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Okay, But Try Not to Murder Anyone #5
Okay, But Try Not to Murder Anyone 5
My team and I are chipping away at the Black Market Group one magical artifact at a time, and this time, we’ve set our sights on a ring.
A ring that is making its way to Toronto.
So we’re going international, but the wild wilderness of Canada might be more than we bargained for.
A ring that is making its way to Toronto.
So we’re going international, but the wild wilderness of Canada might be more than we bargained for.
289 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 1, 2022
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Eric Vall
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Displaying 1 - 21 of 21 reviews
July 10, 2022
It is a good series about a man and his increasing harem, that received superpowers in an eventful night.
In this book he will have to hunt down a woman to find another artifact. The search will take them into the Canadian woods, we’re they have to solve some riddles and discover some new aspects to the world they live in.
The book involves a harem concept so their some scenes that are not common but in some aspects the author should have edited some lines out of the book. Overall it is a good read.
In this book he will have to hunt down a woman to find another artifact. The search will take them into the Canadian woods, we’re they have to solve some riddles and discover some new aspects to the world they live in.
The book involves a harem concept so their some scenes that are not common but in some aspects the author should have edited some lines out of the book. Overall it is a good read.
July 4, 2022
A thrilling read from start to finish!
Absolutely stunning and thrilling read that I couldn't tear myself away from.
With a new lead on another artifact the team is in for a trip up north, where they'll encounter new forces, natural and supernatural stand in their way... Along with a stunningly beautiful woman who will stop at nothing to reclaim the artifact.
Can't wait for book 6 and the confrontation that is about to happen!
Absolutely stunning and thrilling read that I couldn't tear myself away from.
With a new lead on another artifact the team is in for a trip up north, where they'll encounter new forces, natural and supernatural stand in their way... Along with a stunningly beautiful woman who will stop at nothing to reclaim the artifact.
Can't wait for book 6 and the confrontation that is about to happen!
October 31, 2023
The MC is a Jerk
The story has gotten bogged down and repetitive. His relationships make no sense and he has the focus of a prepubescent 10 year old. Beautiful accomplished women would settle for an immature dork much less be willing to share him... Not to mention the tired and even offensive red man falling for white man's lies storyline - repeatedly! Sorry, but this one falls way short.
The story has gotten bogged down and repetitive. His relationships make no sense and he has the focus of a prepubescent 10 year old. Beautiful accomplished women would settle for an immature dork much less be willing to share him... Not to mention the tired and even offensive red man falling for white man's lies storyline - repeatedly! Sorry, but this one falls way short.
July 23, 2022
Well, another fine addition to this series, however, I'm really morally torn
July 3, 2022
Nemesis and enemies
This was one action packed and rather mysterious addition to this delightful saga! This story is unpredictable in the best ways and will leave you devouring the pages, I eagerly await the next one!
This was one action packed and rather mysterious addition to this delightful saga! This story is unpredictable in the best ways and will leave you devouring the pages, I eagerly await the next one!
July 5, 2022
Loved it
More travel and some power upgrades and new supernaturals. Some new characters got introduced that seem interesting, should see more of them later. Liked finding out a little more about the artifacts. Looking forward to the next book.
More travel and some power upgrades and new supernaturals. Some new characters got introduced that seem interesting, should see more of them later. Liked finding out a little more about the artifacts. Looking forward to the next book.
July 11, 2022
The game is afoot.
Still leaving bodies, still finding ancient artifacts, and still banging the ladies. Jonah and crew at it again, north of the border, with a twist. Again EV has wrapped us all in this adventure. It looks to be a helluva ride. Come on down and see the sights.
Still leaving bodies, still finding ancient artifacts, and still banging the ladies. Jonah and crew at it again, north of the border, with a twist. Again EV has wrapped us all in this adventure. It looks to be a helluva ride. Come on down and see the sights.
July 22, 2022
I found this book to be interesting in the search for the artifact. The players remain the same and I have formed the opinion that the character, Mary is somewhat a twit. Over all it is a book that hold ones interest and is fast paced.
July 27, 2022
Didn't like the writing
I liked the first book, but subsequent books are repetitious and annoying. The constant references to the "quality of beauty" of everyone was totally unnecessary and I say again VERY Annoying.
I liked the first book, but subsequent books are repetitious and annoying. The constant references to the "quality of beauty" of everyone was totally unnecessary and I say again VERY Annoying.
November 17, 2022
Interesting continuation
Very enjoyable continuation to the series. I really enjoyed the description of the lake areas in Canada. The interweaving of multiple ancient peoples is great.
Very enjoyable continuation to the series. I really enjoyed the description of the lake areas in Canada. The interweaving of multiple ancient peoples is great.
July 5, 2022
Love it
Wish there was more to this one the story was getting interesting. More Really wish to learn about sloane more
Wish there was more to this one the story was getting interesting. More Really wish to learn about sloane more
July 5, 2022
Fantastic!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
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July 7, 2022New villain/but is she bad?
Now Appius Smith! A rival villain and everyone is after the hero. Shapeshifters now added to the mix. The 1st one is still a mystery!
Now Appius Smith! A rival villain and everyone is after the hero. Shapeshifters now added to the mix. The 1st one is still a mystery!
July 10, 2022
Very good, added in new challenges. Waiting on next one.
July 16, 2022
Good read
This is a good book to get. It is a good series. If you want a good men's series get it.
This is a good book to get. It is a good series. If you want a good men's series get it.
July 28, 2022
love this series
Enjoying this series as always. I am fascinated by the speed that Vall writes with and the skill he has. Light read, not for children
Enjoying this series as always. I am fascinated by the speed that Vall writes with and the skill he has. Light read, not for children
August 5, 2022
Good book
Great story, I like the direction the author is going.. Great work. He is doing great in all his series.
Great story, I like the direction the author is going.. Great work. He is doing great in all his series.
August 5, 2022
Hard charging
Like the characters and the series plot but think the harem scenes are getting longer than the story. Ready for number six
Like the characters and the series plot but think the harem scenes are getting longer than the story. Ready for number six
August 10, 2022
Great story
I am enjoying this action pack adventure of Jonas and his haream of hot women as he chase down the ancient artfacts and how they themselves.
I am enjoying this action pack adventure of Jonas and his haream of hot women as he chase down the ancient artfacts and how they themselves.
March 2, 2023
Good Read
As usual I absolutely enjoyed this book. This series has been thoroughly enjoyable. I sincerely hope you enjoy it to.
As usual I absolutely enjoyed this book. This series has been thoroughly enjoyable. I sincerely hope you enjoy it to.
April 18, 2025
Read the book
I dont think it gets motoreffekt trillingar then this!! Allways a cliffhanger in The end, its awesome!
So read it!!!
I dont think it gets motoreffekt trillingar then this!! Allways a cliffhanger in The end, its awesome!
So read it!!!
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