So, I wanted to like this book a lot. The characters were interesting, the plot set up was interesting, and the Main Love Interest was close to my type.
The pacing was horrible.
You meet Nova as a drifter that never really stays in one place, always on the move, and she has no real ties to anyone. Then, she gets taken by rotting men and beaten within an inch of her life. She awakens ice powers, and lycans save her. They take her to a second location and she just kind of nods her head to everything they say. There’s no mention of a normal human reaction of “I’m calling the police!” or any real distrust of these people, like most loners would. They exposition the hell out of her, which I understand, as there’s a lot of world-building to cover, but it was tedious to sit through. She immediately begins training with the lycans, and is acting like a best friend to the Main Love Interest (Darren) within a few hours of being around each other. I remember being rather frustrated that they were playfully shoving each other right after meeting each other when Nova was set up to be very standoffish, and she was surrounded by strangers, including him. I decided that was probably a symptom of smut books and kept reading. She quickly aligns herself with the lycans and becomes best friends with the Alpha’s sister very suddenly. She’s a very Alice-from-Twilight character so it makes sense that she would be very outgoing, but Nova didn’t really seem like the character to indulge on Aria’s consistent breaches of privacy like she does. Aria also forgets that one of the other pack members has kids (that’s why he fights so ferociously, lol) despite knowing him for years. There are a few other comments that should have been shown, not told. The rest of the plot violently switches between fighting for their lives and the fastest, emptiest romance plot I’ve ever read in a book (so far).
The book also sets up a love triangle that I thought would be interesting between Nova, Darren, and the Alpha. Love triangles are a little overdone but can be hot anyway. The love triangle goes nowhere. Nova kisses the Alpha to make Darren jealous and they immediately spiral into lust then love without any deep childhood stories or meaningful memories, and the Alpha is sidelined and ends up perfectly fine with it. They get in a huge fight at the celebratory dinner for their partnership and she says some really insensitive things out of nowhere (because being in danger somehow equals being a monster? I don’t see the neural link there) and Darren is rightfully hurt for all of one minute before it’s never mentioned again except for an “I’m sorry” and “it’s perfectly fine” a few chapters later, right before the proposal. The proposal between Darren and Nova is also impersonal, with no real connection between their relationship and the proposal. It’s his grandmother’s ring, whom she’s never met, and it’s right after she’s just gotten out of the hospital after the main climax, and he’s moved her into his apartment without any kind of conversation with her to see if she’d want that. It feels like the author just wanted to end the book and didn’t feel like exploring the plot at all anymore.
I really, really hate that I don’t like the writing. I love the world that was built. I liked some of the spicy scenes. I just didn’t feel anything for the characters and I think the pacing and lack of emotional moments really killed it for me. I’ve heard that the author’s shorter stories are better so it’s possible that longer stories just aren’t her thing yet. I hope she keeps practicing, genuinely. This book just wasn’t what it could have been.