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Hunt for Eden’s Star
A coming-of-age teen is thrown into a world of ancient secrets when he discovers a supernatural compass that protects a weapon of mass destruction. With the help of a diverse group of friends, he embarks on a global adventure, seeking the truth about his sister's death. He uncovers two clandestine, supernatural societies waging an epic, hidden war that threatens the future of civilization.
D. J. Williams's suspenseful, page-turning style whisks readers into a wildly exciting, supernatural adventure that grabs hold of the imagination and never lets go. As Jack races to collect ancient artifacts critical to the survival of the world, readers are transported to incredible locales across Asia, including the lush jungles of the Philippines and the high-energy streets of Hong Kong. Themes of addiction, revenge, faith, and friendship emerge as Jack battles literal and psychological demons, and even his own friends and family members, on his quest to thwart the forces of evil.
D. J. Williams's suspenseful, page-turning style whisks readers into a wildly exciting, supernatural adventure that grabs hold of the imagination and never lets go. As Jack races to collect ancient artifacts critical to the survival of the world, readers are transported to incredible locales across Asia, including the lush jungles of the Philippines and the high-energy streets of Hong Kong. Themes of addiction, revenge, faith, and friendship emerge as Jack battles literal and psychological demons, and even his own friends and family members, on his quest to thwart the forces of evil.
480 pages, Paperback
Published April 4, 2023
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D.J. Williams
9 books115 followersWith the DNA of a world traveler, D.J. Williams was born and raised in Hong Kong, igniting an adventurous spirit as he ventured into the jungles of the Amazon, the bush of Africa, and the slums of the Far East. His global travels submerged him in a myriad of cultures, providing a unique perspective that fuels his creativity.
As a fresh voice in mystery, suspense, and YA fantasy, his novels have climbed the charts ranking as high as #1 on Amazon Hot New Releases. His books The Auctioneer and Hunt For Eden’s Star have received stellar reviews from Kirkus Reviews, the most trusted voice in book discovery. Williams has also been featured in Publishers Weekly and Writer's Digest.
Currently living in Los Angeles, D.J. is always on the hunt for the next story as he prepares to launch the next novel in the Chase Hardeman series in 2024, as well as finishing the third book in the Beacon Hill series with tentative release of January 2025.
Follow D.J. on Instagram (djwilliamsbooks) for the latest news.
As a fresh voice in mystery, suspense, and YA fantasy, his novels have climbed the charts ranking as high as #1 on Amazon Hot New Releases. His books The Auctioneer and Hunt For Eden’s Star have received stellar reviews from Kirkus Reviews, the most trusted voice in book discovery. Williams has also been featured in Publishers Weekly and Writer's Digest.
Currently living in Los Angeles, D.J. is always on the hunt for the next story as he prepares to launch the next novel in the Chase Hardeman series in 2024, as well as finishing the third book in the Beacon Hill series with tentative release of January 2025.
Follow D.J. on Instagram (djwilliamsbooks) for the latest news.
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April 6, 2023
Actual rating: 2.5 stars ⭐️
I feel like the first half of this book would’ve been a solid 4 stars for me but what lowered my rating significantly was that instead of the plot climaxing for me as the story progressed it felt very anticlimactic🥲.
I struggled almost throughout the whole story, trying to figure out where the characters were. Maybe it’s because I’m not too familiar with Hong Kong or it’s neighboring cities (heck, I’m not too familiar with China/Japan in general) which made it really hard for me to follow along with the story, and visualize the settings in my mind. Similarly, there were a lot of references to Asian culture in general, but I didn’t feel like they were explained well for people who aren’t familiar with the culture to follow along easily.
I pushed through, however, because I was interested in where the plot was going. Unfortunately, it fell flat for me towards the end. I guess because I was just so confused with where the characters were most of the time and what was going on. The line between the natural and the supernatural was crossed so quickly and suddenly so often that I felt disoriented with the setting and the story. I am so sad because I really wanted to love this story, but I can’t truly say I did.
I feel like the first half of this book would’ve been a solid 4 stars for me but what lowered my rating significantly was that instead of the plot climaxing for me as the story progressed it felt very anticlimactic🥲.
I struggled almost throughout the whole story, trying to figure out where the characters were. Maybe it’s because I’m not too familiar with Hong Kong or it’s neighboring cities (heck, I’m not too familiar with China/Japan in general) which made it really hard for me to follow along with the story, and visualize the settings in my mind. Similarly, there were a lot of references to Asian culture in general, but I didn’t feel like they were explained well for people who aren’t familiar with the culture to follow along easily.
I pushed through, however, because I was interested in where the plot was going. Unfortunately, it fell flat for me towards the end. I guess because I was just so confused with where the characters were most of the time and what was going on. The line between the natural and the supernatural was crossed so quickly and suddenly so often that I felt disoriented with the setting and the story. I am so sad because I really wanted to love this story, but I can’t truly say I did.
