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An Unpleasant Sort of Man
A secret encounter at Oakham Mount, an unexpected and unknown witness, a fight that unearths dark revelations — all are instrumental in changing Elizabeth Bennet’s beliefs, born from pride and tainted by prejudice, one cold November morning.
At Longbourn, the upcoming Netherfield ball is considered to be proof of Mr Bingley’s admiration for Jane and is anticipated with much enthusiasm. Only the irritating presence of Mr Collins and his irksome attention ruin Elizabeth’s disposition and induce her to take a walk that will change her life — as well as the lives of others.
At Netherfield, Fitzwilliam Darcy, haunted by his ardent admiration for a certain lady, plans to return to London immediately after the ball, together with Bingley’s family, leaving their troubles and distress behind.
On the evening of the ball, Elizabeth’s spirit is heavy with remorse, while doubts leave her undecided as to how she should proceed. As Darcy considers asking Elizabeth to stand up with him for a set — the first and last he believes he will ever dance with her — the ball is interrupted by news of a most disturbing incident which will affect the entire neighbourhood.
From that very moment, everyone’s plans will be altered. Suspicions and rumours will shake the calm and complacency of the quiet and peaceful town of Meryton as well as a lot of first impressions. Events will quickly unfold, more secrets will be revealed, previous relationships will change while improbable friendships and most unanticipated alliances will form and grow.
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Samuel Bennet are as different as two gentlemen can be, in age, consequence, fortune, opinions on responsibilities and familial duty, even the notion of proper behaviour. However, they slowly discover some common interests in their love of books, good brandy, peaceful time spent in the library, meaningful conversation, and their strong — though undisclosed for one party — affection for a particular lady of their acquaintance. Will this unlikely companionship survive the events?
Forced by circumstances and guided by honour, loyalty, and courage, Elizabeth and Darcy will have to act together, thus discovering themselves and each other. Will their journey ruin or strengthen their alliance? Will their partnership end in just friendship or blossom into something else entirely?
‘An Unpleasant Sort of Man’ is a full length novel (around 380 pages in print!) assembling all the elements of a classic JAFF story: romance, moderate angst, tension, a bit of mystery, witty dialogues, a lot of interaction between our dear characters, slow relationship growth, and character development, all focused around the beloved story of Elizabeth and Darcy!
At Longbourn, the upcoming Netherfield ball is considered to be proof of Mr Bingley’s admiration for Jane and is anticipated with much enthusiasm. Only the irritating presence of Mr Collins and his irksome attention ruin Elizabeth’s disposition and induce her to take a walk that will change her life — as well as the lives of others.
At Netherfield, Fitzwilliam Darcy, haunted by his ardent admiration for a certain lady, plans to return to London immediately after the ball, together with Bingley’s family, leaving their troubles and distress behind.
On the evening of the ball, Elizabeth’s spirit is heavy with remorse, while doubts leave her undecided as to how she should proceed. As Darcy considers asking Elizabeth to stand up with him for a set — the first and last he believes he will ever dance with her — the ball is interrupted by news of a most disturbing incident which will affect the entire neighbourhood.
From that very moment, everyone’s plans will be altered. Suspicions and rumours will shake the calm and complacency of the quiet and peaceful town of Meryton as well as a lot of first impressions. Events will quickly unfold, more secrets will be revealed, previous relationships will change while improbable friendships and most unanticipated alliances will form and grow.
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Samuel Bennet are as different as two gentlemen can be, in age, consequence, fortune, opinions on responsibilities and familial duty, even the notion of proper behaviour. However, they slowly discover some common interests in their love of books, good brandy, peaceful time spent in the library, meaningful conversation, and their strong — though undisclosed for one party — affection for a particular lady of their acquaintance. Will this unlikely companionship survive the events?
Forced by circumstances and guided by honour, loyalty, and courage, Elizabeth and Darcy will have to act together, thus discovering themselves and each other. Will their journey ruin or strengthen their alliance? Will their partnership end in just friendship or blossom into something else entirely?
‘An Unpleasant Sort of Man’ is a full length novel (around 380 pages in print!) assembling all the elements of a classic JAFF story: romance, moderate angst, tension, a bit of mystery, witty dialogues, a lot of interaction between our dear characters, slow relationship growth, and character development, all focused around the beloved story of Elizabeth and Darcy!
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April 14, 2023
Slow Burn
At Oakham Mount, Elizabeth receives quite a shock when the true character of a scoundrel is revealed during an overheard confrontation between Wickham and Darcy. When Wickham is later found dead, suspicions, gossip and rumours abound.
