1. The leading female character was Mary Sue. To me, she was not just a typical Mary Sue. She was an extremist. She was good at almost everything and almost no one could beat her. Also, she was a beautiful lady that going to take your breath away. Because she had both beauty and talent and the brain, all the men she came across could not help but love her. I ended up rolling my eyes a lot whenever the book mentioned this.
2. The coincidence. In addition to being a beauty with amazing talents, the leading female character was also a lucky girl. Coincidences happen to her a lot and those coincidences were dropped down from the sky to benefit her. The universe truly loves the leading female character and I ended up rolling my eyes again.