January 15, 2026
Actual rating: 3.5 stars
I received a review copy of this novel from the publisher, Tyndale. All thoughts and opinions are entirely my own.
Hunt for Eden’s Star kicks off a trilogy of Christian young adult fantastical thrillers, the Beacon Hill series. The story is largely set in Hong Kong and the Philippines, with a boarding school setting and a host of ancient secrets that lend the tale a slight air of dark academia. Our main character is Jack Reynolds, recently returned to his boarding school, Beacon Hill, after his sister’s unsolved murder. The two were incredibly close, bonding together in a united front against their evil, power-hungry father. In the wake of her death, Jack is determined to find answers. The hunt for those answers leads him into secret societies and age-old conspiracies. He’ll have to face his demons—both real and psychological—if he wants to do his part to thwart the evil looming on the horizon.
The greatest strength of this story is its really strong sense of place, both in the school of Beacon Hill itself and in its Hong Kong setting. Williams excels at descriptive writing. Every setting—not to mention the food—is tangibly described. It truly felt as though I could have walked through the pages straight into the busy streets of Hong Kong or the jungles of the Philippines. I also thought the lore he wove into his world was fascinating. We don’t have magic here, per se, but we do have ramped up supernatural gifts and artifacts enhanced by those gifts. And I loved the spiritual aspect of the story.
There were some wonderful themes here. We see the importance of having and embracing the freedom to ask big questions, like why does God—or Elyon—allow horrors to befall those who love and serve Him? The importance of acknowledging the tension between those questions and bold faith, and how imperative it is to choose faith even when it costs you everything, are both beautifully demonstrated.
All of these elements should have resulted in a new favorite series, but this first installment fell a bit flat for me. In my opinion, the novel’s greatest weakness lies in its pacing. Everything important that happens feels rushed through and hazy, while so much time is given to setting and description that the story runs the risk of feeling bloated. And I never felt an emotional connection to anyone or anything, which I think is at least partially due to that hazy feel to the scenes that were meant to feel tense and climactic. I found the story objectively interesting while never feeling subjectively moved by it.
Hunt for Eden’s Star is a promising if imperfect beginning to an intriguing series. While I don’t feel compelled to pick up the next installment immediately, I do someday want to learn how the story ends.
I received a review copy of this novel from the publisher, Tyndale. All thoughts and opinions are entirely my own.
Hunt for Eden’s Star kicks off a trilogy of Christian young adult fantastical thrillers, the Beacon Hill series. The story is largely set in Hong Kong and the Philippines, with a boarding school setting and a host of ancient secrets that lend the tale a slight air of dark academia. Our main character is Jack Reynolds, recently returned to his boarding school, Beacon Hill, after his sister’s unsolved murder. The two were incredibly close, bonding together in a united front against their evil, power-hungry father. In the wake of her death, Jack is determined to find answers. The hunt for those answers leads him into secret societies and age-old conspiracies. He’ll have to face his demons—both real and psychological—if he wants to do his part to thwart the evil looming on the horizon.
”Let my peace rule in your heart as a lion. May your eyes be enlightened as an eagle to the inheritance and hope of my calling. I will walk with you from the mountaintops to the valleys, and you will never be alone if you put your trust in me.”
The greatest strength of this story is its really strong sense of place, both in the school of Beacon Hill itself and in its Hong Kong setting. Williams excels at descriptive writing. Every setting—not to mention the food—is tangibly described. It truly felt as though I could have walked through the pages straight into the busy streets of Hong Kong or the jungles of the Philippines. I also thought the lore he wove into his world was fascinating. We don’t have magic here, per se, but we do have ramped up supernatural gifts and artifacts enhanced by those gifts. And I loved the spiritual aspect of the story.
”We are believers of Elyon who inherited gifts once granted to ancient Cherub. Gifts passed down through the centuries to followers who accepted an oath of sacrifice to end all wars--before those wars destroy civilization. We are called to protect the earth and all within its realm.”
There were some wonderful themes here. We see the importance of having and embracing the freedom to ask big questions, like why does God—or Elyon—allow horrors to befall those who love and serve Him? The importance of acknowledging the tension between those questions and bold faith, and how imperative it is to choose faith even when it costs you everything, are both beautifully demonstrated.
”Gifts become burdens if we hold them too tight... You must hold your gifts with an open hand to reveal Elyon's power.”
All of these elements should have resulted in a new favorite series, but this first installment fell a bit flat for me. In my opinion, the novel’s greatest weakness lies in its pacing. Everything important that happens feels rushed through and hazy, while so much time is given to setting and description that the story runs the risk of feeling bloated. And I never felt an emotional connection to anyone or anything, which I think is at least partially due to that hazy feel to the scenes that were meant to feel tense and climactic. I found the story objectively interesting while never feeling subjectively moved by it.
”Each of us has a unique destiny, no matter how young we are. And each will face tragedy that leaves us questioning out faith. That is part of our journey.”