It’s a good story with a touch of mystery, overcoming misunderstandings and a developing romance, all leading to a happy ending. The character portrayals were well done. Mr. Darcy has to grapple with the repeated revelation by several that Elizabeth does not care for him. Not to be outdone is Caroline Bingley, with her obsession in criticizing the Bennets, especially Elizabeth. Darcy gives her quite a good table-banging setdown eventually because of it. I do love a good setdown! Bingley’s portrayal is a strong one in this book, which I always appreciate. The relationship developed between Darcy and Mr. Bennet is also a very good one.
When Elizabeth’s reputation is threatened, Mr. Darcy offers marriage knowing her affections are not as engaged as his.
I have much respect for this author, as English is not her first language, and I see growth and improvement in the writing with this second book. I found the second half a bit weighed down, however, with details that weren’t always quite germane to the plot. Thus, it felt a bit like filler making the story longer than it really needed to be. That said, I know this author loves a “slow burn” romance, so in this regard, it was likely her goal and definitely succeeds.
I enjoyed and recommend it, and look forward to reading her next book.
Bien joué mon ami.
April 14, 2023 - Audiobook
This is one of those stories that I feel presents much better in audiobook form. I loved it, with Stevie Zimmerman providing an another outstanding narration and performance. Five stars for the audiobook.
At Oakham Mount, Elizabeth receives quite a shock when the true character of a scoundrel is revealed during an overheard confrontation between Wickham and Darcy. When Wickham is later found dead, suspicions, gossip and rumours abound.
It’s a good story with a touch of mystery, overcoming misunderstandings and a developing romance, all leading to a happy ending. The character portrayals were well done. Mr. Darcy has to grapple with the repeated revelation by several that Elizabeth does not care for him. Not to be outdone is Caroline Bingley, with her obsession in criticizing the Bennets, especially Elizabeth. Darcy gives her quite a good table-banging setdown eventually because of it. I do love a good setdown! Bingley’s portrayal is a strong one in this book, which I always appreciate. The relationship developed between Darcy and Mr. Bennet is also a very good one.
When Elizabeth’s reputation is threatened, Mr. Darcy offers marriage knowing her affections are not as engaged as his.
I have much respect for this author, as English is not her first language, and I see growth and improvement in the writing with this second book. I found the second half a bit weighed down, however, with details that weren’t always quite germane to the plot. Thus, it felt a bit like filler making the story longer than it really needed to be. That said, I know this author loves a “slow burn” romance, so in this regard, it was likely her goal and definitely succeeds.
I enjoyed and recommend it, and look forward to reading her next book.
Bien joué mon ami.
April 14, 2023 - Audiobook
This is one of those stories that I feel presents much better in audiobook form. I loved it, with Stevie Zimmerman providing an another outstanding narration and performance. Five stars for the audiobook.
June 23, 2022
The dramatic event as we start this story sets a completely different tone from most JAFF.
Elizabeth, arriving early on Mount Oakham, takes a rest sitting behind a large oak tree. Thus, when Darcy and Wickham arrive and argue violently, she overhears their entire conversation and her opinions about both men are dramatically changed. She doesn't reveal herself and watches Wickham disappear as he walks down to the border of Meryton.
However, later, when Wickham is discovered dead and a note from Darcy is found in his pocket Elizabeth must give her testimony about how the men parted. The "murder" of Wickham is not really part of the drama henceforth although there is a point at which an "explanation" is given.
For Elizabeth, with her testimony, also comes the revelation that she was alone on Mount Oakham with two single men. Darcy offers marriage. Here, Mr. Bennet also has become involved. He and Darcy become friendly, and Darcy finds himself withdrawing this first marriage proposal as it seems not necessary. As you might expect, while Darcy and Elizabeth become friends, he shifts through all those reasons she cannot be a candidate for the position as his wife.
Collins is a factor in this story and, of course, with him we hear of Lady Catherine and Anne. And there is Bingley, his sisters and his relationship with Jane.
So, the story revolves around Elizabeth's and Darcy's friendship developing and then turning into something more. This was a pleasant story. For me there was little angst.
Elizabeth, arriving early on Mount Oakham, takes a rest sitting behind a large oak tree. Thus, when Darcy and Wickham arrive and argue violently, she overhears their entire conversation and her opinions about both men are dramatically changed. She doesn't reveal herself and watches Wickham disappear as he walks down to the border of Meryton.
However, later, when Wickham is discovered dead and a note from Darcy is found in his pocket Elizabeth must give her testimony about how the men parted. The "murder" of Wickham is not really part of the drama henceforth although there is a point at which an "explanation" is given.
