* I won this novel in a Goodreads giveaway.
So... I tried and tried and tried to read this novel because I wanted to give a real review after winning this book in a giveaway and because most of the other reviews have few details and seem a bit copy and paste.
I got to chapter 8 before giving up and DNF. But... I DNF for very specific reasons that I go into below, and not because of poor editing or sloppy writing. If you like a certain style of writing, you might like this book. So.... My main problem was I wasn't able to get into the story because I had no idea who the main character was, and no sense of the setting for some scenes. Every chapter had a new character, was someplace either overly described or under-described, and it never seemed to settle into a coherent story or even a main character's point of view. After a while, it got confusing and frustrating and I finally gave up.
For example, the first chapter seems to be told by an escort/prostitute named Sunny who's in a bowling alley. She's at the bar, drinking with Howard Hughes and two twin Chinese cowgirls are dancing on the bar. Suddenly, she has her legs in the air and is getting penetrated by the barrel of a gun, while reminiscing about how she decided to become a prostitute. And that's where chapter one ends.
Chapter 2 is about an aging mobster sitting alone in a coffee shop who gets approached by some random guy who we later find out is a car dealer. The car dealer immediately starts talking crap and making threats to the mobster, but there's no backstory to explain why or anything that's happening.
Chapter 3 opens in a ballroom. You think at first the character's POV is Moe, the aging gangster, but it's actually a new character called Harry Lake.
In chapter 4, you have no idea which character's POV you're in, and the dialogue is very confusing. I had no idea what was going on, and who was telling the story, and it seemed like the author was head-hopping between multiple characters' POVs. On the last page of the chapter, you find out it's another new character, but since he's just been killed, you won't be hearing from him again.
Chapter 5 is back to Harry
Chapter 6 is about a new character named Freddy, but then you realize it's actually Harry again, but the POV is both Freddy's and Harry's. It's seriously confusing.
Chapter 7 is Moe and Harry, but you're never really sure whose POV you're in.
Chapter 8 is about Moe and a new character called Vernon. It's a little clearer that it's in Moe's POV, but just barely.
It's at this point the novel just became too confusing, and frustrating, and I gave up. I couldn't settle into a sense of setting in my mind, the scenes were all over the place, and I couldn't connect with any of the characters. It's also the point where I realized it was intentional, and that this is the author's writing style. It's like reading a book version of a movie script that's describing what's happening, what the actors are thinking, and what the setting should be and feel like.
As another reviewer said, it's like a book version of a Quentin Tarantino film. It's confusing, it jumps around a lot, and as a reader, you feel discombobulated. It works in the movies, but for me, I need to get into a character's head to get into the story.
If you like this sort of storytelling, this book might be for you. The first 8 chapters were a well done
version of this style, and I can see how some people might enjoy it.