Hunt for Eden’s Star is a promising if imperfect beginning to an intriguing series. While I don’t feel compelled to pick up the next installment immediately, I do someday want to learn how the story ends.
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March 31, 2023Thank you to Tyndale House Publishing for the ARC copy.
DNF'd
I will not rate this book as I did not finish it. I tried, I really tried, but I got to chapter 30 and just had to stop; which is odd since I very rarely DNF a book. It was difficult to get into and felt dragged out. I could already sense who was going to be an issue and who would switch sides right from the beginning. I flicked through the pages and found out I was right.
It was promoted to me as a story that explores the struggles that teens face with their perception of religion, but this felt more like trying to preach why Christianity and God is the way and telling teens to have faith. I feel that I would have been more receptive if it was actually an exploration that considered both sides and allowed me to reach my own conclusions and form ideas, rather than being told how to feel.
In regards to the plot, I feel that it was a good concept, but I didn't like the execution. I'm struggling to pinpoint my issue with the plot, but I feel that it may have been down to the characters. I didn't feel any connection to the characters whatsoever, which meant I didn't really care for the plot.
Overall, this book just wasn't for me.
DNF'd
I will not rate this book as I did not finish it. I tried, I really tried, but I got to chapter 30 and just had to stop; which is odd since I very rarely DNF a book. It was difficult to get into and felt dragged out. I could already sense who was going to be an issue and who would switch sides right from the beginning. I flicked through the pages and found out I was right.
It was promoted to me as a story that explores the struggles that teens face with their perception of religion, but this felt more like trying to preach why Christianity and God is the way and telling teens to have faith. I feel that I would have been more receptive if it was actually an exploration that considered both sides and allowed me to reach my own conclusions and form ideas, rather than being told how to feel.
In regards to the plot, I feel that it was a good concept, but I didn't like the execution. I'm struggling to pinpoint my issue with the plot, but I feel that it may have been down to the characters. I didn't feel any connection to the characters whatsoever, which meant I didn't really care for the plot.
Overall, this book just wasn't for me.
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July 15, 2023DNF @ 18%
I really tried to give this book a chance, but I just couldn’t get into it. I had a hard time getting invested in what was happening. I also didn’t realize that this book was categorized as Christian fiction, which is totally on me, but it’s not a genre that I’m interested in. I do feel like this book will be appealing to some people, but it’s just not for me.
thank you to goodreads for sending me an ecopy of this book.
I really tried to give this book a chance, but I just couldn’t get into it. I had a hard time getting invested in what was happening. I also didn’t realize that this book was categorized as Christian fiction, which is totally on me, but it’s not a genre that I’m interested in. I do feel like this book will be appealing to some people, but it’s just not for me.
thank you to goodreads for sending me an ecopy of this book.
March 1, 2025
D.J. Williams’ Hunt for Eden’s Star, the thrilling opening installment of The Guardian Novels, is a pulse-pounding blend of YA fantasy and action-adventure. Combining ancient secrets, supernatural powers, and high-stakes conflict, this coming-of-age story offers readers a gripping tale that’s as emotionally resonant as it is action-packed.
At the center of the narrative is Jack, an ordinary teen whose world is upended when he discovers a supernatural artifact linked to a deadly weapon of mass destruction. Jack’s journey from grieving brother to reluctant hero is both compelling and relatable. As he searches for the truth about his sister’s death, he is thrust into a hidden war between two secretive supernatural societies, with the fate of the world hanging in the balance.
Williams excels at creating vivid international settings, whisking readers from the dense jungles of the Philippines to the neon-lit streets of Hong Kong. The lush, cinematic backdrops heighten the story’s stakes, immersing readers in a world teetering on the brink of chaos. The diverse ensemble of allies and enemies Jack encounters along the way adds richness to the narrative, while the bonds of friendship and family are tested in surprising and impactful ways.
The pacing is relentless, with danger lurking at every turn and new revelations keeping the reader hooked. Themes of addiction, revenge, and faith add emotional depth, while the exploration of friendship and loyalty grounds the story in relatable struggles. Jack’s internal battle against self-doubt and grief makes him a multidimensional protagonist who grows stronger with each challenge he faces.
Williams weaves ancient mythology seamlessly into a modern context, creating a world brimming with hidden power and mystery. The artifact-driven quest, coupled with the moral dilemmas Jack faces, elevates the story beyond a standard action-adventure into a tale with heart and meaning.
Hunt for Eden’s Star will captivate fans of fantasy-adventure series like James Dashner’s The Maze Runner and Eoin Colfer’s Artemis Fowl. With its dynamic protagonist, global scope, and thought-provoking themes, this novel is the perfect kickoff to an epic series that promises even more excitement and intrigue.
At the center of the narrative is Jack, an ordinary teen whose world is upended when he discovers a supernatural artifact linked to a deadly weapon of mass destruction. Jack’s journey from grieving brother to reluctant hero is both compelling and relatable. As he searches for the truth about his sister’s death, he is thrust into a hidden war between two secretive supernatural societies, with the fate of the world hanging in the balance.