For Elizabeth, with her testimony, also comes the revelation that she was alone on Mount Oakham with two single men. Darcy offers marriage. Here, Mr. Bennet also has become involved. He and Darcy become friendly, and Darcy finds himself withdrawing this first marriage proposal as it seems not necessary. As you might expect, while Darcy and Elizabeth become friends, he shifts through all those reasons she cannot be a candidate for the position as his wife.
Collins is a factor in this story and, of course, with him we hear of Lady Catherine and Anne. And there is Bingley, his sisters and his relationship with Jane.
So, the story revolves around Elizabeth's and Darcy's friendship developing and then turning into something more. This was a pleasant story. For me there was little angst.
November 30, 2022
Lizzy learns to distrust Wickham early in the story
Lizzy’s knowledge about Wickham comes so early in the story the timeline of Darcy and Lizzy thinking well of each other begins quickly. But there is still plenty of angst . Also a mystery which may ruin the Darcy reputation and could even lead him to prison.
I found myself being drawn into the story quickly which is always better than nought. I may read it again sometime.
Lizzy’s knowledge about Wickham comes so early in the story the timeline of Darcy and Lizzy thinking well of each other begins quickly. But there is still plenty of angst . Also a mystery which may ruin the Darcy reputation and could even lead him to prison.
I found myself being drawn into the story quickly which is always better than nought. I may read it again sometime.
July 12, 2022
After reading two books that desperately needed a good editor, I saw the name of Jo Abbott and was relieved. Not that this editor is perfect, but at least I could count on most of the problems seen the other books being absent in this novel. And that meant that I could enjoy the exceptional story line that this author offered.
My reviews are technical so you won’t find much that’s subjective in them. Instead, I nit-pick details that bother readers and cause a star to be dropped without explanation. Most reviewers don’t comment on these details, and it’s a shame, since some books are awful with mistakes in technical areas, so much so that it makes them almost unreadable. This book had minimal problems, which you’ll see in the review that follows.
The plot was a complete story arc with minimal side plots, and those supported rather than took away from the story’s moving forward. Flow was at a quick to moderate pace that kept the reader engaged. In some places, where the tension was high, the story moved along briskly, and in others, where the tale was more of the romance’s development, it didn’t become too slow.
The angst level was low to moderate, but I’m an angst lover and sometimes rate the book on the low side.
Point of view was third person multiple with some head-hopping. I wish Jo had caught the head-hopping and instructed Michelle to fix it, since it makes the reader have to reread to understand whose point of view is being applied.
Filter words such as wondering, noticed, saw, and felt were used with the POV character. This pulls the reader out of the character’s head, removing the depth of the POV. These are pretty easy to fix by cutting in most cases.
Language was Regency with some exceptions that were fewer than the average JAFF novel. Non-Regency words or application of words included reaction, share/sharing, assessed, mesmerised, outing, attitude, headed. No unnecessary big words were used, allowing the reader to read at a P&P level without having to look things up. No contractions were found, therefore offering a smooth read in this regard.
Dialogue tags that aren’t “said,” e.g., “reluctantly admitted,” give too much telling when the dialogue itself shows the information already. It’s a beginner’s handicap to overuse flowery dialogue tags that detract from the dialogue and slow the pace. This author was good at showing, so this is was all that was left of telling.
Punctuation errors included a comma splice, a comma before “because,” and missing starting quotation marks. The author used no periods after Mr. or Mrs., which is modern British punctuation and not Regency (check Jane Austen’s letters). Typos included too for to and of for off. There was a section of present tense at the start of Chapter 11.
Period errors included the use of sleighs, which didn’t exist in England during the Regency period (I learned this in a recent course). Blankets in carriages are called rugs. There is no such thing as a seven course meal. A two course meal is a huge meal that would leave one unable to move from eating so much. The sole canon error found was with the Gardiner children, who were actually two girls of six and eight years old and two younger boys.
The novel contains beautiful quotable prose, as can be seen in other reviewers’ highlights. The author has wonderful talent with words, including scene-setting that evokes the senses and characterization that comes alive off the page.
I’m not keen on the cover because it’s two chopped up pieces of art. I have a personal thing against headless covers in the first place, but I don’t understand a picture of pants. The author should have chosen one and gone with it rather than use that middle panel. Then either use the other on the back or on the next novel. Fonts are attractive, well-balanced, and clear at Amazon scale, so that helps.
Michelle D’Arcy is quickly becoming a favourite author of mine, and this book has helped to cement her in that position. The story line was interesting, different, and fairly exclusive for a JAFF idea. I found some especially memorable moments within this book, which makes it even more singular. The style of writing very much suited to what I prefer to read, and I believe that most readers will agree that this is a worthwhile purchase.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF writer, and some might say that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for both the reader and the author.
