This is a full blown love-bombing scenario. The author tries to make it okay but it's not. Blaze basically love-bombs Angel until she feel guilt of being a bitch towards him. Girls if a man love-bombs you like Blaze does, run the fuck away. The author could have made him more easy going and little by little trying to persuade her, and not this full blown creepie stuff. Even though we hear his thoughts and it's not his intention, it's still not okay to make Angel feel guilt, because that's why men usually love-bombs you. Giving you gifts and do everything for you until you feel you owe him something and agree to date him, and when you are caught he turns and become a full-blown psycho. So run away.
Two times in the beginning, it said it shifted protagonist but didn't, it was very confusing. And the formatting is poorly done.
The man on the cover doesn't resembles the man described in the book.
The sentence are very run-on-sentences and you loose your breath for a moment very often. the story is "told" not "shown" and makes it hard to read.
What is it with this author and comma's? This is not her first book.... One sentence was so fucking long I had to breath myself because there was no comma's at all. Get an fucking editor....
The first page of the book didn't had me intrigued, but on page 2 it said: "My name is Benjamin Franklin Worthington of the Manhattan Worthington's. That's how I am introduced at all functions and do you think anyone is ever allowed to call me anything other than by my full first name? No!"
This tells us so much more about the MC than the entire first page. Why didn't the book start with that? it is so much more intriguing.