Williams excels at creating vivid international settings, whisking readers from the dense jungles of the Philippines to the neon-lit streets of Hong Kong. The lush, cinematic backdrops heighten the story’s stakes, immersing readers in a world teetering on the brink of chaos. The diverse ensemble of allies and enemies Jack encounters along the way adds richness to the narrative, while the bonds of friendship and family are tested in surprising and impactful ways.
The pacing is relentless, with danger lurking at every turn and new revelations keeping the reader hooked. Themes of addiction, revenge, and faith add emotional depth, while the exploration of friendship and loyalty grounds the story in relatable struggles. Jack’s internal battle against self-doubt and grief makes him a multidimensional protagonist who grows stronger with each challenge he faces.
Williams weaves ancient mythology seamlessly into a modern context, creating a world brimming with hidden power and mystery. The artifact-driven quest, coupled with the moral dilemmas Jack faces, elevates the story beyond a standard action-adventure into a tale with heart and meaning.
Hunt for Eden’s Star will captivate fans of fantasy-adventure series like James Dashner’s The Maze Runner and Eoin Colfer’s Artemis Fowl. With its dynamic protagonist, global scope, and thought-provoking themes, this novel is the perfect kickoff to an epic series that promises even more excitement and intrigue.
August 22, 2023
This exciting narrative will definitely appeal to the teen scene, I believe. There's lots of action involved, twists, turns, secrets, fright, flight and fight, and so much more. As this chronicle is Christian faith-based, Elyon features in the lives of some of the characters. I like that the author has given good simulation of spiritual warfare enabling the abstract to become more concrete in the readers' mind. Some of the characters doubt the existence and care of Elyon furthering the believable aura eminating from the pages. Other added lure is the historical aspect with references to the Battle of Hong Kong and associated persons from the past. That the setting is an Asian one is an extra clincher for me liking this story, with action mostly in and around Hong Kong and some in the Philippines. The fact that the author spent many of his growing up years in these areas is gratifiying, adding authenticity to his work that he knows what he's talking about.
I hope to meet Jack, Tim, Vince, Emma, Amina and Will, and other Beacon Hill students in subsequent sequel because I'm left wondering when and where they'll show up next and what will happen with Eden's Star. Curiosity is killing this 'cat'.
I give this book a 5 Star clap.
~Eunice C., Reviewer/Blogger~
February 2023
Disclaimer: This is my honest opinion based on the complimentary review copy sent by NetGalley and the publisher
I hope to meet Jack, Tim, Vince, Emma, Amina and Will, and other Beacon Hill students in subsequent sequel because I'm left wondering when and where they'll show up next and what will happen with Eden's Star. Curiosity is killing this 'cat'.
I give this book a 5 Star clap.
~Eunice C., Reviewer/Blogger~
February 2023
Disclaimer: This is my honest opinion based on the complimentary review copy sent by NetGalley and the publisher
February 11, 2023
Seventeen year old Jack Reynolds is the son of Addison and younger brother of Rachel. His mother Gabriela apparently disappeared after his birth and is presumed to be dead. For most of his life, Jack has been a boarding student at the prestigious Beacon Hill School in Hong Kong, where Rachel had also been educated before leaving to work in the Philippines. His roommates and best friends are Will Fargher, son of the school’s Headmaster, Tim Lloyd, and Vince Tobias. Following Rachel’s death, Jack is drawn into a supernatural warfare between the Merikh, an evil group trying to take over the world, and the Cherub, followers of Elyon (God).
Jack learns that his father is associated with the Merikh while his late mother and sister both worked with the Cherub, and Jack has been chosen to take up Gabriela and Rachel’s work. He finds that he has a diverse group of several helpers along the way but also makes some powerful enemies. Whom can Jack trust? Do any of his associates turn out to be traitors? And will Jack even survive? I call this book a “supernatural thriller.” As Jack moves from the streets of Hong Kong to the jungles of the Philippines, the plot definitely will capture and hold the reader’s attention. And there is a spiritual undertone dealing with such themes as addiction, revenge, faith, friendship, and even sex trafficking. This is Book 1 of the “Beacon Hill Series,” and as the conclusion leaves one hanging, I for one will eagerly await the sequel.
Jack learns that his father is associated with the Merikh while his late mother and sister both worked with the Cherub, and Jack has been chosen to take up Gabriela and Rachel’s work. He finds that he has a diverse group of several helpers along the way but also makes some powerful enemies. Whom can Jack trust? Do any of his associates turn out to be traitors? And will Jack even survive? I call this book a “supernatural thriller.” As Jack moves from the streets of Hong Kong to the jungles of the Philippines, the plot definitely will capture and hold the reader’s attention. And there is a spiritual undertone dealing with such themes as addiction, revenge, faith, friendship, and even sex trafficking. This is Book 1 of the “Beacon Hill Series,” and as the conclusion leaves one hanging, I for one will eagerly await the sequel.
