Disappointing and Poor Effort In Sequel
"SpecOps," Book 2 the sequel in the "Expeditionary Force," series, is a very disappointing and poor effort. The flaws of Book 1 (a book that was entertaining and a decent SciFi read), have totally sublimated the storyline and grown, making Book 2 barely readable.
The storyline has near future humanity, suddenly thrown into intergalactic conflict between various alien races of different technological levels, teetering on the razor's edge of extinction. The lead character, in alliance with a rescued, super intelligent AI, along with SpecOp forces from various earth militaries, take a captured alien star cruiser on an expedition to prevent warring aliens from returning to earth, find ancient artifacts from the ancient race of "Elders" that created the AI, and help it reconnect with the "Collective."
The AI has saved humanity and is damaged-missing memories, personality disorders and severely emotionally stunted. Herein lies one of the multitude of issues that make Book 2 so bad-sentence after sentence, paragraph after paragraph, page after page, of boring, sophomoric, snarky, stupid, unfunny dialogue between the lead character and the AI. It totally misses and made it difficult to fully read the book and not just stop. If the author had included in the crew, an artificial intelligence expert and a psychiatrist specializing in abnormal psychology, maybe it could be pulled off, maybe.
The formatting, proofreading, editing and writing are all amateurish, immature, unprofessional and not worthy of a public, commercial distribution. The cartoonish narrative, one dimensional characterizations, plodding pace, unending repetition, plot twists created by deception of the reader, and a lack of writing talent, suffocate any potential story merits. The list of examples are so long, that it would take too much time to enumerate all.
I liked Book 1, gave it a 4 star rating, with a caveat regarding flaws. The lazy, unprofessional, and inept execution in Book 2, makes it wholeheartedly NOT recommended. The eBook author should be embarrassed to publish such a garbage effort.