My reviews are technical so you won’t find much that’s subjective in them. Instead, I nit-pick details that bother readers and cause a star to be dropped without explanation. Most reviewers don’t comment on these details, and it’s a shame, since some books are awful with mistakes in technical areas, so much so that it makes them almost unreadable. This book had minimal problems, which you’ll see in the review that follows.
The plot was a complete story arc with minimal side plots, and those supported rather than took away from the story’s moving forward. Flow was at a quick to moderate pace that kept the reader engaged. In some places, where the tension was high, the story moved along briskly, and in others, where the tale was more of the romance’s development, it didn’t become too slow.
The angst level was low to moderate, but I’m an angst lover and sometimes rate the book on the low side.
Point of view was third person multiple with some head-hopping. I wish Jo had caught the head-hopping and instructed Michelle to fix it, since it makes the reader have to reread to understand whose point of view is being applied.
Filter words such as wondering, noticed, saw, and felt were used with the POV character. This pulls the reader out of the character’s head, removing the depth of the POV. These are pretty easy to fix by cutting in most cases.
Language was Regency with some exceptions that were fewer than the average JAFF novel. Non-Regency words or application of words included reaction, share/sharing, assessed, mesmerised, outing, attitude, headed. No unnecessary big words were used, allowing the reader to read at a P&P level without having to look things up. No contractions were found, therefore offering a smooth read in this regard.
Dialogue tags that aren’t “said,” e.g., “reluctantly admitted,” give too much telling when the dialogue itself shows the information already. It’s a beginner’s handicap to overuse flowery dialogue tags that detract from the dialogue and slow the pace. This author was good at showing, so this is was all that was left of telling.
Punctuation errors included a comma splice, a comma before “because,” and missing starting quotation marks. The author used no periods after Mr. or Mrs., which is modern British punctuation and not Regency (check Jane Austen’s letters). Typos included too for to and of for off. There was a section of present tense at the start of Chapter 11.
Period errors included the use of sleighs, which didn’t exist in England during the Regency period (I learned this in a recent course). Blankets in carriages are called rugs. There is no such thing as a seven course meal. A two course meal is a huge meal that would leave one unable to move from eating so much. The sole canon error found was with the Gardiner children, who were actually two girls of six and eight years old and two younger boys.
The novel contains beautiful quotable prose, as can be seen in other reviewers’ highlights. The author has wonderful talent with words, including scene-setting that evokes the senses and characterization that comes alive off the page.
I’m not keen on the cover because it’s two chopped up pieces of art. I have a personal thing against headless covers in the first place, but I don’t understand a picture of pants. The author should have chosen one and gone with it rather than use that middle panel. Then either use the other on the back or on the next novel. Fonts are attractive, well-balanced, and clear at Amazon scale, so that helps.
Michelle D’Arcy is quickly becoming a favourite author of mine, and this book has helped to cement her in that position. The story line was interesting, different, and fairly exclusive for a JAFF idea. I found some especially memorable moments within this book, which makes it even more singular. The style of writing very much suited to what I prefer to read, and I believe that most readers will agree that this is a worthwhile purchase.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF writer, and some might say that this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for both the reader and the author.
April 5, 2023
I enjoyed this story especially for the new and interesting twist on how Wickham was handled. Darcy’s first proposal was still rejected but for different reasons. It was fun to see how Elizabeth’s feelings slowly changed. This story has possibly the best reaction by Mrs Bennet to their engagement that I have seen in JAFF, I’m still laughing. I also liked how it didn’t end with the wedding but had snippets about their season in town and the family reunion at Pemberley in the epilogue. This is the second book I’ve read by this author and both have been really good.
I received a free ebook from the author and voluntarily leave this review. All opinions expressed are my own.
I received a free ebook from the author and voluntarily leave this review. All opinions expressed are my own.
September 7, 2023
Murder Mystery
The mysterious death of a secondary character created the backdrop to this slow-burning romance between our dear couple.
Well written and sprinkled with clever humour, it was a delightful read.
The content was chaste.
Recommend!
The mysterious death of a secondary character created the backdrop to this slow-burning romance between our dear couple.
Well written and sprinkled with clever humour, it was a delightful read.
The content was chaste.
Recommend!
June 17, 2022
Fantastically Wonderful!!!
If you're interested in a story where Darcy becomes a better person without a horrible set down from Elizabeth, this is a book for you. Watching Darcy evolve was charming, to the point that I was ready to marry him myself before I was even at the halfway point of the story. His first meeting with the Gardner children is pure magic. The growing romance is never dull, and I love that Lydia doesn't ruin herself or the family.