December 8, 2024
This captivating global storyline, Search for Eden's Star, captivated me from the very beginning. This novel includes likeable characters and serious dangers. I liked how this fantasy action-adventure story combines a compelling premise, outstanding characters, and an extraordinary plot for a satisfying, enjoyable read.
Thrilling and imaginative, D. J. Williams's writing transports readers to a voyage they won’t soon forget. As Jack runs to gather unusual relics required for life on Earth, readers see the Philippines' thick forests and busy streets of Hong Kong. We gain an understanding about addiction, bitterness, religion, and brotherhood as Jack confronts both heart and outside physical challenges concerning virtue. The author's international travels are evident in his books. I really enjoyed that aspect of this book.
The first book in the Beacon Hill series is this one. It's a great book to read with a group too.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I requested and received a copy of this book from the publisher and NetGalley. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Nora St. Laurent
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Thrilling and imaginative, D. J. Williams's writing transports readers to a voyage they won’t soon forget. As Jack runs to gather unusual relics required for life on Earth, readers see the Philippines' thick forests and busy streets of Hong Kong. We gain an understanding about addiction, bitterness, religion, and brotherhood as Jack confronts both heart and outside physical challenges concerning virtue. The author's international travels are evident in his books. I really enjoyed that aspect of this book.
The first book in the Beacon Hill series is this one. It's a great book to read with a group too.
Disclosure of Material Connection: I requested and received a copy of this book from the publisher and NetGalley. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Nora St. Laurent
TBCN: Where Book Fun Begins!
The Book Club Network blog https://psalm516.blogspot.com/
June 10, 2025
Looking for a sophisticated, fantastical, thrilling YA series? Look no further than D.J. William’s Beacon Hill series. Beginning with HUNT FOR EDEN’S STAR, I was pulled into a supernatural fantasy that took me to international locales and cultures—all with a strong, yet organic faith message. From the Far East to Jungles to mountain tops, I zipped around at neck-breaking speed! Great book for young adults and adults with a young heart!
THE STORY: An intrepid, globe-trotting teen, Jack Reynolds and a motley group of friends live in a world where choices have epic consequences. The tale of a teen who is thrown into a world of ancient secrets when he discovers a supernatural artifact that protects a weapon of mass destruction. With the help of a diverse group of friends, he embarks on a global adventure, seeking the truth about his sister’s death. He uncovers two clandestine, supernatural societies waging an epic, hidden war that threatens the future of civilization.
As Jack races to collect ancient artifacts critical to the survival of the world, readers are transported to incredible international locales across Asia, including the lush jungles of the Philippines and the high-energy streets of Hong Kong.
Highly recommended for readers looking for the battles of addiction, revenge, faith, and friendship. Also stories with literal and psychological demons, set in international locales. 4.5 Stars
I received a copy of this book from Tyndale for my honest review.
THE STORY: An intrepid, globe-trotting teen, Jack Reynolds and a motley group of friends live in a world where choices have epic consequences. The tale of a teen who is thrown into a world of ancient secrets when he discovers a supernatural artifact that protects a weapon of mass destruction. With the help of a diverse group of friends, he embarks on a global adventure, seeking the truth about his sister’s death. He uncovers two clandestine, supernatural societies waging an epic, hidden war that threatens the future of civilization.
As Jack races to collect ancient artifacts critical to the survival of the world, readers are transported to incredible international locales across Asia, including the lush jungles of the Philippines and the high-energy streets of Hong Kong.
Highly recommended for readers looking for the battles of addiction, revenge, faith, and friendship. Also stories with literal and psychological demons, set in international locales. 4.5 Stars
I received a copy of this book from Tyndale for my honest review.
September 26, 2024
This young adult novel is sort of a cross between a Christian fantasy and a save the world thriller. The world building in this novel is not so critical as it seems to take place in current Hong Kong and surrounding areas. Jack is an interesting hero in that he is afraid of almost everything, from going down into a tunnel to climbing a rope ladder up into a tree. He has a group of friends who turn into a very supportive group. There is a spiritual aspect to the novel, a belief in a supreme being.
The plot development was a bit difficult for me to follow. About a third of the way into the book, Jack says of his ongoing adventures, “I'm totally lost.” (1628/4467) I knew how he felt because I was lost too. There were so many turns in the plot and so many unusual locations, I began to get distracted. It is a long book at nearly 500 pages. I think the actual content could have better been made into two shorter novels. I just do not feel the complexity of the plot made for an engaging novel of that length.
This is a good novel for young adult readers who are ready to tackle a long novel that may require good attention to keep track of all the plot elements.
I received a complimentary egalley of this book from the publisher. My comments are an independent and honest review.
