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Kingfall: Book One of the Neverborne Series
ENTER THE WORLD OF PENTHARA … A world where the human and elven races of the realm are born into specific elemental descendancies, and each of the five seasons correlate to one of the five elements themselves.Kingfall, Book One centralizes around the human kingdom of Barredom and the country to the north, Aggedon, long ago overturned by the qindrid clans – those that were once human heretics, now transcended into grey-skinned, element-enhanced versions of their former selves.When the entire border army of Aggedon vanishes overnight, the obsessive General of Barredom orders the Westwalker, the infamous hunter of hunters, to investigate the disappearance. But the actions of men may test the resolve of the outsider who was long ago forced under the cursed transformation of being qindrid himself.In the capital of Barredom, the new cycle of Kingfall proves worthy of its name when the savage elvan warlord of the Glace Isles is slain during an ambush. His formerly indomitable war party is condemned to the Frostdale Deeps, the domain of the Royal Inquisitor Honorah Bayn. Her task is to extract information from the enigmatic prisoners, but her prejudice desire for revenge, and her lust for suffering is set to thwart the aspirations of her unwitting son and daughter.Meanwhile, the enthralling leader of the northern qindrid has surrendered herself into the custody of the elusive king of Barredom. It is up to the renounced prince of Barredom, Ondrew Roth, and his motley group of spurned knights to escort her on a clandestine mission beneath enemy territory, through the underground cavernscape of an elvan race thought defeated long ago.
- GenresFantasy
382 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 27, 2020
13 people are currently reading
48 people want to read
About the author
Ezekiel Eversand
4 books10 followersEzekiel Eversand was born in Southeast Texas, where he again resides after the global pandemic fatefully brought him back home from his exploits living in Las Vegas where he first published Kingfall. He is happily married to his beautiful wife Stephanie, his biggest supporter and best friend. He has been an avid lover of the fantasy and science fiction genre since he was a child. Telling the saga of the Neverborne Series and sharing the world of Penthara are his greatest passions in life.
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August 15, 2020
There are fantasy writers; there are Epic Fantasy writers, and then there's the stellar few, like Tolkien and Steven Erikson, who build an entire universe in spectacular detail just to share a side story that has little or nothing whatsoever to do with the main story, but you cannot imagine reading the story and not knowing the side story because of the skill with which it's relayed. Mr. Eversand's spectacular tale is right up there in the stratosphere of extraordinary story telling alongside such masters.
Character development in this sweeping saga is remarkable and the dialog between characters scores off the charts as well. Smiles and Norah quip and banter with the best of 'em, leading me to re-read again and again just for the sheer enjoyment of it. There are heroes to love and villains to despise, and some very intriguing sorts that you love to despise and despise that you love!
But this story has much more than amazing characters and dialog worthy of Henry Cavil or Robert Downey Jr., oh yes! Page one sends you careening into the tale through riveting action scenes that allow you to finally draw breath around Chapter Five! I Could Not Put This Book Down! There are 449 pages and each one is a sumptuous delight; a nerve-wracking edge-of-your-seat thrill; and a delicious temptation that keeps you turning pages, faster and faster and faster!
Now, don't let me spoil it for you, but be prepared. Prepared to be awed, swept up and away, and unable to extricate yourself from the mastery of fantasy Mr. Eversand flawlessly displays chapter after intoxicating chapter. But draw breath. Step back and admire...and give yourself plenty of time to devour the last 1/4 of the book because I assure you the story will latch on and not let go.
If you want a true fantasy epic, something you can not only sink your teeth into, but utterly immerse yourself in and become entirely entangled, Kingfall is waiting for you.
Character development in this sweeping saga is remarkable and the dialog between characters scores off the charts as well. Smiles and Norah quip and banter with the best of 'em, leading me to re-read again and again just for the sheer enjoyment of it. There are heroes to love and villains to despise, and some very intriguing sorts that you love to despise and despise that you love!
But this story has much more than amazing characters and dialog worthy of Henry Cavil or Robert Downey Jr., oh yes! Page one sends you careening into the tale through riveting action scenes that allow you to finally draw breath around Chapter Five! I Could Not Put This Book Down! There are 449 pages and each one is a sumptuous delight; a nerve-wracking edge-of-your-seat thrill; and a delicious temptation that keeps you turning pages, faster and faster and faster!
