, these have been very tame and not at all as steamy as the first set. This was ok but the title makes it sounds so much different than what it actually was. Not at all what I expected or wanted to read.
July 12, 2022
While I enjoyed the steam between Valentine, Derek, Diesel and Cameron, there were grammar issues that should have been caught with a proof reader. That to me overrode the actual storyline in my opinion. I received an advanced reader copy and I'm leaving this review voluntarily.
July 13, 2022
Interesting story
Reading all of the books in the series, have to say this has a very interesting RH. The story is a little bit rush and you don’t get to find out who is the stalker but it’s a really good HFN.
Reading all of the books in the series, have to say this has a very interesting RH. The story is a little bit rush and you don’t get to find out who is the stalker but it’s a really good HFN.
January 1, 2024
Total hotness
So hot. Can not get enough of this story. Super brother, teacher, and dads best friend. Can't get enough. So much heat and drama. I highly recommend this story to others.
So hot. Can not get enough of this story. Super brother, teacher, and dads best friend. Can't get enough. So much heat and drama. I highly recommend this story to others.
July 11, 2022
I have to write a review for this one. It's not even about the story. It's just about the horrible editing. There were SO MANY MISTAKES! I almost dnf'd just for that reason so be warned.
July 25, 2022
Steamy. A great fast read. I just love this series with different author. It is well written and I cannot wait for more.
August 3, 2022
For the first time reading the Club Sin series, I had to stop reading. There were far too many errors and I wasn't enjoying reading the story at all.
August 6, 2022
Diesel > Cameron > Derek
(2⭐️ | 4🌶)
Book 4 of Club Sin: Chicago series
(2⭐️ | 4🌶)
Book 4 of Club Sin: Chicago series
August 11, 2022
🌶🌶🌶🌶4/5
LOVE. The anticipation of this book makes you wiggle in your seat in the best way. I devoured it. Club sin is a great series. Highly reccomend.
LOVE. The anticipation of this book makes you wiggle in your seat in the best way. I devoured it. Club sin is a great series. Highly reccomend.
November 13, 2023
Couldn't put the book down for a second it so good I'm happy there wasn't a winner they got what they truly wanted each other
September 10, 2022
Valentine is an exotic dancer and she is just working to move out of town as there was nothing holding her back.
Although she had love interest in 3 Forbidden guys. One was her dad's best friend (age gap), Step brother and her old teacher.
The her life is in danger and only way to protect her is by making her their women , so she is off limits.
I am still not sure about RH but this one was written very well and I actually loved it.
They teased her through out the book and I felt her frustration and need for release.
I received this as an ARC copy for honest review.
Although she had love interest in 3 Forbidden guys. One was her dad's best friend (age gap), Step brother and her old teacher.
The her life is in danger and only way to protect her is by making her their women , so she is off limits.
I am still not sure about RH but this one was written very well and I actually loved it.
They teased her through out the book and I felt her frustration and need for release.
I received this as an ARC copy for honest review.
September 25, 2023
The concept is interesting and checks off a lot of boxes for me—forbidden romances with dad’s best friend, stepbrother, and a previous teacher—but the storyline outside of the relationship feels slightly forced and is resolved off-page. It’s almost done as an afterthought, a random toss out from a character that it’s been taken care of and that’s it. Overall, it feels slightly rushed and could have done with a bit more fleshing out, but is a decent spicy read.
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