So what if your life actually depended on likes and followers? No, like literally. That is essentially what’s happening in Influencer Island. How far would you go to be famous?
A bunch of top influencers are invited to an exclusive island and a further 10 influencers compete to be chosen to also a tend a mysterious competition to held on this island by a mysterious artist akin to Banksy. But everyone quickly realises, this competition is darker than it seems and it ties in to a larger mystery connecting everyone in this scheme!
I want to start with the plot. I feel like this plot was unique and so relevant to the culture we all live in as a society. It has so much potential, however, I feel like there was just way to much going on for a book this short, and because of that, a lot of the links felt forced together. There was the Carrie and Tuck plot and then Carrie and Angel, and Cal and his father and then the Wyatt James and his cult and yet somehow all of these seemingly different things come together. In a longer book where each of these plots could be fully fleshed out, I feel like that link would’ve been mind blowing!! But because this book was so short I was just left feeling like the connections were flimsy and forced. The short length of the book and the many plot lines ensured that it was very fast paced which is great but I think it would’ve been even better slightly slower paced to really flesh out the plot.
I also feel like the characters weren’t fully fleshed out. You got to know them, but not enough of who they are and background knowledge, that you cared about all the crazy things that were happening to them or even understood their motivations for making certain choices. It felt superficial. They were also way to calm throughout this book. They weren’t showing the emotion you’d expect them to be showing within the situations. I know this is meant to be a commentary on how desensitized we are and how for some drama and sensation we’d look the other way but I’m not talking about the viewers, but more so the investigators and the authorities.
Carries reason for going seems to change throughout the book which also through me off a bit and made me not fully like her character at times.
I believe that if we got to maybe hear more from Wyatt James a lot of the reasoning and insanity would’ve made more sense. It would still be crazy, but If you could see into the mind of the crazy person, understand more of what lead him to develop this weird cultish mindset and methodologies then maybe I’d understand why certain links were made. The bit we got at the end was not enough. It explained what happened to make him snap, but not why he developed this cultish style thinking with the weird rituals and stuff.
On to the writing! I enjoyed the podcast transcript way the book was written in. Its akin to Taylor Jenkins Reids, Daisy Jones and the Six and it makes the book impossible to put down as it was such an easy read! I read this on like 4 hours!
One thing that bugged me slightly is that this is a written transcript of an audio podcast. All of the clips from the podcast are noted as Audio from whatever source. Now, if I’m listening to a video of an event playing, I’m only hearing the words and sounds. I cant hear actions like someone waving, or someone drinking something. So why choose to put transcriptions of those actions into the book. Listeners of your podcast wouldn’t have seen that and couldn’t have heard it either. So how can the written transcript include things like[MODELS CASUALLY WAVE IN THE BACKGROUND]or [TAKES SIP OF BEER] when that isn’t something anyone listening to the video audio would’ve heard? I can understand including sounds like laughing into the written transcript as that’s something listeners would’ve heard but there’s even a part where they added [GOES TO GRAB CARRIE’S ASS. SHE SHOVES HIM AWAY.]into an apparent audio transcript of what played on the podcast. No one listening to the audio via podcast would’ve been able to know that was happening…why include it in the transcript? Does that mean that during the actual podcast you paused the recording, and said that to your listeners for context and then continued the recording? A lot of those entries make for sense for video transcripts. Now I know a lot of the source material for the podcast was videos, but this wasn’t transcripts of those videos, these were transcripts of the completed podcast containing audio from the videos. I understand that maybe these “action” entries can give context in certain situations, like stating someone stared off into the distance, but if you’re claiming this is an audio transcript of something listeners hears, then you can’t just include these when it doesn’t make sense to the material you’re claiming this is from.
Other than this little nitty gritty fact I really enjoyed the writing style!
Overall, I enjoyed a large majority of the book as well as the social commentary about our societies obsession with getting likes and being loved by strangers. I would’ve liked this mystery a lot more if the connections and plot twists felt more believable but still a fun short read!
SPOILERS AHEAD FOR CERTAIN THINGS COVERED ABOVE!!!!!!
*Spoiler Alert on the plot issue* You really expect me to believe that Wyatt arranged a murder island spectacle because of Tucks dying wish? And then you managed to ensure that none of the other contestants ever killed Carrie in her sleep so she could survive to become her true self again. Then at the same time, he says no but actually I did this island thing to bring Cal here so he can go through what his father went through…Wyatt James is truly twisted so I can understand his delusional thinking but the links all seemed so forced and unbelievable.
Then there’s the person who killed Tuck. I didn’t buy her reason for killing him at all! And then wanting to kill Carrie. Her backstory didn’t have enough girth to peg her not only as a sociopath but as someone that would go to such extremes over such frivolous issues.
*Spoilers ahead on everyone being to calm* Joss and Cal go to an art auction after which the big bad assistant tells Cal to get into a car but Joss isn’t allowed to follow. We then find out Cal has been whisked off to the island. Joss doesn’t know any of this but doesn’t freak out about Cal not showing up to work the next day or not being reachable. He merely says that he wonders what Wyatt has in store for him? Like what!! Surely you’d be contacting authorities telling them that he’s disappeared, he is a known murderer afterall!!
We’re also told that the morning that the contestants flew to the island the authorities started believing that this was essentially a murder island and yet we don’t even hear that they made an attempt at stopping the contestants. We are told that the contestants essentially knew this wasn’t a joke but still chose to go cause fame was more important but surely the authorities wouldn’t agree with that logic and would attempt to do something! Also the whole time the contestants were there. We don’t hear anything about the authorities attempting to rescue them. Trying to track the location from all the posts and streams, sending in teams? Nope essentially they just chilled and waited to see how it plays out.
Carries reason for going seems to change. Right at the beginning we were told she wanted to go to get exposure for her brothers disappearance. Later we find out she was sick of feeling less than and felt like a failure and therefore wanted to do more. She wanted to know what it would feel like to be Angel. Then during the competition it chances to I want to find my brother…?
Also the plot with The Eleven I still don’t fully get? How do they play into this? Was Wyatt their leader? Are they still out there? What do they do?