The plot development was a bit difficult for me to follow. About a third of the way into the book, Jack says of his ongoing adventures, “I'm totally lost.” (1628/4467) I knew how he felt because I was lost too. There were so many turns in the plot and so many unusual locations, I began to get distracted. It is a long book at nearly 500 pages. I think the actual content could have better been made into two shorter novels. I just do not feel the complexity of the plot made for an engaging novel of that length.
This is a good novel for young adult readers who are ready to tackle a long novel that may require good attention to keep track of all the plot elements.
I received a complimentary egalley of this book from the publisher. My comments are an independent and honest review.
July 1, 2023
Hunt for Eden's Star is a blend of treasure hunting (e.g. National Treasure or Raiders of the Lost Ark) with the magical teen setting (aka Harry Potter) that takes the reader around parts of Asia.
Jack is a teen attending Beacon Hill, a private school in Hong Kong. He returns to school after losing his sister Rachel but he has so many questions as to why she died and who was responsible.
With his friends and some of hers, he finds himself in a world where the supernatural is everpresent and the fate of the world rests in his hands. He goes on the treasure hunt for the lost relic called 'Eden's Star', yet finds the quest only opens the door to a larger journey.
It took me a little while to get hooked on the story. Yes, there are similarities to other tales. The setup of Beacon Hill is very much like an Asian version of Hogwarts, only this school isn't magical. However, some of the students do have a connection to the supernatural.
The title is not a standalone in the sense that the story is not wrapped up at the end. I'd definitely consider reading the next one to see where the author takes Jack and his friends.
Jack is a teen attending Beacon Hill, a private school in Hong Kong. He returns to school after losing his sister Rachel but he has so many questions as to why she died and who was responsible.
With his friends and some of hers, he finds himself in a world where the supernatural is everpresent and the fate of the world rests in his hands. He goes on the treasure hunt for the lost relic called 'Eden's Star', yet finds the quest only opens the door to a larger journey.
It took me a little while to get hooked on the story. Yes, there are similarities to other tales. The setup of Beacon Hill is very much like an Asian version of Hogwarts, only this school isn't magical. However, some of the students do have a connection to the supernatural.
The title is not a standalone in the sense that the story is not wrapped up at the end. I'd definitely consider reading the next one to see where the author takes Jack and his friends.
March 8, 2024
Dnf at pg170. One of the first books I bought in 2024 and one of the first dnfs. I cannot get over how inexperienced the writing style feels. Williams refers to stuff that the reader doesn't even know about and continues on as if we do. The school is obviously inspired by Harry Potter, the houses being water downed versions of Hufflepuff, Gryffindor, Slytherin, and Ravenclaw, but the sorting is even more stupid as students can jip the tree by saying the correct thing. There's even a knock off Draco Malfoy. And I get being inspired by Harry Potter, it's an amazing book series written by an amazing woman, and when the inspiration is done right and integrated into the story well, I feel as though you can't ever spot the inspiration.
This was not that.
The religion in this book is so obviously inspired by Christianity. Except everytime it's mentioned it feels like its mocking Christianity. As a Christian, it's terrible to see. We are already mocked in media, I don't need to read a book about it.
Nothing in this book is original. Dnf. 2 stars.
This was not that.
The religion in this book is so obviously inspired by Christianity. Except everytime it's mentioned it feels like its mocking Christianity. As a Christian, it's terrible to see. We are already mocked in media, I don't need to read a book about it.
Nothing in this book is original. Dnf. 2 stars.
April 4, 2023
I've started to write this review so many times, and each time it just feels like I'm not doing this book justice. The imagery is so vivid, and while I'm not going to give any spoilers, somehow Williams manages to just rip your heart out with that opening. (Seriously, who does that?!) Honestly, I was hooked from that opening scene. I just couldn't stop reading, and when I did have to take a break to deal with real life, I was eager to get back to reading ASAP. The characters are believable with great depth, and I loved getting to know Jack and his friends as they travel around the world in an attempt to save it. Everyone, teens or older, who enjoys heart-racing supernatural suspense is going to fall in love with this one. I can't wait to see what the other books in the series have in store!
April 17, 2023
A brilliantly written fictional, supernatural, adventure!
Absolutely loved this book! First off make sure you have plenty of time to read because once you get into this book it is so hard to put down. This is one of those stories that the more you read the more it pulls you into its epic adventure. The vivid descriptions of the places, people, and events intensify as supernatural situations start to unfold. Foreign places both real and imagined are described in such intricate detail that pictures in your mind will form as if being there in person. Good vs evil characters, and those on the line who you will need to determine where their loyalties lie. I would highly recommend this book to anyone from teens to older adults, it’s just that good! My only problem now is waiting for the next book in the series to arrive...
Absolutely loved this book! First off make sure you have plenty of time to read because once you get into this book it is so hard to put down. This is one of those stories that the more you read the more it pulls you into its epic adventure. The vivid descriptions of the places, people, and events intensify as supernatural situations start to unfold. Foreign places both real and imagined are described in such intricate detail that pictures in your mind will form as if being there in person. Good vs evil characters, and those on the line who you will need to determine where their loyalties lie. I would highly recommend this book to anyone from teens to older adults, it’s just that good! My only problem now is waiting for the next book in the series to arrive...