If you're interested in a story where Darcy becomes a better person without a horrible set down from Elizabeth, this is a book for you. Watching Darcy evolve was charming, to the point that I was ready to marry him myself before I was even at the halfway point of the story. His first meeting with the Gardner children is pure magic. The growing romance is never dull, and I love that Lydia doesn't ruin herself or the family.
March 19, 2023
A little intrigue and a lot of falling in love
I loved the idea of a mystery combined with ODC finding their HEA.
After a very rough start, Elizabeth is in a position to save Darcy from the difficult position of being a suspect in Wickham's murder. Which leads to an honest offer but not what Elizabeth wants for herself- Or is it?
Jane and Bingley's relationship seems effortless, whereas ODC seem to have to swim against the stream just to understand each other.
Wickham's death wasn't so much a mystery, I had hoped for more suspense, yet it kind of petered out.
There were also several occasions of our main characters going through pages of thought process between 40-70% of the story, which made it lag.
Then it picks up again.
And the last third of the story is beautiful as we have the process of Elizabeth falling in love and ODC reaching their understanding.
The dialog was interesting, the action - when it happened-was exciting.
3.5* I felt this could have been tightened up and made shorter, to remove the slower middle.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I loved the idea of a mystery combined with ODC finding their HEA.
After a very rough start, Elizabeth is in a position to save Darcy from the difficult position of being a suspect in Wickham's murder. Which leads to an honest offer but not what Elizabeth wants for herself- Or is it?
Jane and Bingley's relationship seems effortless, whereas ODC seem to have to swim against the stream just to understand each other.
Wickham's death wasn't so much a mystery, I had hoped for more suspense, yet it kind of petered out.
There were also several occasions of our main characters going through pages of thought process between 40-70% of the story, which made it lag.
Then it picks up again.
And the last third of the story is beautiful as we have the process of Elizabeth falling in love and ODC reaching their understanding.
The dialog was interesting, the action - when it happened-was exciting.
3.5* I felt this could have been tightened up and made shorter, to remove the slower middle.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 5, 2022
I am sure I could have put this book down but I didn't.
February 3, 2023
Майже безконфліктний флаф, бо Вікема вбили на самому початку)
October 8, 2022
VERY, VERY ENJOYABLE.
I.Loved.This.Book. We have an adorable, dimpled Darcy, a very reasonable Elizabeth and the villains minor and relatively harmless. The romance between ODC was beautiful, the dialogue overall witty and the writing easy and natural. This book will be read over and over by this Darcy and Michelle D'Arcy fan. Do yourself a favour and put it in your library.
I.Loved.This.Book. We have an adorable, dimpled Darcy, a very reasonable Elizabeth and the villains minor and relatively harmless. The romance between ODC was beautiful, the dialogue overall witty and the writing easy and natural. This book will be read over and over by this Darcy and Michelle D'Arcy fan. Do yourself a favour and put it in your library.
July 22, 2022
Highly recommend!
There was nothing different in this retelling of my all time favorite story, but I loved it because if felt familiar. Darcy was more revealed in his persistence and determination, but he was rewarded for his steadfastness and I loved the sweet ending; it was as it should be. ❤️
There was nothing different in this retelling of my all time favorite story, but I loved it because if felt familiar. Darcy was more revealed in his persistence and determination, but he was rewarded for his steadfastness and I loved the sweet ending; it was as it should be. ❤️
June 18, 2022
Excellent and believable variation
I loved this variation, Elizabeth and Darcy react to events as one would expect. I especially loved Mrs. Bennets obliviousness. Also a great plus os that it's a clean read with intimacy implied after marriage.
I loved this variation, Elizabeth and Darcy react to events as one would expect. I especially loved Mrs. Bennets obliviousness. Also a great plus os that it's a clean read with intimacy implied after marriage.
July 21, 2023
A rather unexpected event allows Elizabeth Bennet to understand the goodness of Darcy and the evil of Wickham before the ball at Netherfield. In a very wordy and drawn out style the author takes us through the evolution of Elizabeth and Mr Bennet’s feelings toward Darcy. Our dear couple eventually finds their happily ever after.
July 2, 2022
Elizabeth overhears an argument
Elizabeth overhears an argument between Darcy and Wickham and finds out who is the more respectable gentleman. Elizabeth’s rethinks her opinions and finds herself wanting. When Darcy’s reputations comes into question, Elizabeth’s sense of honor will not allow to keep quiet.
This book kept me up all night. I could not put it down until I finished it.
This is worth read.