Now, don't let me spoil it for you, but be prepared. Prepared to be awed, swept up and away, and unable to extricate yourself from the mastery of fantasy Mr. Eversand flawlessly displays chapter after intoxicating chapter. But draw breath. Step back and admire...and give yourself plenty of time to devour the last 1/4 of the book because I assure you the story will latch on and not let go.
If you want a true fantasy epic, something you can not only sink your teeth into, but utterly immerse yourself in and become entirely entangled, Kingfall is waiting for you.
August 26, 2020
'Kingfall (The Neverborne Series Book 1) by Ezekiel Eversand' is a dark, epic fantasy novel. With a sweeping tale of The human kingdom of Barredom which has been at war with the qindrid territories of Aggedon ever since the Qindrid Curse gripped the land. One night when border Army of Aggedon vanishes, the leaders of Barredom gets sceptical and orders westwalker, hunters of hunters, to investigate the reason behind the sudden disappearance. What unfolds in this novel is bloodshed, action-packed sequences to win the waged war.
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This novel filled with characters from heroes to villains to sidekicks is a sheer joy to read. I have read a few fantasy books but have watched a lot of movies in this genre, and I must say it gave me an experience of watching one. Smiles and Norah quip are characters to enjoy.
I liked how the author has worked on the details of the book and designed the prophecies that follow in the story. The world-building and setting have been an output of deep thinking, and farsightedness which the author has a gift of.
The ending of the novel brings excitement. Do you remember the hype you had for GOT's last episode? Yup excitement like that. But, don't worry, the ending won't disappoint you.
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What I would suggest you is to make a character list while reading this novel, otherwise, you might find yourself lost in it. Writing and narration are flawless, and you slowly get the hang of it. The book is of more than 400 plus pages, so requires a patient reader to pick this book up.
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Overall, the book is a great debut and gives a powerful start to the Neverbone series.
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This novel filled with characters from heroes to villains to sidekicks is a sheer joy to read. I have read a few fantasy books but have watched a lot of movies in this genre, and I must say it gave me an experience of watching one. Smiles and Norah quip are characters to enjoy.
I liked how the author has worked on the details of the book and designed the prophecies that follow in the story. The world-building and setting have been an output of deep thinking, and farsightedness which the author has a gift of.
The ending of the novel brings excitement. Do you remember the hype you had for GOT's last episode? Yup excitement like that. But, don't worry, the ending won't disappoint you.
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What I would suggest you is to make a character list while reading this novel, otherwise, you might find yourself lost in it. Writing and narration are flawless, and you slowly get the hang of it. The book is of more than 400 plus pages, so requires a patient reader to pick this book up.
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Overall, the book is a great debut and gives a powerful start to the Neverbone series.
August 23, 2025
my hands are still shaking & my mind still racing. This is AMAZING 📚👌🏻 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ epic high fantasy that hits 👊🏼 @Author Ezekiel Eversand did an incredible job giving such a creative story with depth & created a beautiful world. The characters are highlighted in such a fantastic way showing broad facets of each leading the reader to an adoration for each & understanding of what drives them. If you want high fantasy, if you want elite world building, if you want an epic saga, to be transported to another world, get this 📚
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January 18, 2026
The first book of the Neverborne series titled Kingfall by indie author Ezekiel Eversand definitely exceeded my expectations. As someone who has only dipped their toes into fantasy and never fully committed to the genre, I was surprised by how quickly and deeply I was pulled into this world. From the very beginning, the story feels carefully written, layered, and intentional, and it never loses pace.
Eversand’s writing is incredibly intelligent and descriptive without feeling overwhelming. Every character feels real vivid and distinct, and you can clearly picture them in your mind without the descriptions ever slowing the story down. The multi-POV format adds so much depth, letting you see how different choices, loyalties, and consequences collide in ways that feel brutal and realistic. This is not a story where characters feel safe—because Mr.Eversand is absolutely not afraid to kill off major characters , which raises the stakes and keeps you constantly on edge.
I don’t want to spoil anything because this is truly a story you should experience for yourself, but if you enjoy adult epic dark fantasy, immersive world-building, and morally complex characters, this book will absolutely deliver. It’s dark, gory, emotionally intense, and full of cliffhangers that make it almost impossible to put down. The tension never really lets up, and there were multiple moments where my heart was racing.
