The wait I did for this book—it taught me patience.
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Where do I even start?
This book or shall I say Cora had so much potential.
Like seriously I could literally write only explaining on how Cora could have been the best protagonist Lucy could’ve ever written.
Now yes, this wasn’t my book and Lucy has every right to write the way she wants to write her characters but…
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First the book or plot: The Hades/Persephone retelling?!! Who doesn’t love that?? Although this was going to be my second retelling and my first one was—a major disappointment but let’s stick with this disappointment.
I was super stoked about this one—mainly because of Cora, my favourite character and Death as well. I was so curious about him and I knew from the first book that Cora and his story was going to come soon and they were going to be together because of Cora’s badass personality in the books.
I loved how strong willed and opinionated she was, without being mean and how she encouraged independence and determination in others and how she inspired others by her bravery, while being still logical and not so rash. She also seemed wise.
But in this?? Despite being all of the above and being so well-rehearsed and mature—she acted so rash ALWAYS!!!
Like yeah, once in a while a rash action is fine—realistic, but Cora acted rash throughout the book. Like I can’t even recall her doing anything logically or thinking first and then doing.
Her bravery? It was more like stupidity in this. I know when someone is so stupidly brave in the face of danger, but Cora was made so unrealistic in her bravery. I wanted her to be mature and brave, but while being smart and thorough and strong. She’s 25!!!
Cora was thoughtless, rash, annoying, stupid, lusty and immature throughout that I couldn’t even finish the ending chapters.
Now the romance.
Gosh. It was so weird. It felt forced on both sides. It was Insta-lust for Cora which I despised. This was supposed to be a high fantasy not romance. I wanted that slow-burn enemies to lovers with the perfect steam and sparks, the push and pull with the small details. All I got was Insta-lust and weirdness. They weren’t even enemies. Just people annoying each other non stop. Literally. He legit told her of the dangers and she happened to run literally into them. For what?? Nothing!!
Not even her never ending curiosity. For someone who berated not thinking to her friend, she sure abandoned it at first thought.
She never listened to him. Yes, I love when a heroine stands up for herself and doesn’t let anyone tell her what do to or control her, in this, he was legit warning her from serious dangers but she didn’t listen and then didn’t even learn.
I wouldn’t call their romance romance. It was Insta-lust and nothing else. And that was so forced. The amount of times Cora was thinking of her body’s response felt so forced like she was forcing us to know she was attracted to him. No feelings whatsoever. It was all body body and no feelings. At least not from her side. It did sometimes feel that he was getting feelings for her. There was no growth whatsoever. It was all tell and no show.
I want to rant and rant and rant about the disappointment this was. These both—I waited so much and for what??
It was not worth it at all. I wish this could be written again and I do believe it could be better.