Elizabeth overhears an argument between Darcy and Wickham and finds out who is the more respectable gentleman. Elizabeth’s rethinks her opinions and finds herself wanting. When Darcy’s reputations comes into question, Elizabeth’s sense of honor will not allow to keep quiet.
This book kept me up all night. I could not put it down until I finished it.
This is worth read.
October 10, 2022
It's a pleasant enough read and contains only 'mild peril'. There are no real challenges for E&D and the HEA is never in doubt.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 16, 2022
An interesting path
Being in the right place and by her innate honesty Lizzy changes the events and creates a very imaginative story.
Being in the right place and by her innate honesty Lizzy changes the events and creates a very imaginative story.
June 18, 2022
Very well written and edited with only a few typos/ missing words.
This was a great variation written by the author of a novella I really enjoyed.
I loved the friendship between Mr Bennet and Darcy. It helped the developing relationship between ODC.
I wish there were a sequel describing all of Elizabeth and Darcy’s season rather than a short epilogue.
This was a great variation written by the author of a novella I really enjoyed.
I loved the friendship between Mr Bennet and Darcy. It helped the developing relationship between ODC.
I wish there were a sequel describing all of Elizabeth and Darcy’s season rather than a short epilogue.
December 22, 2022
Goodreads told me I had read & rated this book even though I had never even seen it before. So I decided to take it as a sign to actually read & review it. Oddly enough, the three stars GR decided I would give this book was pretty on point. I liked it, but it was far from the best JAFF I’ve read. At times the story dragged, & the language was confusing, as the author kept saying things like Elizabeth was uneasy in Darcy’s presence. Even when this was at the point in the story where she was falling in love. There were several such instances where the wording did not match the actions or overall feeling of a scene. In fact, Elizabeth seemed to be very fickle in this variation, not knowing her own mind, doubting it, & constantly having conflicted feelings seemed quite unfair to Mr. Darcy. I wasn’t a fan.
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September 27, 2022DNF @ 49%
While the story is advertised as being about Wickham’s murder, that really isn’t very relevant or even much discussed in the story. It is simply a vehicle for Lizzy and Darcy to come to better understand each other and to keep Bingley in Hertfordshire for another week. I was disappointed that the mystery of the story wasn’t central, but what was worse was the repetitive thoughts and excessive introspection of the characters. We hear the same information at least five times from various characters. The first half of the book, after which I gave up, can be summed up almost entirely by the blurb on the back - so reading it felt a bit pointless.
While the story is advertised as being about Wickham’s murder, that really isn’t very relevant or even much discussed in the story. It is simply a vehicle for Lizzy and Darcy to come to better understand each other and to keep Bingley in Hertfordshire for another week. I was disappointed that the mystery of the story wasn’t central, but what was worse was the repetitive thoughts and excessive introspection of the characters. We hear the same information at least five times from various characters. The first half of the book, after which I gave up, can be summed up almost entirely by the blurb on the back - so reading it felt a bit pointless.
May 25, 2024
This variation was good, it just moved along too slow. Some bits were repeated and repeated and repeated.
March 5, 2023
Such a well crafted tale! I loved it.
This will be on my favorite reread shelf. Darcy suspected of murder? Lizzy an unseen witness to an angry argument and near fight between Darcy and Wickham. Lizzy learning the ugly truth of the relationship between the two men. The Netherfield Ball shockingly interrupted with news of a favorite’s death.
I loved Mr. Bennet in this story. His relationship with Our Dear Girl and his building, respectful, friendship with Darcy is central to the plot.
Due to changes in the plot early on, there are other changes from canon that make the story more interesting than a retelling with one thread pulled. I like those too! Although the rest of the characters are very much the same as we expect, their collective sameness plays into the story and moves the changes the author wants us to appreciate. It’s a murder mystery. It’s a slow building love story. I fell in love with this Darcy. Ahhhh….
Highly recommended. I’m dearly hoping the author is working on a new book.
This will be on my favorite reread shelf. Darcy suspected of murder? Lizzy an unseen witness to an angry argument and near fight between Darcy and Wickham. Lizzy learning the ugly truth of the relationship between the two men. The Netherfield Ball shockingly interrupted with news of a favorite’s death.
I loved Mr. Bennet in this story. His relationship with Our Dear Girl and his building, respectful, friendship with Darcy is central to the plot.
Due to changes in the plot early on, there are other changes from canon that make the story more interesting than a retelling with one thread pulled. I like those too! Although the rest of the characters are very much the same as we expect, their collective sameness plays into the story and moves the changes the author wants us to appreciate. It’s a murder mystery. It’s a slow building love story. I fell in love with this Darcy. Ahhhh….
Highly recommended. I’m dearly hoping the author is working on a new book.