This is planned to be a 10-book series, and after finishing the first one, I am going to immediately jump into book two. That being said, this is NOT a light or fast read. You need to make time for it. Every detail matters, and this is a book that rewards you for slowing down and fully absorbing the world, the magic, and the politics at play. The magic system in particular feels completely unique—nothing like I’ve read, and it’s clear he built it from the ground up.
Overall, Neverborne is complex, intense, and incredibly well written. It’s unlike anything I’ve read before, and I mean that in the best possible way. If you’re willing to commit the time and energy, I guarantee you’ll be hooked within the first chapter
Eversand’s writing is incredibly intelligent and descriptive without feeling overwhelming. Every character feels real vivid and distinct, and you can clearly picture them in your mind without the descriptions ever slowing the story down. The multi-POV format adds so much depth, letting you see how different choices, loyalties, and consequences collide in ways that feel brutal and realistic. This is not a story where characters feel safe—because Mr.Eversand is absolutely not afraid to kill off major characters , which raises the stakes and keeps you constantly on edge.
I don’t want to spoil anything because this is truly a story you should experience for yourself, but if you enjoy adult epic dark fantasy, immersive world-building, and morally complex characters, this book will absolutely deliver. It’s dark, gory, emotionally intense, and full of cliffhangers that make it almost impossible to put down. The tension never really lets up, and there were multiple moments where my heart was racing.
This is planned to be a 10-book series, and after finishing the first one, I am going to immediately jump into book two. That being said, this is NOT a light or fast read. You need to make time for it. Every detail matters, and this is a book that rewards you for slowing down and fully absorbing the world, the magic, and the politics at play. The magic system in particular feels completely unique—nothing like I’ve read, and it’s clear he built it from the ground up.
Overall, Neverborne is complex, intense, and incredibly well written. It’s unlike anything I’ve read before, and I mean that in the best possible way. If you’re willing to commit the time and energy, I guarantee you’ll be hooked within the first chapter
January 15, 2026
⭐️ BOOK REVIEW — Kingfall by Ezekiel Eversand
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars)
This book is dark fantasy done RIGHT — brutal, atmospheric, and dripping with power, ambition, and inevitable downfall. It’s heavy, intense, and completely consuming.
Vibes:
• dark epic fantasy
• rise → corruption → consequences
• power, betrayal, and moral decay
• political tension and war-ready stakes
• “the crown always demands blood” energy
What It Feels Like:
This is a story about what happens after power is taken — and the cost of holding it. Every choice feels weighted, every alliance fragile, every victory temporary. The tension never lets up, and the world feels harsh, unforgiving, and very real.
What I Loved:
• the gritty, immersive worldbuilding
• characters driven by ambition, fear, and survival
• morally grey decisions with no clean outcomes
• the slow unraveling of power and control
• stakes that feel massive and personal at the same time
Final Vibe:
Dark, relentless, and unforgettable. Kingfall is not about heroes — it’s about consequence, corruption, and the price of a throne. If you love fantasy that’s brutal, layered, and unafraid to let characters fall hard, this one absolutely delivers. I loved it and highly recommend it.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars)
This book is dark fantasy done RIGHT — brutal, atmospheric, and dripping with power, ambition, and inevitable downfall. It’s heavy, intense, and completely consuming.
Vibes:
• dark epic fantasy
• rise → corruption → consequences
• power, betrayal, and moral decay
• political tension and war-ready stakes
• “the crown always demands blood” energy
What It Feels Like:
This is a story about what happens after power is taken — and the cost of holding it. Every choice feels weighted, every alliance fragile, every victory temporary. The tension never lets up, and the world feels harsh, unforgiving, and very real.
What I Loved:
• the gritty, immersive worldbuilding
• characters driven by ambition, fear, and survival
• morally grey decisions with no clean outcomes
• the slow unraveling of power and control
• stakes that feel massive and personal at the same time
Final Vibe:
Dark, relentless, and unforgettable. Kingfall is not about heroes — it’s about consequence, corruption, and the price of a throne. If you love fantasy that’s brutal, layered, and unafraid to let characters fall hard, this one absolutely delivers. I loved it and highly recommend it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 25, 2020
Kingfall by the author Ezekiel Eversand is the first book of the Neverborne Series. Aggedon was one of the most northern territories of Penthara. Aggedonians and Barredish has great cultural differences but they both were northmen. Aggedon and Barredom people were in war since the Qindrid curse gripped the land.