July 30, 2023
HUNT FOR EDEN’S STAR
By DJ Williams
I enjoyed this fast paced supernatural adventure set in a boarding school in Kowloon, Hong Kong. The protagonist is Jack who is determined to find out the truth about his sister Rachel’s murder, against the better judgement of his very wealthy father Addison. In his quest he unearth’s a religious group and some powerful artifacts.
The story is delivered in a high octane action adventure – short chapters kept the story moving and made this a fun read. There is a lot going on, and I try to just enjoy the ride as Williams writing entertains and delivers one action scene to the next.
I look forward to the sequel and see where jack’s adventures takes the readers next.
By DJ Williams
I enjoyed this fast paced supernatural adventure set in a boarding school in Kowloon, Hong Kong. The protagonist is Jack who is determined to find out the truth about his sister Rachel’s murder, against the better judgement of his very wealthy father Addison. In his quest he unearth’s a religious group and some powerful artifacts.
The story is delivered in a high octane action adventure – short chapters kept the story moving and made this a fun read. There is a lot going on, and I try to just enjoy the ride as Williams writing entertains and delivers one action scene to the next.
I look forward to the sequel and see where jack’s adventures takes the readers next.
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May 7, 2023DNF
I tried so hard with this book. Really tried, even took a break and came back to it. it just didn't hook me. I wanted to like it, as the premise sounded interesting and I liked that it included a lot of Asian culture in a futuristic world, and am I the only one who thought that the school and their houses, harkened reminders of Harry Potter?
I made it about 30% and found myself confused and disengaged. I think that this book just wasn't a good fit for me, and I just didn't have it in me to push through. I wanted so badly to like it as I am a huge advocate for their being more Christian book options for teens.
I tried so hard with this book. Really tried, even took a break and came back to it. it just didn't hook me. I wanted to like it, as the premise sounded interesting and I liked that it included a lot of Asian culture in a futuristic world, and am I the only one who thought that the school and their houses, harkened reminders of Harry Potter?
I made it about 30% and found myself confused and disengaged. I think that this book just wasn't a good fit for me, and I just didn't have it in me to push through. I wanted so badly to like it as I am a huge advocate for their being more Christian book options for teens.
July 23, 2023
Hunt for Eden's Star is story of grief, friendship and self-discovery. After the shocking death of his sister Rachel, Jack feels adrift and alone in the world. Only his three best friends keep him from sliding into the world of addiction. Rachel sends him a message from the afterworld that sets Jack on course to battle evil and to discover who he is on the inside. Jack must rely on friends old and new as well as learn to believe in himself to help bring about change that will have lasting consequences. I enjoyed this story and the author took us on a thrilling journey that had plot twists that were unexpected. I am eager to find out what happens next in this series.
April 24, 2023
I definitely enjoyed Hunt for Eden’s Star. It was fast paced and had lots of action. If you like National Treasure and supernatural elements, this is a great book to read!
The story involves Jack, a teen whose sister has been killed and he vows to find out who killed her. The setting of the book has Jack travelling all over Asia, and into a supernatural world as well. Jack and his friends from his school work together to solve the mystery surrounding his sister's death, and the secret society that she seemed to be a part of. Jack ultimately has to make a decision to either continue down the dark path in life he had been on or follow after his sister and choose to do what is right. The book does end on a cliffhanger as it is the first book in the series.
I did find the story at times to be difficult to follow with multiple character introductions and many different settings, but as the story goes along these elements come to make more sense and set up the evil vs good idea of the story.
I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
I received the EARC from NetGalley and Tyndale House & Wander in exchange for my honest review.
The story involves Jack, a teen whose sister has been killed and he vows to find out who killed her. The setting of the book has Jack travelling all over Asia, and into a supernatural world as well. Jack and his friends from his school work together to solve the mystery surrounding his sister's death, and the secret society that she seemed to be a part of. Jack ultimately has to make a decision to either continue down the dark path in life he had been on or follow after his sister and choose to do what is right. The book does end on a cliffhanger as it is the first book in the series.
I did find the story at times to be difficult to follow with multiple character introductions and many different settings, but as the story goes along these elements come to make more sense and set up the evil vs good idea of the story.
I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
I received the EARC from NetGalley and Tyndale House & Wander in exchange for my honest review.
January 4, 2025
The author gathers some elements and scenes that remind us of some of our favorites, from boarding school, a group of teens solving a mystery, to an action adventure of a chosen one doing the right thing and saving everyone. It's compelling and hard to put down, fast-paced, and with some dark moments. A lot happens, and it's always moving forward, grief, fighting human trafficking, and dealing with an ancient artifact while trusting no one but his friends to see everyone safe. It's great for thrillers/adventure readers. It reads like a movie people usually binge.
