Fandom: Harry Potter Relationship: Thorfinn Rowle/Hermione Granger -------------------------------------------------- Paroled to preserve their magical bloodlines, Thorfinn Rowle and Antonin Dolohov are just trying to get on with their lives. A drunken one night stand between Hermione and Thorfinn, coupled with Dolohov's obsession with the curly haired witch, lead them toward a series of unexpected, but not entirely unfortunate events.
Like the writers other works, this has such great potential, but stalls toward the end of what’s posted. I love the concept so much I wish it was a completed fic. Loved Hermione and Finn and her friendship with Harry. Antonin was my favorite. Unfortunately, in the 15 chapters posted, Hermione was still being stubborn and it seemed like there was little movement in the plot. Same could be said for the writers other works, but it’s understandable. She posts what she’s already written (which is usually amazing) but then stalls- chapters get shorter- she takes breaks to write other stories and forgets about this one- I think there’s like a 1.5 year gap between postings. In this case, Hermione started getting annoying. For example, she agrees to be Finn’s girlfriend, they nap, she wakes up and yells at him that’s she can’t get pregnant (an issue I feel like they had already hashed out) and then runs away for 3 days. I wish the writers would outline before posting, but I keep coming back for her unusual fics and it is free. Hard to rate an unfinished fic but 2 stars for being a potential 4 star read if fully flushed out and completed.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.