July 28, 2022
Elizabeth Bennet is taking her morning walk and has just climbed to Oakham Mount and decides to rest a bit. She leaves the path and rests beneath a giant oak tree. When she hears a horse approaching, she peeks around the tree and sees that it is Mr. Darcy. She wonders if he is hoping to meet her, but remains hidden when she hears another horse.
Elizabeth recognizes Mr. Wickham's voice and correctly assumes that this is an arranged meeting. She overhears every word as Wickham and Darcy argue and reveal significant events from the past. Darcy is provoked into striking Wickham. Then Wickham leaves and minutes later Darcy leaves. Elizabeth follows Wickham's progress as he enters the woods.
That evening at the Netherfield ball, the shocking news arrives that Wickham's body has been found in the woods.
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Elizabeth recognizes Mr. Wickham's voice and correctly assumes that this is an arranged meeting. She overhears every word as Wickham and Darcy argue and reveal significant events from the past. Darcy is provoked into striking Wickham. Then Wickham leaves and minutes later Darcy leaves. Elizabeth follows Wickham's progress as he enters the woods.
That evening at the Netherfield ball, the shocking news arrives that Wickham's body has been found in the woods.
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December 13, 2023So a bout of Flu allowed me to finish listening to "An Unpleasant Sort of Man" by Michelle d'Arcy without suffering the guilt of neglecting my own much delayed story!
I enjoyed the story and it's excellent narration by Ms Zimmerman very much.
So if this holiday season you are looking for a
- low angst,
- slow burn romance between ODC,
- spiced up by the mystery of Mr Wickham's untimely (🙃) demise,
- a hero Darcy
- and a less obstinate than usual Elizabeth
Then this lovely audiobook ticks all the boxes.
I enjoyed the story and it's excellent narration by Ms Zimmerman very much.
So if this holiday season you are looking for a
- low angst,
- slow burn romance between ODC,
- spiced up by the mystery of Mr Wickham's untimely (🙃) demise,
- a hero Darcy
- and a less obstinate than usual Elizabeth
Then this lovely audiobook ticks all the boxes.
May 19, 2024
Lovely
I absolutely adored the natural progression of Lizzy's feelings for Darcy. I also very much enjoyed Darcy & Mr Bennet's relationship. This was a lovely and thoroughly enjoyable read.
I absolutely adored the natural progression of Lizzy's feelings for Darcy. I also very much enjoyed Darcy & Mr Bennet's relationship. This was a lovely and thoroughly enjoyable read.
July 1, 2022
Delightful
An interesting premise and absolutely delightful little variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Michelle D’Arcy.
An interesting premise and absolutely delightful little variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Michelle D’Arcy.
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November 12, 2022maybe if i was desperate
July 5, 2023
In this Pride and Prejudice variation after a secret meeting at Oakham Mount Wickham is discovered dead and Darcy suspected. Unknown to either Elizabeth Bennet had overheard their conversation and saw Wickham walking away. How will this change Elizabeth's perception of Darcy.
Yet again another story where wrongly Mary wears glasses, and no interesting pairings.
Overall enjoyable enough to finish, but not enough of Wickham or Lady Catherine for balance.
Yet again another story where wrongly Mary wears glasses, and no interesting pairings.
Overall enjoyable enough to finish, but not enough of Wickham or Lady Catherine for balance.
June 29, 2022
Wonderful
The day before the Netherfield ball, Darcy and Wickham have an encounter on Oakham Mount, where Wickham asks Darcy to not besmirch his name in the Meryton neighborhood so that he can make a go of his new career in the militia. Wickham threatens Darcy with the exposure of Georgiana's near ruin in Ramsgate if Darcy talks about him, Darcy gets angry, and he punches Wickham. A few hours later, Wickham is found dead near Meryton, and suspicion is thrown on Darcy because of their well known animosity towards each other. Unbeknownst to Darcy, Elizabeth was on Oakham Mount during their meeting, and heard the whole thing. She knows that Darcy didn't kill Wickham, and she offers up her testimony on his behalf, even though she doesn't particularly like Darcy. It's the start of an unlikely friendship between them.
A recurring theme throughout the story is the power of rumor, gossip, and innuendo. Both Elizabeth and Darcy are victims of rumor and careless talk, and it gives them a compelling reason to interact, and thus they get to know each other better. As usual, Darcy is already reluctantly in love with Elizabeth, but she has an active dislike for him that is challenged by what she overheard on Oakham Mount. Elizabeth is very slow to give up her prejudice against him, while Darcy quickly determines that he can't live without Elizabeth. The romance is superb, and is given a good long time to develop. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and although Elizabeth is stubborn, she's always reasonable and suitably kind.