April 17, 2023
This book held me captive from the start. The characters are interesting and grow in maturity and closeness as the story progresses. There are many tense moments that keep you on the edge of your seat, while trying to guess what will happen next. It’s fantasy, adventure, good vs evil, and suspense all wrapped up together in an amazing creative story. I truly cannot wait for the next book to come out!!!
January 4, 2024
Starting off the new year with a bang and an instant favorite. Unless the sequel somehow beats it. I absolutely adore the fantasy supernatural element in present day. What really got me was the use of the name Elyon, super special to my heart. There were some points that it felt like a John wick movie, and it really kept me going. Why couldn't some of this happen to me when I was a teen?
Can't wait for the sequel
Can't wait for the sequel
December 11, 2022
Readers who love the supernatural element in stories will enjoy this book! Wow! Very different read for me, but overall good. Some of it was a little unbelievable, but it is fiction! :)
Thank you the publisher and NetGalley for the advance e-copy of this book. All opinions expressed are entirely my own.
Thank you the publisher and NetGalley for the advance e-copy of this book. All opinions expressed are entirely my own.
August 28, 2023
Wonderfully written tale of a young man forced into manhood after the death of his sister. Along with the realization that she had entrusted a valued item to an unlikely ally shortly before her death, sending him on a quest to complete a mission, he couldn't have guessed existed. This labyrinth of villains, heroes, and places leaves you on edge, wondering what the next twist will be.
December 26, 2024
This book was fantastic! The subtle undercurrent of faith imagery and struggles woven through a captivating plot and character arc was well orchestrated. D.J. tells a tale that is unique and yet familiar enough to picture myself in it. I look forward to reading more.
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August 7, 2024DNF on Chapter 29
The cover made me pick this book up. The story blurb sounded great and The story was so good in the beginning..but Sadly it became a DNF
The cover made me pick this book up. The story blurb sounded great and The story was so good in the beginning..but Sadly it became a DNF
April 14, 2025
Really a 3.5. The faith content was great, but some of the fantastical elements just didn’t mesh well with the underlying Christian aspects to me.
March 3, 2023
Jack was living his best life at the boarding school Beacon Hill in Hong Kong. After the death of his sister, he has been selected to continue the quest his sister started, to find Eden's Star. He has been chosen to find the artifact which will help in defeating the evil forces which include his father.
D.J. Williams has offered a fantastical tale which draws the reader quickly into the world of the supernatural. The world that he has built is realistic and written where the reader can imagine being in this created world. This quick and entertaining read is the beginning of a series which readers of fantasy who love good verses evil will enjoy. The characters are well written and the story is fast paced with many twists and turns.
Readers looking for a new Christian faith title will identify with many aspects of the story foreshadowing Elyon as God. The story certainly highlights the spiritual warfare between good and evil, Cherub and the Merikh. The ending leaves the reader anticipating the next title in this new series.
I received an ARC ebook from NetGalley and the publisher, Tyndale House in exchange for an honest review.
D.J. Williams has offered a fantastical tale which draws the reader quickly into the world of the supernatural. The world that he has built is realistic and written where the reader can imagine being in this created world. This quick and entertaining read is the beginning of a series which readers of fantasy who love good verses evil will enjoy. The characters are well written and the story is fast paced with many twists and turns.
Readers looking for a new Christian faith title will identify with many aspects of the story foreshadowing Elyon as God. The story certainly highlights the spiritual warfare between good and evil, Cherub and the Merikh. The ending leaves the reader anticipating the next title in this new series.
I received an ARC ebook from NetGalley and the publisher, Tyndale House in exchange for an honest review.
May 28, 2024
2.5 stars rounded up
This book took me months to get through. I think mostly because it was difficult to keep track of characters and locations from chapter to chapter. My ADHD brain refused to ever anything at all.
Ultimately not a bad read and I will definitely be reading the sequel.
This book took me months to get through. I think mostly because it was difficult to keep track of characters and locations from chapter to chapter. My ADHD brain refused to ever anything at all.
Ultimately not a bad read and I will definitely be reading the sequel.
October 2, 2025
It’s so great when you understand the book so much more when you’ve read it a second time. I remember being so confused when I read it originally.
Overall, this book has a great balance of storyline and beliefs in God, unlike most books that tend to write it in a cringey sort of manner. The humor in this book is peak, and I love all of the characters and their development.
This book has its own sense of mystery, and you can never expect what could happen next. The whole setting was also so amazing and well thought out, and I felt immersed.
So excited to read the last book in the series whenever I get my hands on it!
Overall, this book has a great balance of storyline and beliefs in God, unlike most books that tend to write it in a cringey sort of manner. The humor in this book is peak, and I love all of the characters and their development.
This book has its own sense of mystery, and you can never expect what could happen next. The whole setting was also so amazing and well thought out, and I felt immersed.
So excited to read the last book in the series whenever I get my hands on it!
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