But one night, entire Aggedonian army vanished mysteriously. General of Barredom asked Westwalker, hunter to investigate about other's disappearances. Every human and qindrid knew about the bounty hunter Westwalker. Grab a copy of this book to unveil the suspense yourself..
I really appreciate author's vivid imagination in creating the world of Penthara. The map given at the beginning of the book helped in understanding this world better. Cover photo is so eye catchy that it will attract reader's attention.
I binge read this and it was worth my time. I recommend this book to epic fantasy readers.
Really curious to read Book 2 of The Neverborne Series.
But one night, entire Aggedonian army vanished mysteriously. General of Barredom asked Westwalker, hunter to investigate about other's disappearances. Every human and qindrid knew about the bounty hunter Westwalker. Grab a copy of this book to unveil the suspense yourself..
I really appreciate author's vivid imagination in creating the world of Penthara. The map given at the beginning of the book helped in understanding this world better. Cover photo is so eye catchy that it will attract reader's attention.
I binge read this and it was worth my time. I recommend this book to epic fantasy readers.
Really curious to read Book 2 of The Neverborne Series.
April 27, 2025
This High fantasy epic is truly exceptional, with amazing character development, a rich and captivating world with TONS of mythos and some great action in the midst of all of it. Eversand handles the multiple POVs well, giving each character their own distinct personalities, motivations and histories. The slow unraveling of the complex plot is done incredibly well, as the the mystery just keeps getting bigger and bigger until the final reveal, which will leave you begging for more. The intensity of the battle scenes as WELL as the political dialogue is done with a ferocity that is truly intense, whether it be a sparring of swords and arrows or words and machinations. Many of the minor characters really shine too, given distinct personalities that really make the world feel real. Excited about more in this world and highly recommend this great fantasy!
August 14, 2025
I had no idea what to really expect going into this world and on its face it certainly looks intimidating; however, Eversand is a masterclass of worldbuilding. Once the reader grows accustomed to the new names, new world, new way of life, and everything clicks, the world and story within truly starts to show its depth.
This books is an intriguing and fascinating build up to something larger, and the last 100-150 pages will grip you and not let you go. Needless to say, I enjoyed this book a lot and look forward to continuing with the series.
This books is an intriguing and fascinating build up to something larger, and the last 100-150 pages will grip you and not let you go. Needless to say, I enjoyed this book a lot and look forward to continuing with the series.
June 28, 2024
This book is a really good read if you are someone who enjoys epic fantasy novels. Action packed, lots of hidden details and very descriptive! The first half of the book seems slower due to character and world building but half way It picks up entirely. Keep in mind this is the first book of a TEN BOOK series so buckle up, it’s going to be a wild ride! I already have book two and I can’t wait to start It!
November 11, 2025
This book is very ambitious, and deep. I enjoyed the immersive feeling I get from Ezekiel’s writing and I plan on reading the rest of the series. Would recommend to High fantasy lovers that don’t like things handed to you. There is a lot to learn. It takes dedication to grasp the the magnitude of this world.
March 30, 2025
Genuinely enjoyed this one! Great world building, multi-faceted characters, and an unpredictable story! Great blend of fantasy and political intrigue! If you’re looking for a dark fantasy where alliances seem uneasy and you’re not sure who the real enemy is this is for you.
June 9, 2025
It was well-written, but the story wasn't anything to write home about. It took me a while to finish it as I didn't find myself going for it. But it was entertaining while I did read it. The world-building is well done, but the characters seemed a little flat to me...that could just be me.
August 24, 2025
Wow! Loved this book, the world, the characters, the political chess match.. phenomenal!
Lovers of epic fantasy, this is a world to dive into!
Lovers of epic fantasy, this is a world to dive into!
March 30, 2025
Fantastic!
Genuinely enjoyed this one! Great world building, multi-faceted characters, and an unpredictable story! Great blend of fantasy and political intrigue! If you’re looking for a dark fantasy where alliances seem uneasy and you’re not sure who the real enemy is this is for you.
Genuinely enjoyed this one! Great world building, multi-faceted characters, and an unpredictable story! Great blend of fantasy and political intrigue! If you’re looking for a dark fantasy where alliances seem uneasy and you’re not sure who the real enemy is this is for you.
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