DNF...lacklustre...initially, I wanted to discover the references of the ‘Fabulous Four’, the dynamics of Karina, Lauren, Amanda and Samantha. Collectively they represent a bond that defines friendship, independently they were insecure, vulnerable and lacked self-confidence, except maybe Lauren.
This failed to keep me engaged, I found myself easily distracted...a repetitive theme featuring different characters.
On their first date — Luke tried to wrap his mind around everything he had learned about Sam. He had never met anyone who was so blazingly confident in some aspects and yet so unsure of herself and insecure in others. As they pulled into Samantha’s driveway, he had been lost in his thoughts. The result of all that deep thinking, was that he had barely said a word. As Luke turned in his seat, he saw that she was already getting out of the passenger side door.
“Bye, thanks for a great night!” Samantha said quickly, and much too brightly, as she shut the door behind her and practically sprinted to the gate.
Luke, has finally regained his senses he jumped out and was at her side almost immediately, before she even got the gate open. “So that’s it, no good night kiss”?
Oh!” Samantha turned to him, eyes wide and voice infused with innocent surprise, “I didn’t know you wanted one.” He smiled. He loved how she was constantly saying unexpected things. “Well for future reference, just know...I always...want a kiss.“Oh, OK,” she said, looking up at him, her eyes widened.
“Can you get drunk off of a kiss?” she mumbled then, realizing she had spoken the sentiment aloud, clapped her hand over her mouth.
“Didn't mean to use your outside voice, huh?” He saw a bright red blush creeping up her cheeks, which was still clapped over her mouth, and she shook her head furiously.
“You crack me up Samantha! Why didn't anyone ever tell me you were funny?” She shrugged, “Nobody ever told ME.”
“Well, I'll tell you what, beautiful. If it is possible for a kiss to intoxicate someone, then that one definitely put me over the legal limit. Good night, Samantha. Thank you for one of the best nights of my life.”
...to be continued, maybe.