I deducted a star for the annoyance factor attached to both Mrs Bennett and Caroline Bingley. Mrs Bennett is over the top wacky, and Caroline is over the top abusive, and no one seems willing to call them to order. I wanted each of them to have a comeuppance, or just a good setdown, but it never happened. I can't accept that persons could act so ridiculously, and not have any consequences.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
The day before the Netherfield ball, Darcy and Wickham have an encounter on Oakham Mount, where Wickham asks Darcy to not besmirch his name in the Meryton neighborhood so that he can make a go of his new career in the militia. Wickham threatens Darcy with the exposure of Georgiana's near ruin in Ramsgate if Darcy talks about him, Darcy gets angry, and he punches Wickham. A few hours later, Wickham is found dead near Meryton, and suspicion is thrown on Darcy because of their well known animosity towards each other. Unbeknownst to Darcy, Elizabeth was on Oakham Mount during their meeting, and heard the whole thing. She knows that Darcy didn't kill Wickham, and she offers up her testimony on his behalf, even though she doesn't particularly like Darcy. It's the start of an unlikely friendship between them.
A recurring theme throughout the story is the power of rumor, gossip, and innuendo. Both Elizabeth and Darcy are victims of rumor and careless talk, and it gives them a compelling reason to interact, and thus they get to know each other better. As usual, Darcy is already reluctantly in love with Elizabeth, but she has an active dislike for him that is challenged by what she overheard on Oakham Mount. Elizabeth is very slow to give up her prejudice against him, while Darcy quickly determines that he can't live without Elizabeth. The romance is superb, and is given a good long time to develop. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and although Elizabeth is stubborn, she's always reasonable and suitably kind.
I deducted a star for the annoyance factor attached to both Mrs Bennett and Caroline Bingley. Mrs Bennett is over the top wacky, and Caroline is over the top abusive, and no one seems willing to call them to order. I wanted each of them to have a comeuppance, or just a good setdown, but it never happened. I can't accept that persons could act so ridiculously, and not have any consequences.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
August 7, 2022
(Some spoilers)
On her usual walk to Oakham Mount, Elizabeth stops to rest behind a large oak tree, hidden from the path. Wickham and Darcy appear and have an argument. Elizabeth overhears everything and realizes that her opinions about both men have been totally wrong. In his anger, Darcy slams his fist into both Wickham and a tree and injures himself. Days later, Wickham is found dead in a field. The announcement is made during the Netherfield ball, which effectively ends the party and starts the rumors.
Darcy is a suspect because of his wounded hand and because he had a note from Wickham in his pocket, the note asking for the meeting on Oakham Mount. After consulting with her father, Elizabeth offers to testify to Colonel Forster and the magistrate what she saw and heard. Darcy is very grateful to her, as this information could jeopardize her reputation.
The rest of the book deals more with the aftermath than with solving the murder, which takes a back seat in the plot. Elizabeth is unrecognizable in this variation: shy, nervous, easily distressed, prone to weakness; easily-flustered, bewildered, emotionally exhausted, and discomposed; awkward and speechless around Darcy, blushing every other second. There's very little of her intelligence and wit in evidence. There's very little action and too much of Elizabeth's introspection, endlessly repeated. At least there's very little about Collins, except for his blabbering to Lady Catherine, and Lydia gets no chance to wreak havoc.
On her usual walk to Oakham Mount, Elizabeth stops to rest behind a large oak tree, hidden from the path. Wickham and Darcy appear and have an argument. Elizabeth overhears everything and realizes that her opinions about both men have been totally wrong. In his anger, Darcy slams his fist into both Wickham and a tree and injures himself. Days later, Wickham is found dead in a field. The announcement is made during the Netherfield ball, which effectively ends the party and starts the rumors.
Darcy is a suspect because of his wounded hand and because he had a note from Wickham in his pocket, the note asking for the meeting on Oakham Mount. After consulting with her father, Elizabeth offers to testify to Colonel Forster and the magistrate what she saw and heard. Darcy is very grateful to her, as this information could jeopardize her reputation.
The rest of the book deals more with the aftermath than with solving the murder, which takes a back seat in the plot. Elizabeth is unrecognizable in this variation: shy, nervous, easily distressed, prone to weakness; easily-flustered, bewildered, emotionally exhausted, and discomposed; awkward and speechless around Darcy, blushing every other second. There's very little of her intelligence and wit in evidence. There's very little action and too much of Elizabeth's introspection, endlessly repeated. At least there's very little about Collins, except for his blabbering to Lady Catherine, and Lydia gets no chance to wreak havoc.
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